Ek 'OS-Thon' Thread YHMians Ke Naam- THE LAST UPDATE PG 70 - Page 35

Originally posted by: -IshRaDivAn-

(OfTheHeart) Priya, that was such a masterpiece! ⭐️⭐️
I don't even need to start talking about its sensuousness and brilliance! The passion, the desire..I should say raw desire was just so HOTand so evident! ☺️☺️ The story definitely had your touch to it in the form of their emotions. You just are too good at emotions and this one's no exception..In this one, it was the yearning and selflessness. 😳 The best part of it was of how he spoke nothing and simply targeted her knowing her vulnerable state. For sure he knows his ways around her! 😆 She couldn't resist him afterall and ended up blurting it out! The gamble paid off..☺️☺️ Must say, whatta gamble!

Loved the end specially, he left her wanting. In a much more vulnerable state than what she left him in. The devilish revenge! ☺️

Ahh, now I wish this had second part too..Please, is there any way you could continue this outside this thread or even this thread for that matter! 😳😳 Really wana see an end to this..

Pretty please! <33 FABULOUS OS anyway! Loved it ❤️

Originally posted by: ankita_sidana

hii priya

so we have one more priya at the forum

glad to see you

Loved your write up yrrr

wat an update?

raman bhalla did a grave mistake

panga with jkr...have to pay

but after all how long can someone resist puttar

that too in shower

(My mind into that one look of raman/karan in the shower)

finally...they both became one

beautiful yrrr

good job

keep writing

Originally posted by: RaYaKapoor

Hey!! Thanks yaa!!
Needed that!! I thought minew as quite stupid actually!!

Waiting for yours now!!!

And thanks for the ache wale comments

Originally posted by: OfTheHeart

And for second thoughts I thought this OS was going to become a laughing stock, because I never ever gave it a final touch up... I just wrote and posted for I knew that If I'll read it then I won't be able to post it... I have never written anything like this ever... 😆

Thanks so much yaar... I think I am going to give it a second part If that's what you think would complete it...😃

P.S. I love your comments!❤️

Originally posted by: -IshRaDivAn-

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OMG!! Like that...🤣🤣
I was only thinking on terms of Sherbet..I didn't go that far! 😛😆 Ab itna gutter hai toh dimaag kahan se chalega.? Thanks for en lighting us..🤣