TS - You Belong To Me || last part on page 19 - Page 13

Originally posted by: aaminah123

You are still the first one to comment and perhaps read too.

Enjoy!😃

That was beautiful... so beautiful.

Subbus' envy- how do you describe things so perfectly? A real gift!

And the contrast in the way that Raman treated the Bala & Subbu , going from Raman to RKB- Gawd! *dead*

His words, his perfect, subtle, ferocious words...I don't know who I love more right now, RKB or you...🤗

Loved that he turned down Subbu's cab and both of their dismissals of their exes as nonentitys in their present lives or love... *sigh*

I echo Kiara's appreciation of starting with Subbu and ending with Shagun- both silent observers of 'what might have been'

And what would my comment be without mention of the colors- peach, Definitely a color that would look gorgeous on ISHRU , especially with the Grey... and the blue, of course what else do you wear to seduce Mr. RKB.

Lastly, Mrs. Raman... and the confession of the lie and the flirting thereafter. Girl, you are too good. Hope you write again soon.

To end ... this... since the GG gif is not working 😭😭😭 the next best thing...that atleast one of you will appreciate and mostly because after today we all need one...

if only we got to see these thgs in the show than wht htey r actually showing us...

Originally posted by: AraBearxx

"Tune chuha toh main dhadakne laga. Dilki dua honto pe rakhne laga,"

>And now he had his child, his flesh and blood but not her. He had a wife but not a partner. A companion but not the journey spent together in a decade. They were together but not by each other's side. They shared a child, not parenthood. <

This did it for me. ^

Honestly if I had to submit a reply to a honest update for this one. At the first shot, when you skim through - I felt something was missing. The second time I read it - I read through the lines. The third time I read it - I was in awe.

It took me mere seconds to fall in love with this piece. It took seconds to ask for a Subbu update or to second one when you suggested.

I told you. I love the way it starts with Subbu and ends with Shagun.

*break because my inactive school group is suddenly active on whatsapp*

Okay. Boys being boys. The random jokes they crack and spam. And half of them don't even make sense. And the Sex jokes. Ugh.

Coming back.

What I loved.

The moments. Like the picture. The ending IshRa scene that had me in splits. She was sitting on his chair. And he had his ankles crossed as he leaned on his desk. The way he traps her in with his hands on either arm rests. And the way they make out. Amna, I ask you - which planet are you from? Which universe? Why are you so awesome at whatever you do?

I love Shagun's downfall or her being back to square one. Subbu. Karma.

And Subbu's mother has to be the vile creature that she is. Can't she let anyone breathe in peace? Anyone?!!!

I should eat Badam because I can't remember if I plan on saying anything. I just can't. No wonder I make up stuff as I go. Nothing is planned.

I saw Chuck in Raman for a moment.

Subbu is right. They're in heaven.

This was a blissful read.

From jealousy. To anger. To Love. To repentance. To melancholy. It is the perfect expression of emotions.

And the normalcy. The normalcy. Like how there is no grand expression of love. Just two people who know what they want in life and how they move ahead. Two people scarred by the world. How they just move ahead. There is romance, not excessive romantic gestures. Like how having Sex isn't glorified. It's accepted. And life goes on after it. That was the best. And that's you. That's what I love reading in your writing. The maturity. That level of acceptance. The lack of fairytale but the feel of it. Magic. You create magic.

This song. For this work.

"Maine khud ko dediya hai tujko, mein tera, mein tera.. kkaate na kathe, leta hai yeh karwate.. Din Mera. Din Mera. Aa tujhme bitau ratiya. Dil dilko sunyein batiya. Aa tujko bitau ratiya, oh tu mujme kahin pe bas ja.. "

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ay4PjSTwmvc[/YOUTUBE]

Originally posted by: sulochana90

wonderful

loved it

thanx for the update

Originally posted by: AraBearxx

You know I would hate you if I wasn't first. You know.

Originally posted by: RomComFan

That was beautiful... so beautiful.

Subbus' envy- how do you describe things so perfectly? A real gift!

And the contrast in the way that Raman treated the Bala & Subbu , going from Raman to RKB- Gawd! *dead*

His words, his perfect, subtle, ferocious words...I don't know who I love more right now, RKB or you...🤗

Loved that he turned down Subbu's cab and both of their dismissals of their exes as nonentitys in their present lives or love... *sigh*

I echo Kiara's appreciation of starting with Subbu and ending with Shagun- both silent observers of 'what might have been'

And what would my comment be without mention of the colors- peach, Definitely a color that would look gorgeous on ISHRU , especially with the Grey... and the blue, of course what else do you wear to seduce Mr. RKB.

Lastly, Mrs. Raman... and the confession of the lie and the flirting thereafter. Girl, you are too good. Hope you write again soon.

To end ... this... to keep with the theme and mostly because after today we all need one...

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

awesome update

Originally posted by: RomComFan

To end ... this... since the GG gif is not working 😭😭😭 the next best thing...that atleast one of you will appreciate and mostly because after today we all need one...

Originally posted by: tanu3579

if only we got to see these thgs in the show than wht htey r actually showing us...

this is all soo much more realistic, logical... n yet so much more romantic...