Choice - IshRa OS (12/7)

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neha

@Iloveishra

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

This one really made me cry... i would never ever wish to see such a thing in the show,though i know very well that divan would potray this elegantly...beautifully written. .loved the part where raman asks her why she didn't ask him to choose her...I was reminded of grey's anatomy where meredith tells derek Okay. Here it is. Your choice? It's simple. Her, or me. And I'm sure she's really great. But Derek, I love you. In a... really, really big... pretend to like your taste in music, let you eat the last piece of cheesecake, hold a radio over my head outside your window, unfortunate way that makes me hate you, love you.

So pick me. Choose me. Love me."...wish you could continue this story

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@Jenny..

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Omgg wat a brilliant OS!...it was so sad...i just cant imagine this with ishra:(...it was so heart melting...the pain of separation,the unsaid feelings,it actually made me emotional,i love romantic os's but for the first time i loved this sad one...it was beautifully written...i really cant put my feelings into words after reading your os...it was just too different...i wish it could have a happy ending,but this was PERFECT❤️please do write more...and yeah pls pm me whenever you write os😃

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shireen sukhan

@shinseen

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

first i was still,

kuch lamhoun tak suchti rahi kis terhn apni feeling ka izhar karun

pher flim SILSILS ka wo scene yaad ayya jo Amitab aur Rekha k dermiyan meinthe jab wo Rekha ko Rakhi keliyan chhude ker jata hai

YOU WRITE REALY VERY WELL SERIOUSLY

every word express their feeling

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rutu83

@rutu83

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

dont have words - amazingly written
one of the best separation ones i've read
fantastic writing
please write more
and thank you for the pm :)

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

As sad as this OS was, it made me smile like how Ishita did as she spoke to Raman. It was a beautiful heartbreak.

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Maaneet099

@Maaneet099

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

I cannot come around to hit the like for this heart wrenching OS...

I love happy endings and keep a good distance away from the sad ending ones but your words compelled me to read it. Very nice..

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lourel24

@lourel24

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

It was awesome n beautifully written.hats off .Emotions were bang on.Trust me,I m literally crying.

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

A poignant, intense OS...a matter of choices without actually no 2 options!

beautifully written and I had tears when I finished reading it

loved it...if ever this happens in the show I want Raman to choose her!

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Eyes-Wide-Shut

@Eyes-Wide-Shut

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

I do not like reading melancholic stories because I am a happy person like yourself but I was hooked from the 1st sentence. If I say, I loved it then I will be doing injustice to your brilliant words. I gravitate towards emotions and this one was full of it!

I adored this piece of writing and full disclosure, I had tears in my eyes by the end of it.

If you must know when my eyes glistened, it was Raman's 'Don't go!'

'Don't go'! Just those two simple words created a havoc within me, thank you for this.