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Aarohi Talegoankar

@Albeli26

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#291

wowww. it was soo beautiful. i must say ur concept wass really vry beautiful. i was completely hooked with ur story bt decided to cmnt at the end. it ws really marvellous piece ishita's characterization was also awesome. i am fan of ur writing from ur first ss which was drabble nd now this. i hope their love story will be completed soon. waiting for anothr ss.

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Anu

@RomComFan

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#292

What's to forgive? You did your story , it's tone and it's content more then justice.👍🏼

The last paragraph was... I feel like it could even apply to the feelings of the Ishu we see on our screens when she finally accepts their feelings for each other. Terrific!👏

I love how you completed this, makes so much sense.😆

Take a bow, you wrote a fantastic story!🤗

Thank you so very much for the PM.

I can't believe it's over... but I am very excited for your next piece whenever that may be!😉

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shravani_2311

@shravani_2311

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#293

suprb...

very well written...

epilouge was superb...kiss was romntic...

raman's dialouges was excellnt...

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Aru.Divan

@Aru.Divan

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#294

Priya, I read all the parts in one go. Must say a totally different story 👏
The way they both started off.. Raman kept looking down at her and while he was waiting for his car, he came to know about her, which brought about a change in him. I liked the part when he actually accepted her and give her something which she longed for.
The was she revealed her true identity, that was an emotional moment 😳.. In the epilogue, when you had mentioned they stayed together for 5 long years n alter on his proximity did affect her was just Awww 😳.. Finally the peck, it was just beautiful and explains how their relationship had changed .

Great SS. Thank you 😃

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lourel24

@lourel24

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#295

Awesome.U have made a simple peck so romantic.Superbly written.

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Bhanu

@btalwar

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#296

Hey please do not be disappointed. This was so beautiful. I was in half mind that the last part could take two routes. A sad or happy ending.

With this piece I would have settled for either of them

I loved the way he brought her back to life in real sense and gave her a life she never dreamt of.

And the kiss. Thank God you did not make it sensuous. It would have killed the essence of the story and its beauty. Like the story the kiss was abstract, subtle and dreamy and I loved it.

Loved the entire piece as a whole and wish Chameli had a similar ending ... though I know it was a more practical ending and loved it equally.

Phew ... an amazing journey came to an end but definitely left a smile on my face.

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neenu chandran

@NeenuAmmu

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#297

it was amazing after reading this only a genuine smile is on my face

truly it is awsm

tng 4 more amazing stories from u dear...

just too good

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Anu

@-HoneyDukes-

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#298

Priya...
Firstly, please don't under estimate your flawless writing by calling the update disappointing. It was so NOT! ⭐️ It couldn't have been more perfect than it was..DIL SE ❤️ ⭐️

Coming to the update... This story couldn't have had a better ending. It was just what was required. The gap of 5 years was perfectly right for this story. I loved that idea very much! Neither of them were at a stage to accept their growing feelings right away nor were they ignorant enough to let them and each other go! Time was all that was needed and they indeed got that..To know each other better. To live life better and they finally did. Both of them got the second chance which they deserved and they equally lived it, together! 😳

I am so glad he didn't let her go and went looking for her. He gave both of them the chance and also their unsaid story a chance. He made her a new person and she with all his support..gave herself a new life. I am glad she didn't let him go either. 😳 Both needed just one thing from life, a reason to live. He found her and she found herself and him with all his support! Beautiful that was..<333

For a moment when he closed in the distance between them, I was worried thinking she may walk out after misunderstanding his intentions but its good he stopped himself. Somewhere he may have lost the respect with which she looks up to him knowing he had never intended to get close to her. Atleast not the way she was used to. He remained as a friend first always! 😳

But I really loved the way he asked her " Mujhe bhi nahi " 😳 when she refused to let him kiss her on her lips. It said so much about their bond. Another really touching moment was when she told him her actual name. Another small gesture saying lots about the trust between them! <33 ❤️

I have said it before I will say it again, you have a beautiful way with their emotions..They just naturally come out so well. Makes me fall in love with them all over again. The realizations were so cute and adorable..Specially the last bit where she simply kisses him with all her rights. Not thinking about anything! 😳 All's well that ends well, and everything is beyond well for the 2 ❤️

Beautiful SS Priya, truly this is one the best SS's I have come across with such a different theme and characterizations! I am truly gonna miss reading this one.! ❤️ Thank you once again for the awesome piece of writing and please don't be disappointed with yourself! 😃🤗

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sanjI3

@sanjI3

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#299

amazing update!!coudnt have asked for a better ending👏thank you so much for giving us such a beautiful story!!superb😊such a different and novel concept so beautifully written!!kudos👏

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Nikita...

@lovablelove

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#300

pls pls pls dont stop.. Pls do continue ,u through this SS ,u make me feel that i m ur biggest fan ... Luv ur parts but pls i beg u too continue it plsss

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