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Sunita

@avni_19

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

brilliantt updateee!!! i loved the concept u chose to write! i hope cvs touch this reality aspect in the serial!

cont soon!! thankuu!

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Neha

@SurrealFantasy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: twerping
The banter between Raman and Ishita here is spot on! It's perfect and quintessential IshRa! This was an absolute delight to read...as for the direction the story can take... I am totally confused...head says tragedy heart says fairytale...and to be honest, the romantic in me really really wants the heart to win.
This was brilliant and I look forward to the updates no matter what direction the story takes

Thanks!

And as for the end - I was confused on how to take it forward and got inspired by Bicholas Sparks. Have you read his A Walk to Remember. The protagonist has cancer and battles with it throughout the entire book, but he doesn't tell us whether she lived or died in the end. According to him, if the readers wanted her to live, she did; if they didn't, she didn't. It was all about the fact that they would hope that she would, whatever the outcome.

And I (personally) feel that they'd have a few Madrasans. *Wink*

Thanks a ton again. Glad you liked it.

Neha

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Neha

@SurrealFantasy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Let-It-Go
Awww.. This is beautiful !
Please do continue.. be it anything -Tragedy or Fairytale, I would love to read

Hahaha. I hope it would be a fairytale, but who knows?! I'm not into extreme realistic portrayal when it comes to writing and reading. Life is horrendous enough as it is and writing is an escape.

Thank you. I'll do a beginning probably, but about continuing forward - not so sure.

Neha.

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Neha

@SurrealFantasy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Vsoujanya
This was beautiful! One of the best OS I have ever read on the forum. It painted a beautiful picture in my head, I could totally imagine this happening. The pain, the comfort, the happiness, and the craziness of course, all elements were present. It was a wonderful read. I am a huge fan of happy endings so I will imagine a happy ending to this beautiful OS, but it would be awesome if you gave a ending to it. I am waiting to read the prologue when you write it! Well done! 👏

PS: I also hope when the show comes to this particular track, they depict it the same way you did, because I think it was done accurately and beautifully. Lets hope!

Your comment made my day! Thanks a lot. Who doesn't love happy endings, right? As a die-hard romantic comedy fan, I would hope for the same.

Don't know if I'll continue into the future. It's an open ending - I feel like I'll do injustice to the readers who love something realistic instead of pure happiness and cheesiness.

And, Awww! That is flattering. Thank you!

Neha

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Neha

@SurrealFantasy

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Ribelle_IshRa
Absolutely loved it!! Good that you let the ending remain in the readers' hands. Also their relationship dynamics dont change after confession and everything was a great aspect. I'd insert applause if my phone allowed. :)

Thank you. :)

I'll take your virtual applause anyway. Lol😆

As for the ending, yeah, a little for both my realistic and romantic readers. Wouldn't want to upset anyone. :D

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Anu

@RomComFan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

What a wonderful beginning!👏

You write ISHRA banter really well- and I love the list of things they don't talk of. Love that they are still them after the confession!😊

I am very intrigued to see where you take this story and look forward to your next update!

Edited by RomComFan - 10 years ago