RESTORED(MDT SS)part 9 page 28 - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: SAKIV-RAM

Some friend requested to write on leap with Ishita's kids so I decided to use RESTORED again



gud one...

difference needed ...

otherwise story luks all repeative...


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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
Waiting for Raman's Entry ...
looking forward to his bonding with his SOns ...!!😳

Thankyou once again for writing this ...
I have came to the forum after many days jzt for ur Post ...!!
That much I love your writings ...,,

Hmm...what can I compliment ?
U are always the Best ...Keep Rocking ..!!


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Posted: 10 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: Sweety_98

Waiting for Raman's Entry ...

looking forward to his bonding with his SOns ...!!😳

Thankyou once again for writing this ...
I have came to the forum after many days jzt for ur Post ...!!
That much I love your writings ...,,

Hmm...what can I compliment ?
U are always the Best ...Keep Rocking ..!!


did you check 'In Your Heart '
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: SAKIV-RAM

did you check 'In Your Heart '


I am waiting for your update ...
Update soon ...!! I a getting sleep ...but still dnt wanna sleep B4 reading ur Update ..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: Sweety_98


I am waiting for your update ...
Update soon ...!! I a getting sleep ...but still dnt wanna sleep B4 reading ur Update ..

go to sleep buddy.
It may take time but it will be today only.
I will start writting in five minutes and then it may yake around an hour to finish.
But one thing about update Mihir kee band bhajegee
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
part 2

Scene starts with Ishita and Aarav waiting for Raman .Aayu looking as if not bothered but it is not exactly the case as he always heard about Raman's anger from others but he never faced it and never wanted either.

Then after few minutes of wait Raman finally came and Aarav goes running an dhugs him.

Aarav "Papa aap kaisey hon?"

Raman "I am great champ .Merey liyen wait kar rahen hon."

Aarav "Han.Main aapko bahuth miss kiyan.I love you papa."

Aayu who noticed Raman back also came running to Raman and hugged him.Raman enjoys competetion between his sons.While one is very attentive toward him and sticks to him other being his mothers pet.

Aayu "I miss you too papa."

Raman "Miss you too beta."

Ishita "Han Raman .Aap aagayen."

Raman signing can't you see.

Aarav "Papa mama ney aapkey liyen aloo key paaratehn banaaya hain."

Mihir who was with Raman "Abh papa ko maskaa mar rahen hon."

Aarav "Main merey papa ko maskaa kyon maaronga.Mera papa mera best friend hain."

Mihir "Papa tumhaara best friend tho tum mere biwi kee saadiyan jalongey kyaa."

Mihir "Mihika key saadiyan jalaaya .Usske wajaha sey Mihika poorey din mujhpey gussa thee."

Aarav starts crying and "Papa main ney kuch nahen kiyya sab kuch Aayu ney kiyan."

Aayu "Papa nahen Aarav ney kiyan."

Mihika and Ishita confused .

Raman "Mihika tumney kissey dekha wahan."

Mihika "Kissey mathlab?Mainey ek ko dekha .I don't know who kaun hain.Shaayad Aayu."

Ruhi "Chitti aap aisey kaisey kissey key uupar blame laga skatey hain.Correct boliyen aap kissey dekha."

Mihika "Mujhey nahen patha but Aayu hee hoga."

Aayu "Aayu hee hoga mathlab.Aap kehrahen hain kee main bad boy hun.Merey wajaha sey problems hain."

Aarav "Han yahen hain.Hummesha tum hee sab kuch karthey hon."

Aaarav "Aur mujhey blame miltha hain."

Aayu "Jhoot math bolo.Tum sab kuch karthey hon aur blame mujhey miltha hain."

Mihir "Donon chup.Aur sach bolo kissney kiyan."

Aayu "Theek sey bolon chup rehna hain sach boolna hain."

Mihir "Sach bolo."

Aarav going to Raman "Papa sab kuch Mihir chaachu key wajaha sey huan.Hum chitti key help karnaa chahthey they."

Mihir "Sadiyan jalaakar help karnaa chahthey hon."

Aarav "Yeh aayu ka idea thaa.Ussney kahan saadiyan jalaaney key liyen aur ussey ney kiyan."

Mihir "Aayu tho tumney kiyan yeh sabh .Kyaa mila tumhey ussey .Abh Mihika key liyen naye saadiyan khareeedney pad rahen hain."

Aayu upset and silent as his twin is revealing matter.But Ruhi was quite.

Aarav "Aap itney lazy hon aur insensitive aapney chitti ko shopping bhee nahen legayen.Chitti kitney upset thee.Aur unkey saare sadiyan puraani hogayen."

Aayu continued "Aur chitti complaint kar rahen thee.Kitney sad thee.Aur aap tho insensitive hon."

Aarav "Issliyen aarav ney bola kee .Chitti key puraaney kapadey alaadiya tho aap unkey liyen nayen kapadey khareedongey aur unko shopping lekey jaongey."

Mihika "Dekho bachey bhee jaanthey hain tum kitnaa unromantic hon."

Mihir "But mainey last week he nayaa dress laaya thaa."

Aayu "What aap uss dress chitti ko diyan.Kitnaa gaudy thaa."

Mihir "Gaudy? designer wear thaa."

Aarav "Uss dress designer hona kaafe nahen hain.Aap chitti jaisey natural beauty ko uss jaisey designer costume diyan."

Aayu "Mihika chitti simple costume mey kitnaa accha lagthee hain.Bilkul pari Uss dress mey tho monster lag rahen thee."

Aarav "Chittti aap bolon naa."

Mihika "Han bachey bhee jaanthey hain ,You are a jerk Mihir .Tumsey accha main un donon ko lkey gayan hotha tho achey select karthey."

Mihika slams away from there angrily and Mihir goes on to persue her.

Aarav and Aayu gave hi fi to each other.

Raman taking Aayu in his arms "Abh bathaon sach kyaa hain."

Aayu "Chitti ney dee ko shopping anhen legayen."

Ishita "Tum teenon naa.Abh undonon key beech jhagada suru karvaaya."

Aarav "Who hummarey uupar complaint karge."

Raman "Tum donon chup rahon.Aur kitna advantage lethey hon mera ."

Aayu kissing his father "Mera papa mera best hain.Aap hee ney tho kahan kee sab kuch aapas mey solve karnaa hain."

Raman "Aur mainey yeh bhee kahan kee badon sey tameez sey baath karnaa hain aur hummesha masthi nahen chalthee.,"

Ishita "Raman aap choddho yeh baath ko ,Nahen tho next uss double trap mey aap hongey."

Raman "I am finished."

Taking even Aarav in his arms both together in his arms.

Ishita "Raman naastha ka time huan hain.Apa ready hokar aayiyen ."

Raman leaves and aarav and aayu follows him.

Then in breakfast Raman makes Aarav eat with his own hands while Aayu is mothers pet.Ruhi between them .

They could see Mihir and Mihika quarreling .

Mihir "Theek hain .Aaj main tumhey shopping ley jaaonga aur dinner bhee please abh tho baath karon."

Aarav "Chitti maanjaon naa .Maaf kardo .Hum hain naa aapkey help karney.Hum sabh jaayengey."

Raman "Mujhey bina poochey involve kardiyan tumney ."

Aayu "Papa mama bhee aarahen hain.Aap ghar mey akeley kyaa karongey."

Ishita just know what is gonna happen .

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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
Finally read your Update ...!!
Will go to sleep now ...
Anyways loved the son's bonding with Raman ...😳

Next time ...hope to see a convo b/w Ishu & raman ...

Well going ...continue soon ...
Dont make me wait ...not good for health ...😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
Great updates !
totally different !
twins !!
these 2 are so naughty lol
confusing anyone !
poor Mihir and Mihirka !
Love Ruhi's bond with her brothers !
Thanks for PM (:
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
Nice start. Loved both the parts.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
Beautiful Update .. loved the happy family .. And the twins Awww... Extremely cute :) :) Now waiting for a sweet Ishra moment .. Pls update soon and yes thank you for this lovely update

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