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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: arunabhi

Loving the pace .. IshRa n MiMi scenes are good
Waiting for the next part


hop i vl updte by night...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome update 👏
exited for next part update soon
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Chapter-4
Not proof read...avoid mistakes...

Scene starts with ishra questioning galnces towards...wen mihir starts to tell som thng...raman clears tht...jhoot bolne ke liye sochna bhi math...

mimi says thy r in realtn since 1 mnth...ishu 1 mnth nd u dnt knw want to say wid me r raman...with ishu walks off faking annoyance...

mihika saya akka pls listen to me nd says i knw akka i hurtd u bt i dnt knw hw wil u react to this so i didnt shared it with u...ishu is stil faking anger...raman understnds tht she is faking...njys the sisters convo...

mihika tries her best to convnce ishita bt she cant suceed...mihir says pls ishita try undrstnd we want to say fr u bt dnt hw wil u tak it...nd sorry ishita if we hutrd u...mihir asks raman to tell her tht it nt the way she thinking...to tht raman says frst wen u guys propsed each other...?

Flash bak...

Its one of the weekends wen ishra nd mimi in pub...its frst tym thy went to pub aftr mihika joined the college...thy are njying in pub...raman nd mihir on dance nd ishita nd mihika jst njying drnks...
raman gets som call nd excuses himself...ishu also goes to rest room...mihika is alone with her drnk...

som gal approachd mihir...asks him to get a drnk...nd he does...the young lady dances with him...mihika is fu of J...she stamps oot of the pub angrily...mihir sees nd follows her...

mihika listen...wht happend...??y r u leaving...she ignores him nd says to njy with new gf...

Mihir: what...??

Mihika: the gal whom u brought drink nd njying...u didnt evn notice tht im alone...

Mihir: she jst asked me...whts in tht...

Mihika: tht reasn i am saying to njy with her...

Mihir understnds tht she is J...

suddenly mihir kneel dwn nd propes on the road shockng her...he accepts it a wide smile on her face nd hugs him...

mihir mocks mihika tht i dnt u hav dis side too...

mihika gives him angry glare...nd mihir says sorry nd kisses her hand...

mihir continues...i was flattered fr u at the frst tym i hav seen u...i decided at tht tym to grow old wid u...bt i dnt want to rush the things...

mimi are very happy nd mean while in pub ishra reaches nd cant find mimi...thy call thm...mihir says tht mihika is having head ache so i brought her to home...

end of falshbak...

After tht we use to meet without knowing anyone...in name of projcts, asignmnts r meeting som othr friends...we used to ditch ur plans too...thn ishra remembers hw thy avoided weeknds planings...

Mihia gets no reactn frm ishu,...she strts crying...raman brusts into laughtr making trio shock...mihika scolds raman fr laughing hw could he do tht wen her best friend is crying...

Raman controls himself nd says tum abhi tak tumhare akka ko nahi jaanti hoon...she is faking anger nd u strtd crying..i cant tak it anymre says raman...

ishu nw strts laughing bt gives angry galre to raman fr spoilng her plan...mihika says akka...

I: sorry yar..tumne mujse chupayi tho i made my revnge in this manner...to nt telling to me...

ishu says happy fr both of u nd congrts thm...raman to hugs mimi says he is also very happy fr thm...

mimi aksthm to nt say it to anyone...ishra agrees nd leaves frm there...while ishita says dnt mak late as if som1 comes thy she cant do any thng...

after party ishu calls raman nd asks him if he enjyd party...he says yes nd befr ishita can ask any thng furthr raman says wht you want to ask...???

ishita says hw would u knw tht wht im going to ask...?? im ur bestie nw i can tell wht you thnk with ur voice nd by watchng u...

ishita asks to tell him...

raman says u want to ask me tht hw i knw tht ur faking anger on mihka...ishita comptly bould...nd she acnt utter any thng... raman continues nd says i knw its 100% true so dnt lie to me...nd asks i knw u r happy with mimi realtnshp bt y u teased her...

Ishita says i jst want to pull her nd i dnt get tht chance often...so i did it...nd raman i want to njy every phase of my life...by doing all crazy things nd pulling my best friends...raman laughs nd says its too late...go nd sleep...meet u 2marw in clg...

nxt day in college...mimi sits togethr nd ishra as mimi wants to sit togethr...so thy dnt hav choice...(ishra in mind feels happy fr being togethr...bt doesnt shw it...)

The sitting of ishra nd mimi continues...the passes thy enjy their weeknds giving privacy to mimi bt satying togethr... unknwingly mimi gave privacy fr sihra too...ishra are njying this phase of their...nd thanks mimi in mind...

Its the ending of their 2nd year...so exams tym...evry r bsy with their studies nd ishra talks redcuced bt their mornings nd nights nvr ended with out xchagng good mornings nd good nights...

1 month went with exams nd the preperatn...aftr completng final exam...mimi are planed to watch mvie togethr,...thy shares their plan with ishra nd asks thm to accompany to the mall...thy agrees...mimi goes to movie nd ishra thnks to return to their respectve houses bt thy suddenly see DDLJ palying as celebrting its 1000 weeks of films in clasics...raman looks at ishita nd ishita knws tht raman want to wtch tht film nw...evn DDLJ is ishu's fav film...so she agrees instantly...

(ishra in mind thy feels very happy as their dream of wtching DDLJ with each othr coming true...thy nvr shared it bt its their draem to wtch film with each othr...)

Raman gets the ticketsnd mvie strts...thy are njying the film...nd stoling galnces...wen thy caught with othr thy jst smile nd watch the mvie...unkwingly raman takes ishu's hand in his nd she too give it...njys the momnt with raman...

ishu rests her head on raman's shoulder while in film...tuje dekha hain tho jana sanam palying...ishra are iamging thmselves in tht place nd continues to see wtch mvie holding hands nd resting head on each othr...

thy feel ackward wen thy realise wht had transpired between thm...thy starighten thmselves watch mvie...prays in mind to complete fast as thy cant face othr nw...actually thy are feeling wht the othr think abt thm...so jst thy want to run away frm each othr...movies completed nd thy see each othr moves to their respctd homes...

at night...ishra are thinking abt each othr nd feeling very happy...bt same tym r fear as thy dnt each othr feelings...this may nt ruin their realtnship...

P.S: if u feel bore thn let me knw guys...

thanks fr reading the updte...

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Posted: 10 years ago
#64
Awesome update
haha unknowingly they hold there hands and rest there heads on the shoulders
they start realising there feelings wow
superb update
waiting for the next
thanx for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#65
awesome update 👏
very much excited for next part
waiting for next part please update soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome part love how she tease mihika n raman knowing her. n movie dlwdlj wow dream to be them n head on shoulders too the most they hold hands unknowing wow cont thx for pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 5:
nt proof read...excuse fr mistakes...

after the mvie...ishra didnt want to talk to each other...thy r are in fear of loosing their frienshp...

at night in ishu's bed room...

ishu calls mihir nd asks him abt his love fr mihika...tht hw he managed to tell her...bcoz of knowing mihika's nature...to vch mihir laughs nd asks her drctly tht...who the lucky man...ishu frst didnt understnd...thn she realises nd lies tht she askd him casually...mihir to giv her privcy left tht topic bt tells tht if we lov som1 thn xpress it without delay...loosing our loved one's is mre painful thn nt saying thm...jst go with tht...nd i did the same...

Mihir: ishita...if the tym cmes fr u...jst do it...dnt thnk of consequences...
Ishita...lets see...if tht spl feeling happens to me r nt...

ishu in toughts aftr convo with mihir...nd decided to follow wht mihir said nd messages raman to cme to her home @ 11 near pool side...

raman receives the msg...a slite smile escapes his lips...nd he to paln to propse her at the night...he makes all r his arrangmnts to mak their confesn spl...bt he too ahv the same fear bt he decided to confess her...

ishu's home pool side:

ishu wents bak to remember wht happend aftr her akka's wedding anivrsary...aftr 1 week of aniversary celebrtn ishra in shopping nd raman suudenly says u look beauiful in tht whte leghana wen she is shwing som othr to raman...

thn raman realises wht he said nd embrases bt ishu asks drctly tht say it agian...he says u look very pretty nd beautiful...she turns crimson red due to his comnt...nd says thanks with a sweet smile...

ishu says you took 1 week to say this...i want to say it at tht instnce bt i dnt y i didnt say it at tht tym...

ishu remembers nd smiles nd blushes...yeh raman na complmnt ke liye 1 wwek tym liya ab confesn pe chodongi tho ek aur yr lega...its betr i confs him wen he cmes...

ishu receives raman's message nd she goes to open the bak gate vch beside the pool so tht he can cme in...raman cmes in...

ishra stoles glances...ishu speaks frst...

I: i want to hug u raman...to vch was dumbstck says okay nd cmes frwrd...bt nxt the wrds of ishu makes him mre shck...

I want to be ur life partner...wil b my soulmate...??

raman moves a step bak...ishu sees raman moving bak nd sees him with hop...

R: ishita are you serious...??
I: yes iam...
I: i love u nd want to spend my lif with you...by kneeling dwn infrnt of him...


R: makes ishu to stand her on her feet...nd there is a silnce between thm...

aftr couple of min...raman whistles nd nd ishu looks at him...he makes her to look towrds sky...wer it written...

I LOVE YOU ISHITA...WILL U BE MINE FOREVER...in glowing lights of sky lanthers...

ishu was on cloud 9..nd she immediately hugs raman tightly...

raman...i love you too...

I: this is the best happened to me...I LOVE U SO MUCH...nd has tears in her eyes...

raman wipes thm with his thumb...nd says nt to cry as he cant see her lik tht...

ishra free from their hug...nd raman kisses ishu on forehead...ishu blushes nd raman too...thy talk fr few minutes nd raman mak a move to leave bt ishu stops him...i dnt want to b away frm you raman...

R:evn i feel the sme bt its late ishita...if anyone sees it wont look good...nd i dnt want any1 to misundrstnd r talk bad abt u...bt i promse we continue our secret meetings...nd we njy our secret love...

i frst want to say it our family thn to others...so we hav to b carful...nd as i said we vl meet bt nt knowing to any1...

ishu agrees nd says bye to raman...kissing him on his cheek...nd runs to her room without facing raman...

raman shouts ishita name bt realises its nt safe nd doesnt complete her name nd leaves...

ishu messages raman to drve safe...to vch raman replies yes sweet heart...nd cal u wen i reach home...ishu turns red by hearing sweet heart frm raman...moves to bed nd thinks of turning of events frm mvie to their confesn...

ishra phne convo...

I: did u reach...???
R: yea... sweet heart...
R: thnkng of me...??
I: doesnt rply...tries to speak somthng...
R: cuts her nd says i knw u very well sweet heart...say me wht u r thinking...
R: my guess...abt mvie nd confesn...
I: makes smile nd he undrstood tht he is correct..
R: holidays mein plans kya hain...sweetheart...
I: raman...huskily...
R: mein sun raha hoon...
I: ntng mch...2-3 days relax nd farewell ki preprtns strt karna hoga...
R: yea...i comptly frgot...
I: im here to mak remaind u...
R: kuch socha...
I: nahi...
R: 2-3 days baad sochte hain...ab bas kal ki suprse ke liye wait karo...
I: curiously asks wht...??
R:intezar ka phal meetha hota aur waise bhi mein apna badla le raha hoon...
I: wht...bt why...??
R: U jst left aftr kissing me...so nw keep guesing abt suprse...i wont say it...
I: pls raman...
R: no...
I:tries to asks him...
R: is stubrn nd doesnt leak his suprse...
R: sleep ishita...nd wait fr tomarw...
I:tries to argue bt...

no one wins infrnt of RKB...

R:good night sweet heart...
I: acptng her defeat says good night nd sweet dreams...
R: mechvieously asks with whom...??
I: angrily says with me nd dont evn thnk of othrs...
R:laughs nd says nly u sweet heart...
R: nd...tell me wht i do in ur dreams...i knw u get my dreams fr sure...
I: shyly says good night raman...

thy sleep peacefully with wide smile on their faces...

P.S...guys say me if u r nt intrstd...

Iam very bad at writing romnce...so dnt xpct mch...

P.S.S: i kept my ff name as rooh...nt bcoz ruhi involved bt i want ishra to b soulmates...rooh means soul...as u guys alrdy knw...

Ruhi wil b der bt in final updtes...


Edited by shavi2311 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: dhristikpd

Lovely pls continue soon


thanks...updtd nxt part...hop u lik it...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: jayashreeraju

awesome update 👏
very much excited for next part
waiting for next part please update soon
thanks for the pm


updtd nxt...hop u lik it...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: pretty_h

awesome part love how she tease mihika n raman knowing her. n movie dlwdlj wow dream to be them n head on shoulders too the most they hold hands unknowing wow cont thx for pm me


glad u liked it...updtd nxt part...chck it out...

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