Ishra FF:Rooh...be my soul...chptr 15(last chapter) on 52 - Page 22

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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing. Loved it. Raman ka surprise should have been more.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: deepali.rock

Aww.. sweet dear.. I m still in lala land.. exactly as I wanted to play out..

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: hana_y

amazing update shavi i read others parts which i miss too
n love all parts n this one i love how all of them arrange the surprise party n romi is so sweet with ishita the room decorate was nice too n romi is with sarika wow you add her too i thought simi will be there too . in all to good well write lov eit cont soon n thx for pm me 👍🏼

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Posted: 10 years ago
Great update- Thanks so much for the PM! 👍🏼

The ISHRA scenes are so cute- so nice that they are being more open now!👏
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: RomComFan

Great update- Thanks so much for the PM! 👍🏼

The ISHRA scenes are so cute- so nice that they are being more open now!👏

thnk u...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update! Thanks for the pm!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter-12:
Note: Boring part...Read on ur own risk...

Not proof read...

Scene starts with college...thy r having their final exams...so mimi nd ishra are bsy with exams, projects nd viva...

After 1 mnth thy finished their exams nd went fr ice cream a parlour to chill out...thy six r meeting aftr a mnth nd discusing nxt plans...

Thy plan fr a mvie nd went to mall drctly...in the middle of the mvie romi nd ishu starts blowng whistles...raman, sarika nd mimi r shckd...thy nvr seen ishu njying lik dis in a mvie...always she use to b quiet bt nw she is cmptly diffrnt...raman stops her bt she always a partnr in crime romi who vl b his bhabi's support nd thy chill out the way thy want...

Aftr mvie thy go fr a dinner nd our couples order their loved one's fav nd thy njy feeding each othr nd pulling other couples...

Their days went lik this fr 1 mnth...nd suddenly raman says he is going to US fr MBA...all r shockd...ishu starts crying nd runs away frm their...all the scolds him vfr nt infrmng thm nd nt evn ishita too...thy r very angry on raman bt som how he convnces thm...

He goes to ishu who is crying bitterly...he calls her nd she wipes tears nd says congrts RAMAN...with the most possible smile on her face bt the hurt is clearly visible...he goes to her nd asks r u nt angry...??

I: I knw u raman...u want to start of urself nd want to tak ur father's company to new level...im nt angry on u bt im hurt...u didnt evn bothr to say abt ur plan...y did u do...u tought i dnt suprt u...??

R:ish...i dnt want to hurt u...i knw wen i say this u vl b hurt nd angry too...bt i dnt want u to b thnk tht i vl b going away...i dnt want to spoil ur njymnt...ur having with me nd with all...im sorry sweet heart...

I: iam happy fr u raman...with a sad face nd sad tone...

R: y cant u come with me...?? v vl go togethr nd cme bak...aftr tht v vl get married...wht say...??

I: no raman...i wil stay in delhi...i vl do my MBA here only...i cant leave my parents...

R: bt one day u hav to leave thm nd cme with me na...??

I: the one day is nt this raman...i knw i cant stay away frm u bt...as i say...we shld phase evry phase our life nd deal with it...nw i shld deal with this phase of life...

R: ishu pls...cme na...evn i cant stay away frm u by cupping her face...

I: no raman...we vl b togethr in our hearts nd vl b video calling evry day...physically we r nt togethr bt mentally we r always togethr...

R: pls ishu thnk abt it...

I:Hmmm...


Aftr 1 mnth...

In airport:

Only our coulpes are in airport...thy give space fr ishra...ishra are talking with each othr to tc of themselves nd live the life nd njy hw thy r doing nw...

Raman takes ishu to car nd starts kissing her senselly evrywhere he can...nd ishu to follwing same thy cant enough frm each othr...thy are intruptd by the call romi to cme as boading is announced...

Ishra gifts each other the same key chain, same photos of each others spent togethr...thy gfrtd thmselves the same gfts...nd promise tht thy b one as soon as he completes his study nd bak in india...

Raman in US ishu in ind startd doing their MBA...evn mimi nd romika are with ishu evry tym nd evry weeknd bt the smile nd spark in her face is missing...daily ishra use to cht with each othr nd thy got bsy with their new life nd new prjcts...nw thy talk to each othr bt their commitmnt towrds stdy nt giving enough tym...ishu slowly avoided maating thm nd engossd in studies...

She tought of raman...hw thy use to be togethr nd stdy togethr wen thy needed...nd its quite easy fr thm to handle evry thng wen thy r togethr bt nw its becoming difficult nd thy cant evn handle small thngs with out each othr...

It's raman's b'day...

Ishu made sure to suprse him...so she orderd cake to raman nd boquet of red roses...she called maid nd asked her to decorte the room accordng to her orders...nd nt allow raman to entr his raman till she say...

she evn decortd her room in the same way...nd ordered same cake nd same boquet of red roses...

she called raman @12 nd asked him goto room nd cme to video chat...he was suprsd by seeing the arrangmnts nd more suprsd to see ishu arranging the same in her room too...thy both cut cake togethr nd feed each each othr...he asks raman to open his gfts vch are placed in closet...its latest collectn of ROLEX watch nd custmized cufflings...nd som t-shrts nd a suit fr his intrvw...he is very happy nd sad at a tym...bcoz on nt being with her on his spl day...

Time passed...thy cmptd their MBA nd convoctn...nd raman plans to suprse ishu nd book tickets fr INDIA...as he cant stay away frm her...so he made sure nt to get doubt fr anyone...

I dont want their seprtn fr long...so i cmptd dis in one part...

P.S: comnts nd critism are accpetd...





Edited by shavi2311 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
story went too fast buddy.
I felt that foreign part similar to happy days movies with a difference.They wont get seperated.

But nice one.Story went too fas.Don't know on which part to comment.
then waiting for next part.Ishra meeting
Edited by SAKIV-RAM - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
I loved the story very much
brilliantly written
love the most of ishra scenes
I reading it's for first time liked all the parts
waiting for next continue sooon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: lazeema

I loved the story very much

brilliantly written
love the most of ishra scenes
I reading it's for first time liked all the parts
waiting for next continue sooon
thanks for the pm


thnk u so mch...

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