Ek 'OS-Thon' Thread YHMians Ke Naam- THE LAST UPDATE PG 70 - Page 27

Now pallavi's story:

Originally posted by: omshreejaanu

Now pallavi's story:

The title itself got me giggling! N the beginning had me hiding my face in my palms literally!😳😆

This line cracked me up. Typical RKB.

Sab main hi karta jaaoonga ki tum bhi kuch karogi?" he spoke as he pulled her chin up with his finger.

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">And the last part:</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">I better run away hiding my face!☺️</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Ruhi n Raman conversation:</font>

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Tum log Mujhe heart attack doge! Like seriously!!😆

I can only think of RKB dialogue "khud bhi tho bhuk do" 😉 😉

Originally posted by: arunabhi

I can only think of RKB dialogue "khud bhi tho bhuk do" 😉 😉

ahem, that was hawt! ☺️

dochdoe's story!!
I dont know what to say!! Mahn.. This just made me so red and hot!! Loved it!!

Originally posted by: ankita_sidana

Dochode...in the begining u said u r not writing mature and i was like okk..araam se padte hain..already two had given a high dose

but wat was this?

Raman not leaving her for a minute

okk...frst or last but he made her his

marked himself on her

and that pool romance was actually hot yrrr

I m still imagining rkb in water...goosebumps...heavy breaths...blushing...cant explain my state right now

thanks :) never wrote a gutter before so I was nervous

Aruna!!
Carrom wont be just a normal game anymore.. In fact.. A carrom without IshRa hotness is gonna sound very boring.. Awesome OS!!

I guess IM gonna have to back out after this.. I CANT make it as hot as you guys!!

Pallavi di...awesum

Dochdoe... Well after reading the initial write up I felt there would be light gutter but you have risen the bar ... It was hot, I felt my cheeks burning as the OS progressed .. It was like ... Phew!!! Too much

Originally posted by: Nikki_Titli

Aruna... omggg i will nw FOREVER equate carom game with ishra n tht too all coz of urs SIZZLING HOT OS...woman u NEED TO WRITE MORE as u hv got tht G factor in right amount...loved it...esp the way u explained STRIP show of Raman...ooh lala🤣

@Dochdoe... yaar u really hv put a WRONG disclaimer..u sayin tht wsnt good?it ws EPIC...i thought u were bein nervous,so readin ur disclaimer-i tried to keep no expectations n njoy wht it..but but..i ws BOWLED over when he stated RULE No:3 n then there ws no turnin..it ws a PURE GUTTER PERSONIFIED OS dear...truly hawwwt...!!

Ria...aww short sweet sexy os dear...good job..!!

thanks :) that gives me some relief