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kuls

@theshushreader

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Posted: 10 years ago

#301

Dat was awesome and simply mindblowing... Poor souls their first kiss was noticed by two other people... Dat was hilarious...

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Sahiba

@sahibasharma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#302

very beautiful...

made me speechless,,,

perfect closure to this unique story...

👏👏

u have done an awesome job...

how their life changed after an encounter was so beautiful...

am off to read it once again...

u r awesome dear!

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SIHI1234

@SIHI1234

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Posted: 10 years ago

#303

Hey Priya you are an amazing writer and only i can say is a very big THANK YOU for such a beautiful story...from start to end nothing can be better than this

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Soul_Stirrer

@Soul_Stirrer

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#304

It was amazing priyaa...and yes u r right, making it sensuous And sexy wud hve harmed the beauty of it. This one was sooo beautifull...her first kiss that she gave only to raman finally their life starting afresh😳now waiting for ur next SS😆😉

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attiya1.3

@attiya1.3

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Posted: 10 years ago

#305

best part...only for this story i can compromise on romance...lovely story...but plzzz next time when you write a story,romance will be my demand😉😉😉...because i am a great fan of your write up...brilliant story😛😛😛

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Nikki

@desire_nikki

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#306

Okay...the first and foremost important thing i would say is...that u left me totally speechless after this update...I seriously don't know from where to start...everything was just beyond perfect...

When you have mentioned that you are not happy with this part..i seriously thought that you end it on a separation note...i was really disappointed...but then as soon as i have started reading...i was like in awww...for every moment...my disappointment changed into excitement...and then appreciation for your thinking and work..!! You have said it to be a sensuous part...but trust me... it wouldn't have been better than this is...and also no ending would have been better than this...!! I loved this part a lot..!!🤗

From beginning where Raman shared his thoughts...how his life was changed in mere one night... how his perspective changed towards his surrounding...including everyone...then his eagerness to see her again...the way he smiled when he found her near him with concern...& she followed him everywhere with the trust...Then he brought her to his world...i really love the moment when he was about to kiss her...& she said she had not let anyone touch her there..& then Raman asked her to start afresh...ishita confessed everything about her...aww...and finally a new start...everything changed...changed for good...a new start...it was just superb...!!🤗

And then you showed what they felt for each other...both knew their own feelings but are quiet as they are confused about others...everything you described about the change...it was perfect...and finally Ishita kissed him...rather it was just a peck...but still a first peck...😳😳 Awww...Mihir and Abrahim's wrong timing...hehhehehe😆 Raman's naughty remark...and finally they are going to be one...really loved it..!! This part is so perfect in itself that no other sensuous part would have been given that touch of perfection...and sweet ending to it...😊

It was a way too different story..plot...characterization...everything...but was perfect...I wish i could say "Continue Soon" ...I really wanted to...but then this end is so perfect that i think these words meant nothing...!! Indeed...i loved it..!! Good job...and please in future if you write more...don't forget to include me in ur pm list...😆

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Mrinalini

@minakrish

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Posted: 10 years ago

#307

A perfect ending to a perfect story! ❤️

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Gollums Precious

@OfTheHeart

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#308

Originally posted by: RaYaKapoor
res!

EDITED!
hey Priya..
Okay! Im really struggling to get the right words here! The story, the concept, the build up, the ambience, the narration.. All of it is just Perfect! I could literally imagine them in such a situation.. And I really loved the last part and the Epilogue. It was really sweet of Raman to help her get out of that life and start a new one.. Really!
An amazing story and one of my favs! Bookmarking it.. Read it twice already! :)

Love..
Priya:)

Thanks a lot Priya! (looks I am addressing myself!😆)

Anyways...

I am very happy that you liked it... I never that, that my fav story would be so well liked...😃

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Gollums Precious

@OfTheHeart

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#309

Originally posted by: yhmmylife
res

Hope you'd unres it soonish!😆

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Gollums Precious

@OfTheHeart

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#310

Originally posted by: aaminah123
Priya, I finally got time to catch up on this fiction of yours Andi can't help but admire the way you created the whole ambiance. The rain, his frustration, her routine. I could actually imagine her singing an old song, moving her leg as she sat there on bench and him giving her looks.
The whole idea reminded me of chameli, the movie. And somehow kareena kept coming to my mind. The first chapter had me when she was smoking cigarette and the continuation in the second chapter was superb and smooth. I never thought I'd enjoy reading Hindi/Roman so much but it seemed so apt.

I have yet to read the rest. Will comment as I go on.

Amna!!!😃

Seeing you on my thread is such a pleasure!😃

I am happy that you liked it, and for Chameli Part it was majorly inspired from that movie... I so Wanted a close end in that movie... but that open ended end haunted me in my dreams... now just imagine my turmoil and problem... So I thought to close that end and end the agony!😆

thanks for comments!🤗

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