Ishra os : a dawn of realisation last pt 3 dec 7

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ankita sidana

@ankita_sidana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Suhana...both the shots were teally beautiful

loved them

only if you can add an epilogue of some scene as you mentioned...father son and mother daughter duo

And yess...pls add me to your pm list for future writings

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suhaaana

@suhaaana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: ankita_sidana
Suhana...both the shots were teally beautiful
loved them
only if you can add an epilogue of some scene as you mentioned...father son and mother daughter duo

And yess...pls add me to your pm list for future writings

thanks ankita for the comment
but I am having exams that why ended it..
will pm u next time dont worry...
thanks for liking the updates

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Anamika

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

awesome.hope to see this change in serial adi too

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teja21

@teja21

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

wonderful update dear

thanx fr d pm

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.Harshita.

@.Harshita.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Woww...Suhaana di...its such a thoughtful OS...
U brought out Adi's feelings very well...
Love it...

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.Harshita.

@.Harshita.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

N plzzzeaseee add me to the PM list...

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Fanaah

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

For: PART 1

Adi's point of view is something you don't see too often. You can clearly see his conflict here and his wanting to go back to the boarding school to a familiar surrounding is understandable. I'm glad that Raman explained to him about thinking of his own interest, but in a way that it doesn't force the consequence on someone else.

As for apShagun, she never changes! Going off to read the next chapter! Great start!