Until we meet again: An Ishra SS -Thank you note -pg 14

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deepa

@_Dipsi_

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: bscorp13

arre...i m a very sanskaari person...i cant write any more such stuff..paavum paavum...😆

Sanskari va??yaaru adu??neeya??

naan elle pa

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RheaSh

@RheaSh

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Hotness, pent up lust and pure emotions mingled in one breath, one bliss.
Fabulous piece.
You're an amazing writer. Keep writing more. 😊

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Divya

@_Divya_

Inactive

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: bscorp13

hain kjb...say smthing normal ppl like me can understand😆😆😉

normal aur tu? 😲 🤣

pee ho kya? SHARBAT? 🤣🤣

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Bruce_L

@Bruce_L

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: bscorp13

Thanks dipsi😊..mera pehla n AakhRI ss...pg 1 check kar..both parts there..😊

Aakhri ?!
Who told that 😆

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bscorp13

@bscorp13

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: RheaSh
Hotness, pent up lust and pure emotions mingled in one breath, one bliss.
Fabulous piece.
You're an amazing writer. Keep writing more. 😊

aww...thanks Rhea..😊

yes ..I kinda wanted to explore lust and the need to possess as a form of intense love...Great it could reach you. ..😛

more?..let's see...I never thought I could even finish this one properly..😆

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Beautifully written! all those bottled up desires, anger, frustrations and love was awesomely portrayed!

👏

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bscorp13

@bscorp13

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: Bruce_L
And you say You cannot write an OS 😲

Stupid woman, look at the order you wrote what they felt and what led them reach the ecstacy level for which they have been longing since months 👏

The longing to have her in his arms and to be in his arms!!!
S*x is a way to express love IMO.
I believe you have written it on that basis. Correct me if am wrong.

You have given a great shot in your first attempt itself 👏
And yeah if this was your first or not, we will discuss later 😆

PS : Aaj phir tumpe pyaar aaya hain🤣 🤗

Yes.. this is still not a crisp OS😆...BUT stuff you have made me do..IF mein aaj main Badnaam ho gayee😆

Yes i wanted to explore what pent up emotions would feel...keeping both characters of raman n ishu in mind. .

raman the emotional one..hence more impulsive ..but also more expressive in actions. ..while ishu the more headstrong practical one...but with her way of expressing her wants too..

Physical expression is a way to wordlessly express love too...it always doesn't have to be those 3 words😛

Your PS...😳😳...hope not in a creepy way😆

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Bruce_L

@Bruce_L

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Creepy way 😕
CHEE gandi woman

And what badnaam...Sanskaari tamil songs dedicate karti ho khullam khulla with translation🤣

So I had a reason to make you post this 😳

Edited by Bruce_L - 10 years ago

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bscorp13

@bscorp13

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: vidya.anand
Beautifully written! all those bottled up desires, anger, frustrations and love was awesomely portrayed!
👏

Thanks vidya...feels so nice to hear that from an awesome writer like you. ..😛

btw..waiting for your next with bated breath😉😆

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bscorp13

@bscorp13

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: Bruce_L
Creepy way 😕
CHEE gandi woman

And what badnaam...Sanskaari tamil songs dedicate karti ho khullam khulla with translation🤣

So I had a reason to make you post this 😳

ayyo pot calling the kettle black😆😆...I am gandi.. then you are just the same amma😉😆

Arre tamil songs ki copyright is with you naa..me only gives you company...😆