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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: usaonly

Lovely OS Aru it is had all in one masti, romantic it hard to see thes on TV. Look like you are in good mood all update of your story are Superb today dear.I wish you can continue the next part of this story in the next trade eager to see what will come up from Raman at night time.👏👏

Awww.. Thank you so much Jum 🤗..
hehehe .. It was one of the days that all fell in the right place and the outcome .. Even I felt good yaar 😃.. But this is an OS .. I can add more , but na stopping it here 😳.. Thank you again
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: arunabhi

You asked for this Diwali OS and how can I not write from my heart 😃..
I am surprised you were awake for Quantum physics 😆.. I would have slept so much and am capable of that .. Awww.. Poor you .. Very first day of class you are kept busy 🥱..
Heheheh.. What do you expect from this hot punjabi munda 😳😳.. Koi mauka nahi chodta show mein bhi ☺️☺️..
Seriously yaar Biwi needs some training in dealing with her pagal punjaban 😳😳..
Glad you loved it so much ... I am happy ki I did not disappoint you 😳..
Aaja jhappi meri taraf se bhi 🤗🤗..
It was my pleasure 😳😳.. Love you behna 🤗

hehe...i knw quantum is sleepy
but kk sir is only teacher jinki samajh aati hai😆
each of our senior has warned us from frst day only ki koi bhi lecture chorna but kk sir ka miss mat karna...vo lgalo😆😳
obvsly...how can u disappoint me...you always cheer me up with your updates
yeahh...she needs some trng to handle this pagal punjabi
ab kal hi dekho...she said shagun ke samne bola yeh vo blah...fight ho gyi thi to kya..jakar ek kiss mr deti and everything would hav been perfect
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: arunabhi

Thank you so much Akshu 🤗..
You very well know we are all this crazy DIVANis and ISHRAs ..
I have no words to thank you enough !! Smiling so much ..
Thank you again Akshu .. IshRaRu ❤️


ya we are very very crazy about DIVANis and ISHRAs...
how much you u write intense romance, we will enjoy it😆😆 with blushing☺️
Edited by Akshatha19 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: avni_19

Aruuu... OMGGG! Whattt a post! Im floored completely! So beautiful and lovely romantic. Had a grin n blush plastered on my face throughout reading this One Shot!

Every single thing I loved.. right from morning romance to anklets and feet kiss, phir tissue exchange, Cheeck kiss, Liplock, Hugs and ISHRARU HUG! Woowww!
Raman and Ishu fullon bindass and romantic! How cute!

Awesum awesome update! Ankii babess.. Thankuu for challenging My bestie Aru!Do write more! Im waiting! :-D

Sunniii 🤗 so glad to see your comment here and even happier to know that you enjoyed this OS... When IshRa romance who does not blush ! They spare no one ...
Just wrote everything possible in one go .. It was an OS and wanted to accommodate everything. IshRa ne hamaein paagal kardiya hai 😳 😳 ...
Thanks a lot babe !!! Haan will write more once I am back from my break !!! Sorry to keep you waiting till then 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

*Reminiscing IshRa Moments: Raman helping Ishu during fracture*

Hi IshRaians!

The success of this thread shows how excited we are to celebrate IshRa Anniversary and reminisce IshRa moments. The same excitement compelled me to take up the challenge put forth by shavi2311. Take a bow shavi2311 for the amazing concept.

I have tried my best to incorporate all conditions of this writing challenge in my OS. But I have made one change i.e. I have replaced hand fracture with leg fracture. I hope shavi2311 and other readers don't have a problem with it.

So here's the update. I hope you will have a smile throughout.

IshRa OS: Mujhe Haq Hai

"Ishita"


Every member of Bhalla household present in the living room rolled their eyes on hearing the call from a specific room from upstairs.


"Lo shuru hogaya iska din" Toshiji announced.


"Aap to aise bol rahe ho Mumma jaise humein to pata hi nahi ke Bhai ka din Ishita' ke naam se shuru hotha hai" Simmi poked Ishita while saying. Ishita bit her lip and blushed profusedly.


"Ab to iski itni adat hogayi hai ke lagta hai hamara din Mata Rani ke jaap se nahi, Ishita ke jaap se shuru hothi hai" Bhallaji joined the teasing spree.


"Papaji aap bhi?" Ishita was baffled that her Father-in-law had also joined them. Bhallaji laughed whole heartedly with the rest of the Bhalla clan.

"Ishita...Ishita...Kahan ho yaar?"

"Bhabi isse pehle ki Bhai ka gussa hum sab par barse please upar chali jao." Romi said folding his hands. "Warna sabse pehla bali ka bakra to mai hi banunga" he added dramatically. Ishita pulled his ear.


"Romi bhai sahi keh rahe hain. Aur thodi der hogayi na to bhai chillayenge Ishita...Ishita...Kahan mar gayi yaar" Rinki said imitating Raman's tone.

"Ishita...Ishita...Kahan margayi yaar?"

Everyone in the living room started laughing out loud and Ishita ran upstairs feeling embarrassed.

IshRa Room

"Kya hai? Itna chilla kyun rahe ho?"


"Mere kapde nahi mil rahe"


"Ye lo" she took out his clothes from the wardrobe and handed it to him. "Aur kuch?"


"Mera belt?"


"Hmm" she was ready with it even before he asked. "Aur?"


"Mera wallet?"


"Ye raha...Aur kuch?"


"Mera file?"


"lo...", "Hogaya ya aur kuch baki hai?"


"Jab patha hai ke mujhe in sab cheezon ki zarurat padti ha to nikal kar samne nahi rakh sakti thi kya? Bekar me subah subah chilla kar energy waste hogayi meri"


"Achha ji? Agar cheezein apke samne rakhti to bhi aap chillate aur mujhe upar ana padta. Isiliye nahi rakhe" she stated the obvious as this was a daily routine for her.


"Zyada bhav khane ki zarurat nahi" he tried to cover up on being caught.


"Washroom ka floor wipe kiya?"


"Nahi" he bit his tongue.


"Patha tha aap nahi karoge. Kitni baar bola hai ke wipe karke aya karo. Kabhi koi phisal gaya to?" she demanded with hands on hips.


"Ye kya har subah washroom wipe karo ka lecture dethi rehti ho. PM ki Swachh Bharat abhiyan join kar liya hai kya? Aur Aaj tak koi phisla hai kya? Nahi na? To phir bekar reasons lekar mujhe mat sunao" he rubbished her words.


"Kisi din agar koi phisla na to aap ki khair nahi Ravan Kumar" she said pointing a finger towards him.


"Dekhlenge" he intertwined his finger with hers and challenged.


"Swachh Bharat abhiyan ki volunteer jao aur washroom wipe karo. Mujhe kapde badalne hain"


She tucked her pallu near the waist, flared her nostrils in anger and walked into the washroom stomping her feet.


Raman smiled at her back looking at her antics. "Madrasan chidti hai to maza atha hai. Jaan bujhke wipe nahi karta take subah subah tumhara ye avtar dekhne ko mile. Ab kya karein JKR ko na dekho to din bura guzarta hai" he mumbled.

"Ayyammaa"


He heard a scream from the washroom after few minutes. "Madrasan gir to nahi gayi?" he hurried to wards the washroom but stopped in his tracks "Zarur natak kar rahi hogi mujhe chidhane keliye. Mai bhi Ravan Kumar hun. Itni asani se Jhansi ki Rani ke jhanse me nahi anewala" he thought and slowed down his pace and peeped into the washroom.


"Ayyo" Ishita was sitting on the wet floor holding one leg and screaming in pain.


"Nautanki! Abhi sikhata hun tujhe" Raman thought and went closer.


"Arrey ye kya hogaya. Dekhun to kuch zyada nuksan to nahi hua?"


"Patha nahi..."she stopped in middle as she saw Raman walking across her and looking for something.


"Kya dhoond rahe ho Raman?" she asked confused.


"Dekh raha hunk e kitne tiles toote hain. Itne mehenge tiles hain. Maintenance wale sponsor karenge ya nahi patha nahi. Lagta hai khud ke jeb se dalne padenge"


"Apko tiles ki aur paison ki padi hai Raman. Apki biwi yahan girkar apna pair thod liya hai uski koi fikr nahi" she asked unbelievingly.


"Hello Madam! Buddhu samjha hai kya mujhe? Abhi thodi der pehle jo challenge kiya uske liye ye sara natak chal raha hai. 1 saal hone ko aye tumhare sath reh ke. Itna to tumhe samajh hi chukka hun"


Ishita was stunned and unable to form a coherent reply.


"Mujhe office keliye der ho rahi hai, mai jaa raha hun. Aur haan agar subah subah washroom fun ka shouk poora hogaya ho to please uthkar mere liye tiffin pack kar do. Aaj bahut sare meetings hain, lunch pe nahi aa paunga" he walked out of the washroom having said that.


He stood in front of the dresser, combed his hair, sprinkled perfume, wore his so called x-ray glasses and was about to make a move but paused for a moment "Badi ziddi hai Madrasan. Abhi tak bahar nahi ayi. Challenges jeetne ka itna shouk hai is eke poora din washrrom me guzar legi magar bahar nahi ayegi" he said rolling his eyes.


"Chalo jate jate ek taana hi maar lun" he winked with a mischievous smile and peeped into the washroom. But what he saw made his heart sink.


Ishita had been trying to get back on her foot but an unbearable pain in her right ankle turned her attempts futile. She wanted to call out to Raman for help but knew he would think she was faking and would not come for her rescue. So she dragged herself near the wall while sitting and held the wall for support. She tried yet again to stand up with her weight on the wall, but her right leg seemed to have gone numb and was not letting her stand up. The wet slippery floor did not help either and she was slipping. That is when Raman peeped into the washroom.


"Ishitaaa" he let out a loud scream and ran for her rescue but too late, she had already hit the floor with a creeking noise coming from her right hand that she held on the floor to save herself from the fall.


"Ishitaa..." Raman cried out of concern and gathered her in his arms. "Tum theek ho?"


"Ha...an..." she stuttered as the pain and the multiple falls were making her dizzy.


"Romi...jaldi se gaadi nikal" he called out as he ran downstairs with her in his arms.

In the hospital

"Right ankle twist hogaya hai. Thankfully koi fracture nahi hai" the Doc said after examining Ishita.


Raman set out a sigh of relief that there was no major injury. But he felt guilty as he was responsible for Ishita's fall.


"Lekin kyunki twist hone ke baad khade hone ki koshish ki gayi aur usi jagah par do baar chot lagne ki wajah se moch zyada agayi hai. I propose complete bed rest for a week" this statement increased the amount of guilt in Raman's heart. He had been joking around while she was in terrible pain.


"Also make sure ke right hand pe zyada pressure na pade. Pichli baar right hand fracture hua tha aur is baar usi haath pe support dene se bone slightly dislocate hogayi hai. Agar rest doge to apne aap theek hojayega. Magar pressure padne se bone completely dislocate ho sakti hai. So please be careful"


"Sure doctor. Mai poora khayal rakhunga. Aur kuch?"


"Unko pain zyada ho rahi thi isliye maine abhi sedatives diye hain, jiski wajah se unhe neend agayi hai. 1-2 ghante me sedatives ka asar khatam hojayega. Kuch medicines likh ke de rahi hun, agar pain zyada ho to lena padega"


"ok"


"Ye ek oil likh kar derahi hun. Har rath plaster hatakar knees se lekar ankle tak massage dena hoga"


"Yes Doctor. Aur kuch Doctor? Aur koi ehtiyath? Koi pareshani ki bath?" Raman was hell worried.


The doctor walked around her table, kept a hand on Raman's shoulder "Don't worry Mr.Bhalla! She will be fine. Aap jaisa caring husband ho to ye chot to ek hafte kya, ek din me hi theek hojayega" she said with a re-assuring smile.


He smiled a weak smile in response and mumbled to himself "Agar mai caring hota to aaj Ishita ki ye halat na hui hoti."


----------------------------End of Part 1-----------------------------------

Part 2 in the post below

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Posted: 10 years ago
Finally! I am here with Part 2.
Sorry for being late. As this part turned out longer than expected I am posting it in 2 sub-parts.


Part 2 (a)

Mujhe Haq Hai

IshRa Bedroom (After 2 Hours)

Her head felt heavy and eyelids refused to open. First thing she sensed when she regained consciousness was the strong fragrance. She sniffed again to confirm she smelt roses and lilies. She batted her eyelids multiple times and found herself amidst numerous bouquets of white roses and lilies. For a moment she thought she was lying somewhere in a flower shop or a floral exhibition.

She was unable to comprehend why there were so many bouquets around and why she was sleeping so late into the day. A close analysis of her surroundings made her realize that she was lying on their bed in their bedroom.

A sudden jolt of pain in her right ankle and the familiarity of the surroundings reminded her of the events in the morning. Oh! I must have broken my ankle due to the fall, that is why I am sleeping right now.

Yet, she was unable to comprehend who had placed the countless bouquets of her favourite flowers around her and why. She stared at the bouquets to find the answers to who and why, when she found a card attached to each bouquet of different size and different style, carrying the same message I AM SORRY. That's it! Now she knew who and why.

Having found the answer to why she slowly tried to sit up to find where was who. She was sure he must be somewhere around her.

She was right indeed! Raman was sitting on the couch waiting for her to regain consciousness. As soon as he sensed a movement on the bed, he reached to help her sit leaning on the headrest, supporting her back with a pillow.

"Tum theek ho?"

"Hmm" was only what she could manage.

"Paani?"

"Hmm"

He immediately filled the glass on the side table and made her drink.

"Kuch khaogi?"

"Abhi nahi" her voice was hoarse.

"Dard horaha hai?"

"Hmmm"

Concern was evident from his gesture, but he avoided meeting her eyes. Ishita was confused why he was not meeting her eyes.

She wanted to ask him but he held her hand, head still lowered and said "I am sorry Ishita. Maine phir se tumhe dard diya"

Guilt! That's what troubling him she realized. It is not your fault, it was destined to happen' she wanted to tell him but decided against it. She very well knew that Raman would not accept it and continue feeling guilty until she was up on her legs and completely fine. So she thought of doing something unexpected.

"Apko to adat hogayi hai mujhe dard dene ki" she said sternly.

The unexpected accusation made Raman look into her eyes. He found them accusing too. He felt even more guilty. He tightened the grip on her hands and said "Sab meri galti thi Ishita. I am very sorry. Please mujhe maaf kardo"

"Ye achha hai. Pehle dard do phir sorry boldo. Jaise ki sorry bolne se sara dard chala jayega"

"I know ke meri galti maafi ke layak nahi. Tumhari takleef ka maine Mazak udaya. But mai genuinely tumse maafi maangna chahta hun"

"Aapne mere sath bahut galat kiya. Itni asani se mai apko maaf nahi karungi"

"Tum jo kahogi mai who karne ko tayyar hun"

"Pakka?"

"Pakka! IshiMa promise"

"To theek hai! Wardrobe open karo"

"Kya?" he asked baffled.

"Maine kaha wardrobe open karo" she tried to hide a naughty smile that appeared on her face. Raman was quick enough to catch her smiling and realize she was upto some mischief. Nevertheless he decided to play along.

"Jo hukm mere aqa" he complied, opened the wardrobe and turned towards her waiting for the next command.

"Ab right drawer open karo"

"Mera right?" he asked with a mischievous glint in his eyes. He was reminded how he had goofed up with the right drawer in his old house in Akash Ganga Society.

Ishita knew exactly what he was thinking right now. A blush crept up her cheeks at the memory. "Wardrobe ka right Ramannn"she said with a warning look.

"Mere right ka drawer kuch zyada interesting lag raha hai. Khol kar dekhlun kya rakha hai?" he teased.

"Ramannn...Khabardaar agar wo drawer khola to"

"Aisa kya hojayega agar khola to? Waise bhi maine apne X-RAY glasses se sab kuch to dekh hi liya hai"

"Ramannn" she fumed. He was having fun at the cost of her private clothings. She had started this game, how could she let him win? "Maafi chahye ya nahi?" she asked firmly.

"Maafi! Oh Haan! Drawer ke chakkar me thoda sa distract hogaya tha. Batao kya karna hai" he replied seriously.

"WARDROBE ka right drawer open karo" she said stressing on the word Wardrobe.

He opened the wardrobe. "Isme to books rakhe hain. Ab kya tumhe ye books padh kar sunaoon? Yaar kaala pani ki saza chahe to de do. Bas romantic novels padhne ki saza mat do please" he begged.

"Daro math. Books padhne ko nahi kahungi. Waise bhi romantic novels aap se sunna mere liye kaala pani se kam saza nahi hai. Aapke zaban se sirf taane hi achhe lagte hain"

"To phir drawer kholne ko kyun kaha. Isme aisa kya khazana hai?"

"Hai ek keemti cheez. Books ke neeche red envelope me rakhi hai. Use lekar yahan aao"

"Red envelopppe...hmmm...ye raha...mil gaya"

"Idhar lekar aao"

"Aisa kya hai is envelope me?" he said walking towards the bed and scrutinizing the envelope carefully "Red yaani danger.Kahin isme bomb to nahi rakha?"

"Kadve Punjabi. Sari cheezon ko apni tarah hi judge karte ho. Red ka matlab love bhi hota hai"

"Wo tum sweet madrasiyon keliye hota hoga. Hum to garam khoonwale red ko danger hi samjte hain"

"Kuchhh bhi?"

"Ab batao bhi isme hai kya?"

"Khud khole dekh lo"

Like an excited kid Raman opened the envelope. What he found left him dumbstruck with amazement.

"Yeh?Abhi bhi tumhare paas hai?"

"Haan"

"Magar aag me to sari cheezein jal gayi thi. Phir ye kaise?"

"Itni keemti cheez mai yahan wahan thodi na rakhungi. Apne khas cheezon ke sath sambhalke rakha tha maine"

"Ye tumhare liye itna khas hai?" he asked unbelievingly

"Ravan Kumar ke hath ka bana hua Sorry Card hai. Itni asani se thodi na milta hai. It's a priced possession you know" she said taking the card in her hands and bragging about it.

"Tumhare kanjeevaram se bhi zyada?" the question sounded silly but he wanted to know how special this card was for her.

"Haan Kanjeevaram se bhi zyada" she said holding the card close to her heart.

He was touched by her words. A simple card meant the world to her. He was amazed. He kept staring at her. Probably he wanted to capture the beauty of the moment and save it safely in his heart. He had never imagined his life to be so much beautiful, with a more beautiful wife who had the most beautiful heart.

Ishita found him staring at her and asked "Aise kya dekh rahe ho?"

He signaled her to keep quiet and said "Mujhe Haq Hai"

Mujhe Haq Hai

Tujhko Jee Bhar Ke Mein Dekhu
Mujhe Haq Hai
Bas Yuhhi Dekhta Jao
Mujhe Haq Hai

He had declared his right on her Biwi ho tum meri' but this moment and this declaration was something different. May be the love and passion in his sparkling eyes? or the hand that supported his cheek right now? or the head that was slightly inclined towards the right? She didn't know what made this moment special but she knew it was special and she could not but feel content.

The beeping of his phone broke the reverie. Ishita's Medicines the reminder read. He had the fixed the alarm for an hour before her medicines so that he could wake her up for lunch on time.

"Mai Neelu se kehkar tumhara khana upar mangwata hun"

"Upar kyun? Mai neeche chalke hi khaungi"

"Doctor ne 1 hafte ka bed rest kaha hai. Aur mai tumhe 1 hafte se pehle bed se utarne nahi dunga"

"Please na Raman. Mujhe sabke sath baithke khana hai"

"Ishita chote bachhon ki tarah zid mat karo"

"Please Raman! Aap meri itni si bat nahi manoge? Please" she pouted like Ruhi.

How could Raman say no to that puppy face! "Ok theek hai"

Excited Ishita immediatey placed her left leg on the floor and was about to lift her right leg when Raman yelled "Kar kya rahi ho tum?"

"Aap hi ne to kaha ke mai neeche chalke kha sakti hun"

"Maine neeche jakar khane keliye haan ki. Neeche chalkar jane keliye nahi"

"Phir mai neeche kaise jaungi"

"Chot pair me lagi hai. Dimag me nahi. To uska istemal kiya karo. Ruko wahin pe"

He said and gathered her in his arms.

"Raman ye aap kya kar rahe ho?"

"Apni biwi ko god me utha raha hun. Koi problem hai?"

"Achha nahi lagta Raman. Neeche sab log honge. Kya sochenge? Chodo na Raman. Please"

"Shhh...Mujhe Haq Hai" he said looking intently in her eyes. This declaration yet again made her silent and she kept staring at her husband. She was enjoying this version of her Ravan Kumar who was declaring his rights on her.

When they reached the dining area, the Bhalla clan who was already on the table hooted at the sight. Raman tried his best to hide his blush while Ishita's cheeks had already turned a deep shade of crimson.

Raman made her sit on a chair, filled her plate with all the veg options on the table and pulled a chair for himself beside her.

He picked up a morsel and offered her. She was too embarrassed already because of the hooting. She did not want to give any more chances to the teasing Bhalla clan. Moreover her hand was not injured, so she held his hand and said "Raman chot pair me lagi hai, hath me nahi. Mai khud kha sakti hun"

"Kha lo na bhabi. Warna bhai ke dil pe chot lag jayegi" Romi winked at her.

"Moo band kar, warna tujhe kahan kahan chot lagegi tu khud samajh nahi payega" Raman glared and Romi concentrated on his plate.

"Oh Madrasan! Doctor ne right hand pe pressure dalne se mana kiya hai. Isiliye khana khila raha hun. Warna mujhe koi shouk nahi hai sherni ke moo me hath dalne ki"

"Khana ek hath se bhi khaya ja sakta hai. Mai left hand se kha lungi"

"Achha? Pichli baar jab hath fracture hua tha tab kya akal ghans charne gayi thi? Apple ka ek slice bhi apne hath se nahi kha sakti thi, ab khana khane chali ho. Behes band karo aur khao"

Ishita smiled at the memory of him feeding her apple and helping her to tie her hair when she was struggling to eat. She was amused at his unique style of showing care.

She obliged and enjoyed the pampering. Her mother-in-law was definitely a good cook but the food seemed even more tastier today.

"Aapke hath me to kamal hai mummyji. Khana bahut tasty hai" she exclaimed.

"Kamal Toshiji ke hathon ka nahi, Raman ke hathon ka hai" Bhallaji teased.

"Khana Raman ne banaya?" she asked baffled.

"Nai oye. Khana to maine hi banayasi. Par jab pati apne hathon se khana khilaye to uska maza hi kuch aur honda hai" Toshiji nudged Ishita with her elbow.

"Roti pass karna Simmi" Ishita tried to divert their attention. She have had enough of teasing since morning.

"Apne pati par thoda to rehem karo. Mai chup chaap khila raha hun to tum thoosti jaogi kya?" Raman mocked.

"Ek roti khilane se apki hath toot jayegi kya? Itni problem hai apko to mai khud kha loongi" Ishita gave back.

"Hath ki kisko padi hai? Mujhe to meri kamar ki fikr hai. Pehli hi adh mara kamar hai mera, poori tarah thodna chahti ho kya?"

"Mere khane se apke kamar ki kya connection hai?" Ishita demanded.

"Itna thoos thoos ke khud ki weight badhaogi to kamar mera hi tootega na. Abe k hafte tak tumhe god me uthakar din me 3 baar dining table ki chakkar lagaunga to socho kya haal hoga mere kamar ka?"

"Kuchh bhi?"

"Kya kuchh bhi kuchh bhi. Lo...thooso" he offered her another bite.

"Mujhe nahi khana" she crossed her arms and turned away.

"Ruhi ki tarah zid mat karo. Kha lo. Warna zindagi bhar mujhe sunaogi"

"Khalungi to aap mujhe zindagi bhar sunate rahoge"

"Nahi meri jaan. Mai Mazak kar raha tha. Kuch nahi kahunga. Kha lo" he begged and forecefully made her eat.

The Bhallas choked on their food and stared at Raman unbelievingly.

"Aap log sab aise kyun dekh rahe ho?" Raman asked.

"Bhai aapne bhabi ko JAAN bulaya!?" Rinky asked? Stated?

Raman had not realized it until then. He quickly tried to cover up "Pagal kutte ne kata hai kya mujhe jo mai isko Jaan bulaunga. Wo to maine JAANsi ki Rani kaha tha. Aap logon ko Jaan sunayi diya hoga"

"Tu rehende bhai. Humein sab pata hai ke tujhe Pagal Kutte ne nahi Pyar ke keede ne kata hai" Simmi commented.

"Mai...haath...dhokar...ata...hun" Raman found an excuse and exited the scene as he could not take it anymore. A roar of laughter could be heard behind his back. Ishita helplessly had to remain there and blush harder.


Part 2 (b) - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/118636501

Edited by maanvir - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aishu_divan

OMG Aru😃😃..beautiful just too wonderful😃👏..The morning wala romantic batter was damn adorable😳😳..I just loved the concept of the anklet😃❤️..I love the way youve expressed the romance in that scene😳..BRILLIANT👍🏼..just too BRILLIANT😃..LMAO😆..imaginary conf call..Lol😆..So cute😳..Bold Ishu locking the room door and all😉..Im glad puttar completed the lip kiss fantasy.😃😃.And awww the last scene..teasing and he hugging.😳☺️.damn damn adorable😳😳..Could picture the entire scene playing in front of my eyes.😊.Amazingly awesome OS👏..Loved it a lot😃❤️..thanks a ton for this.🤗.and Awww..so sweet of u😳..dedicated it to GG😃..GG rocks..😃


Aishu 😃.. So glad you found time and made an effort to read just cos I had penned this OS.. This means a lot to me 🤗🤗.. I was imagining Puttar and Biwi there.. I am dreaming too much about them these days and to be more appropriate entering forbidden land 😳☺️.. ROFL 😆, for once I wanted him to romance in the name of work and found the right moment .. Now you know I will be waiting for this scene .. At least here let them lock and romance haddi free 😉😆,, I can really not send them to Mars without you and Anu has the keys 😆😆.. So happy that you enjoyed this scene. Thanks a lot Aishu 🤗.. Of course what am I without you all. SO true GG Zindabad 😃😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
i dont hav any issues with leg fractre...
i nly need romance and love...and u made it...

i loved the updte...nd waitng fr nxt...


raman nd ishu are suprb...

i liked rinki's nd mr.bhalla's teasing...


waitng fr nxt...
Edited by shavi2311 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Excellent...
First thing i liked is u replaced hand fracture with leg fracture.
(we expect more romance he he...)
what an start!!! yaar...
Bhallaji-hamara din Mata Rani ke jaap se nahi, Ishita ke jaap se shuru hothi hai😆😆...
such a cute family always teasing in their own way so sweet...
IshRa convo just lovely,one-liners, nok-jhoks...
Raman lines "Madrasan chidti hai to maza atha hai. Jaan bujhke wipe nahi karta take subah subah tumhara ye avtar dekhne ko mile. Ab kya karein JKR ko na dekho to din bura guzarta hai"...
Raman concern nicely shown, oh!! massage...

waiting for next one yaar...


Edited by Akshatha19 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Good update Maanvir...
Waiting for Part 2..

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