ff-My Life Starting With An Unknown Person updated part72(a) aug28

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sriya

@sarayasriya

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#901

Originally posted by: rufana10
sorry for not commenting on previous parts Sriya
but i read all of that
coming to d update it was so beautiful and romantic 😳
u write this part very nicely dear...loved it so much 😊
thank u for pm
looking forward to d next update😊

thank u dear,ur likes and comments values much to me😊😛

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Sushma

@SushSathisha

Rocker

+ 10

Posted: 10 years ago

#902

Originally posted by: sarayasriya

thank u dear,atlast i fulfilled ur wish too😉😛

yiuyyy by the way next update lab?

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sriya

@sarayasriya

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#903

Originally posted by: sush_rddt

yiuyyy by the way next update lab?

it is on the way dear ,track me laane keliye kuch time chahiye,both for me and the couple ishra😉

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Balasri

@Sri1091

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#904

Originally posted by: sarayasriya

it is on the way dear ,track me laane keliye kuch time chahiye,both for me and the couple ishra😉

Are we getting it today??

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sriya

@sarayasriya

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#905

sushma dear update may take sometime,for making upto u and sri a small teaser😛hope u all like it

teaser

at bhallas mansion:
daadi,mihir and romi are waiting for raman and ishitha eagerly to enjoy by teasing them
seeing raman and ishitha at the entrance the three moves towards entrance stopping them from entering into the house
daadi with mihir:mihir go and look outside once i couldnt know whether the sun rised or he was still sleeping sensing not to disturb some romantic couple
listening to daadi's comments ishu looks down while her cheeks turns to deep red due to continuous blush,where as her husband was hardly trying to keep a straight face
mihir:haa daadi,iam also thinking about the same,see we are living in dark because of some romantic couple,shall i go and check daadi?,he looks both at ishu and raman
romi:arey mihir bhai,chod dho suraj ko iss dhin ko,lagtha hi yeh romantic couple ko aur ek dhin chahiye,turning to raman and ishitha,"bhai should we can stay here or should we leave the home and look for shelter under any tree for this day
raman:arey bewakoof kya bakwas baath kar rahi hu thum,chup karo nahi tho thapad marengi
daadi:holding raman's chin she turns raman towards her,"phele bathavo kya kiya thum dono kal raath,kaha thi thum dhono,taking both of their hands into hers she speaks more with them,"chelo koyi baath nahi hi,humara paas bahuth time hi,pura dhin kaali hi,we can sit and share what u did yesterday night
raman:freeing his hand with shy smile,kuch bhi daadi,thumko sharam nahi hi,yeh dho gadhe se milkar thum bhi kuch bhi baath kar rahi hu,with that he walks inside quickly not giving anyone a chance leaving ishu alone at the entrance while others starts looking at her cheekly
ishu:with a confusion and shyness she speaks making raman to halt his steps,"ayyo raman yeh kya hi,voh mera word hi,aap kuch bhi baath karke mujje math phasso yeh logon ke beech,running to him she hugs him tightly hiding her face in his chest not to look at them to blush more

Edited by sarayasriya - 10 years ago

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kaa1202

@kaa1202

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#906

This is not fair Sriya. U r giving a teaser instead of an update. Anyway Teasing session & IshRa hug is nice in this teaser.. Cont soon..

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Balasri

@Sri1091

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#907

Omg kitna blush kar rahi hein ishita too good... After reading dis teaser I can't wait for d full update so plzzz continue soon... Itz biggg requesssttt