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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: DEEPIKAA0123

sorry dear for not givng likes and comments in all ur previous parts i was badly stuck wid some very img work thts why i am unable to give them but i read all ur parts and i must say u written them all very well they all are awesome. And i promise i will try to like them all now very sorry again its a beautiful story plz continue soon.



thank u dear,no worries give ur review when ever u r free,always personal life takes first place,will continue soon😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sush_rddt

superb update!!!

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Originally posted by: sarath12700

missing ur update dear



sorry strucked with work,will update nowšŸ˜•
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thank u dear will update soon😊
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hai friends updated next part in hurry ignore if any typing mistakes,give ur reviews as usualšŸ˜›

part-69


ishu on phone:"bhayya sab ready hi naa,raath me koyi problem nahi hotha hi naa?meri pathi ka birthday celebration hi,saab teek me hona padega"
person:nahi madam sab teek hi,aap kal jo kuch kaha vaise hi kiya miney ,aap tension math lelo
ishu:hmm teeke mi aaj raath me aavungi meri pathi ke saath"
person:teeke
ishu:runs upwards to do other preparations which are at the ending stage
raman:comes to their room,and looks at ishu who was searching something on the floor
"what r u searching ishitha"
ishu:she gets up listening to raman's voice
raman:bolo what r u searching
ishu:raman meri saree pin,gold pin hi voh,ghir gayi,diktha nahi kaha hi voh pin
raman:chod dho na madrasan naya vala karidh karengi
ishu:aisa kaisa baath kar rahi hu raman,yeh gold pin seedha saadha nahi hi,by scolding him she resumes her searching
raman(st):dekho yeh aurath,her husband is rich and her appa is rich still she is bothering for a pin
ishu:notices the pin finally and jumps like a kid holding the pin shouting "milgayi milgayi raman"
raman:ruko madrasan eh koyi oscar award hi kya ithna kush ho rahi hu,yeh pin hi,yeh bagawan why u all women love gold more than husband
ishu:hogaya aapka yeh pin mujje mummiji ne diya what will she think if she comes to know that i lost the pin,she will think iam still immature
to handle the things
raman:voh tho saach hi na madrasan
ishu:looking angrily moves towards the door scolding raman "aap hi naa bahuth karelu hi kabhi bhi meeta baath nahi bolengi,raavan kumar"
raman:pulls her towards him which makes her to land in his arms
ishu:chodo mujje aapse baath karna hi bekar hi
raman:lekin mujje aisa jhansi rani ko dekhna bahuth pasand hi"
ishu:she smiles slightly listening to his words,covering up her blush she speaks to him "raman chodo mujje aap javo office mujje shaanth milengi
raman:kya madrasan thum saach me kaisi pathni hu,pathi bada business man hu phir bhi thumhare liye time adjust karke thumhara saath time spend kari hu lekin thum
ishu:ha mi kya jaldhi bolo mujje bahuth kaam hi she speaks annoyingly
raman:pulling her more closer towards him,why r u stressing urself madrasan doctor kaha tha na thumko zyada rest lena padega,phir kal se yeh saab kya hi?
ishu:raman phele chodo mujje i doesnt have time to talk with u
raman:looking into her eyes "miney kaha tha na ishitha thum koyi kaam nahi karengi"
ishu:aaj tho karna padega raman please chodo mujje
raman:cupping her face "mera baath suno madrasan"
ishu:removing his hands from her face "aaj nahi raman,kalse sunengi,aab thum nashta karke office jaavo"
raman:if u wont stop ur circus then i wont go to office today
ishu:ignoring him,aapka marzi raman
raman:teeke thumko kya fikar hi mera by saying he sits on the bed
ishu:ithna ziddhi ho raman aap,she sits beside him to convince "raman sunona?"
raman:turns his face away from her as if he was anger on her
ishu:turning his face towards her "raman i wont do any work,now r u happy"
raman:mujje kya, karo jo kuch karna
ishu:please raman maaf karo na
raman:is baar maaf kar rahi hu aur ek baar tho nahi maaf karungi,he speaks as he is the principal and his student did some mistake
ishu:aap bhi naa,jaldhi aavo i will serve the breakfast by saying she rushes down to send raman to his office firstly so that she can do her work peacefully
after breakfast
...
ishu:moves towards her room to carry on her preparations
in the hall
romi:bhai chalona office jana hi na late ho rahi hu?
raman:ha chalo by saying both walks out
romi:bhai get into the car what happened to u today?
raman:wait romi i forgot my wallet i will come u wait here by saying he rushes to his room
ishu:listening to his footsteps hides all her things in the wardrobe and sits on the bed pretending to take rest
raman:walking into his room looks at ishu who was watching tv
ishu:kya hogaya raman aap return kyou aaya
raman:kuch bool gayi thi isiliye aaya
ishu:getting down from the bed she looks at their room to glance what might he forgot
raman:going towards her he speaks as if he is searching something really
ishu:aisa kya boolgaya aap by saying she once again scans all the room
raman:pecks her cheek quickly,
stepping back he looks at her with a grin on his face
yehi boolgaya madrasan
ishu fumes with anger one for disturbing her work and the other reason is kissing her on her cheek even knowing she has allergy
she scolds him in rage "haadh hotha hi raaman aapko kithne baar bola mujje allergy hi,phir aisa kiss karne kaa aardh kya hi,aapko kya hi,pain mera hi naa
fuming on him taking the first aid box she gulps her allergy tablet angrily
raman:felt sad listening to her words he silently started walking back
ishu:looking at him understood how she spoken to him(st):ayyo ishu thum kya kiya saab gadbid hogaya raman keliye surprise kar rahi hu,but see what u have did,because of this only amma asks u to control ur tongue
kuch bhi bolthi rahthi hu thum,dekho raman kithna sad hogaya,leking i didnt scolded him intentionally he was spoiling all my efforts of completing the tasks
with that anger i slipped all these waste words
aab raman ko cool karna padega nahi tho raath me voh coperate nahi karengi cake cutting me
she rushes towards him stopping him by holding his hand from stepping outside the room
raman:looks at her angrily
ishu:holding her ears "sorry raman i didnt scolded u intentionally voh mujje patha nahi hi voh saab mi kaise bola,u can kiss another cheek also,i wont say anything
never again
raman:silently walks out
ishu:follows him till down pleading him to forgive her,she was almost at the verge to tear up when she sees surroundings she understood
that she was in the hall now
raman:looks at tearful ishu,turning to daadi,"daadi i and ishitha going out we will come back within 2hrs by saying he holds ishu's wrist to take her along with him
ishu(st):ayyo murgan what happened to raman today,he is completely in duty to spoil my preparations"
looking at him she speaks "raman lekin kaha "
she stops speaking further looking at his angry eyes
...
in the car she tries to make a conversation only to get angry glances from raman
after 15mins they were infront of multi speciality hospital
ishu:raman hum hospital kyou aaya,is anyone are sick related to us?
raman:silently walks inside and gets an appointment with a dermatologist
ishu:walks towards him to enquire him again "raman please kuch bathavo na"
raman:dont make me to shout in the hospital keep quiet
ishu:ithna gussa kyou raman,galthi hogaya maaf kar sakthi hu naa raman aap,bathavo raman hum kyou aaya hospital
raman:without giving a word walks to the doctor cabin holding her hand
dr.malini:looks at the couple who entered her cabin "please take ur seat"
both takes their seats silently raman introduces himself to the doctor
dr.malini:bathavo what is ur problem "she looks at the couple"
raman:keeping a straight face without giving any glance towards his wife speaks to doctor "my wife is not allowing me to kiss her"
ishitha looks at him with shocking eyes
while the doctor doesnt understands anything she speaks to him "excuse me what u r speaking i was unable to understand
ur words
raman:speaks loudly with clear words to the doctor "my wife is not allowing me to kiss her"
ishu:tries to stop him she pulls his hand sleeve to make him to look at her but everything went in vain as he was in
no position to listen her words
dr:feeling his words awkward she finally speaks "mr.raman why r u opening ur personal problems in front of me,iam a skin specialist not a psychartist
raman:yehi hi na mera problem bi
ishu:she speaks in low voice "raman aab bahuth hogaya chalo ghar"
raman:pushing her hand away "i wont come untill unless my problem gets solved"
ishu:feeling embarrased in front of dr she again tries to convince raman "please raman voh kya sochengi aap aisa baath karengi tho"
raman:doctor please solve my problem
ishu(st):ayyo murgan raman ko kya hogaya achanak isa meri izzat sab karab kar rahi hu third person ke saamne,voh meri baath bi nahi sun rahi hu
dr.malini:aap kya baath kar rahi hu,how can i solve ur problem yeh aapka personal hi,please aap jaayeye patients mere liye wait kar rahi hu,u r making the situation very awkward
raman:aap doctor hu naa then u have to solve this problem
ishu:unable to bear his nuisance in the hospital she speaks loudly "raman bahuth hogaya aapka chalo ghar"
raman:nahi mi kahi nahi jaa rahi hu,she has to solve my problem
dr:how can i solve the problem if ur wife doesnt wants u to kiss u,please go now,even to talk like this is very embarrasing
ishu:she whispers to him in a pleading voice "raman please u can kiss me how many u want i wont repeat this mistake again,dont embarras me more"
raman:without budging to ishu's pleading he looks back at doctor continuing his conversation,"sirf aap hi solve kar sakthi hu mera problem"
dr:understands its waste to talk with raman,turning to ishu she speaks to her "what happened to ur husband is he mentally disordered"
before ishu can reply raman speaks angrily "iam perfectly fine tell me that u cant solve my problem"
dr:irritatingly she speaks "how can i solve ur problem u r totally out of mind,see iam a dermatologist"
raman:isiliye aaya,
dr:please dont create any rucus here go soon
raman:why cant u understand my problem,my wife is not allowing me to kiss her
ishu:looks at him angrily
dr:so what u want me to do,mi counsellor nahi hi
raman:u have to treat her
dr:how it will be possible
raman:kaisi doctor hu thum,cant u treat her allergy,then why this big hospital
dr:she speaks surprised to his words "allergy?"
raman:ha if someone kisses her on her cheeks she gets allergy
dr:understanding his problem she takes deep breath to refresh herself
raman:see how can any husband can restrain himself seeing his wife with apple jaise cheeks he speaks looking at ishu
ishu blushes listening to ramans untimely comments at her forgetting her anger on him
raman:again turning to dr,"and see if my wife blushes like this how can i control myself,tell me is anything wrong with me'
dr:tries to hide her laugh seeing raman's frustration about his wife
raman:do anything but i should not listen a word allergy from her
dr:ok mr.raman bhalla i will do first i need to take some blood tests for her before treating her
raman:listening to the word blood he speaks with fear,"no way i will not allow u to take any blood tests
dr:then how can i know the problem behind her allergy
raman:no think about any other solution which doesnt hurts my wife
ishu:looks lovingly at his concern even in anger,she signals doctor to end this discussion soon
dr:understanding ishu's worry she speaks to raman "ok raman i will think about it and will call u later now u can leave,i have to check other patients also
raman;thank u but u will find a solution na?
dr:with a smile 100% raman bhalla
after raman walking out ishu looks at dr embarrasingly
dr:dont trouble ur husband mrs.raman,he loves u very much
ishu:with a blush adorning her face she speaks to the doctor "i know he loves me,lekin voh meri izzath sab karab kiya aapke saamne,mi dekhlungi unko aab"
dr.smiles while ishu leaving the cabin
...
in the car ishu shouts at him "raman what nonsense u spoken at hospital,voh doctor kya socchengi"
raman:dont speak to me,iam not talking to u,i was angry at u,he speaks with a straight face
ishu:aap phirse shuru kiya u took the revenge on me na by speaking all nonsense in the hospital she speaks with a pouting lips
raman:he murmurs himself seeing her pouting lips,"aise innocent face rakkar tempt karengi phir kiss karengi tho mujje par thalwar uttayengi
ishu remains silent seeing his anger
...
in the afternoon in raman's office
mihir:bhai kya hogaya aapko subah se chillathi hu sab par
raman(st):yeh madrasan mera saare mood karab kardiya dekho elizabith jaise feel hojayengi pagal
mihir:bhai where are u?sunn rahi hu naa ?
raman:mihir thum bi uss madrasan jaise mera mood math karab karo jaavo yahase
mihir walks out talking to himself "samajme nahi aarahi hu bhai ko kya hogaya aaj"
ishu:walks to office only to stopped by receptionist stella
stella:madam aapko kya chahiye
ishu:miney raman ko milney keliye aaya
stella:first u have to take appointment from sir's P.A then i will allow u to sir's cabin
ishu:voh P.A kaha hi
just then lisa walks to them,"stella problem kya hi,turning to ishu "aap kaha hi"
ishu:mujjje ramanse milna hi
lisa:raman sir,lekin what is the relation of u with raman sir
ishu:smiles shyly when lisa asks the relation of her with raman
lisa:in a low voice "aap voh phool vala hi kya?'
ishu:ha?
lisa:i mean r u the same who sent boquets to raman sir,aap sir ka girl friend hi kya?
ishu:"ishu accha chance milgaya use karo iss lisa ko," haa how u know that iam raman's girl friend
lisa:iam very intelligent isiliye mi raman sir ka P.A bangaya
ishu:in a sarcastic tone "ha ha i can know that u r so intelligent,now i understood why raman is such a big businessman"
lisa:how?
ishu:because he has such an intelligent P.A
lisa:thank u mam,come i will show u sir's cabin
lisa first entering to the cabin speaks to raman "sir aapka girl friend aayathi,
raman:in an angry tone "kya hi girl friend,kiska?"
lisa:in a confused tone "aapka girl friend sir" by saying she gives way to ishu who enters his cabin with a naughty smile
ishu:turning to lisa "sir mujjpe gussa hi,because of this he was shouting on u
lisa:lekin kyou mam,why he is angry at u
ishu:he kissed me i scolded him,isiliye
lisa:turning to raman "sir u r so childish,silly reason keliye gussa hogaya kya sir"
raman:lisa u go first i will talk to u later
ishu locking the cabin moves to his table
while raman angrily moves towards sofa and settles their
ishu:ignoring his anger she starts taking out the carriage "raman aaj miney aapkeliye bahuth saara recepies laaya"
raman silently ignores her keeping an eye at her
ishu:she tries to take out a box with her finger tips while raman looks at her gymnastics on the box
when she was about to loss the grip on the box he rushes to her,taking the box from her he looks at her annoyingly
raman:pagal ho kya u dont even know how to hold a box,koyi miss universe nahi hu thum
ishu:voh chicken hi raman,isiliye mujje ajeeb laga uss box ko hold karne me
raman:tho kyou laya chicken thum,
ishu:daadi ne banaya,she said ur anger will come down if u see chicken isiliye laaya
raman:seeing anything my anger doesnt come down
ishu:strucking her pallu end into her waist she starts serving all the dishes on his plate ignoring raman's anger
raman:looking at his favourite spot he stumbles with his words "thum thum kya kar rahi hu ishitha"
ishu:looking at him "mi kya kar rahi hu,aapkeliye food serve kar rahi hu"
raman(st):she doesnt allow me to touch her but see fashion show dikha rahi hu,office me,mera cabin me
ishu:looking at raman "raman aavo na lunch karo,i didnt served u chicken if u want u serve it on ur own
raman(st):mujje yeh saab nahi chahiye madrasan sirf thum chahiye,lekin yeh baath thumko samajthi hi nahi
ishu:raman aavo na baito
raman:walks back to the sofa taking his place on it
ishu:walking to him,please raman zyada zidh kar rahi hu thum,hospital revenge se thum nahi satisfy hogaya kya
raman:i didnt took any revenge,just i told my problem to the doctor
ishu:smiling shyly kuch bhi raman,by saying she forcefully pulls him to get up from the sofa
raman:stumbling on his foot speaks to her "yeh kya zabardasth hi madrasan mujje nahi chahiye thumhara kaana,saying that he steals glances at her waist
ishu:tries to pull him towards the table which makes both to stumble which makes them to land on the sofa raman on sofa ishu on the top of him
raman:aanke karab hogaya madrasan diktha nahi hi kya
ishu:with a pout i dont know something came in between my feet isiliye slip hogaya
raman:something nahi hi mera foot pagal
ishu:innocently haa aapka foot,lekin aisa kaisa ho saktha
raman:feels something soft on his hands,he looks down only to see he was helding her waist securely
(st)vah kya baath raman luck hi thumhara dekho kaisa milgaya mera favorite spot
ishu:adjusting her hair she speaks to him "raman sorry bola na abhi bi gussa kyou kar rahi hu mujpar"
raman holds her tightly which makes her to look at him with surprising eyes
with a shy smile she speaks to him "raman aap mujje chodiye"
raman:carresing her waist with his fingers "kya madrasan u always speaks only to leave,did u anytime asked me to hold u,kaisi biwi ho madrasan thum
and to that why u wore sareee today,mujje maarne ka iradha hi kya
her cheeks were turned to red listening to his comments and at his hands which was doing their work
raman:madrasan thumko patha hi yeh thumhara waist mera favourite spot hi
ishu:blushing deeply "kuch bhi raman"
raman:madrasan kithna torture karthi hu thum mujje
ishu:raman if anyone sees us it wont look good,chodo na
raman:u r very talented madrasan isiliye door lock kiya na pehle hi thum
ishu:holds his hand to stop the sweet torture he was doing to her
raman:pulls her under him in one go,making her to lie under him
ishu:looks at him with wide eyes shocking at his actions
raman:pushing her pallu away which was covering his view looks at her to see her cheeks turning to deep red due to shy
ishu:with a stammering words "raman aap kya kar rahi hu chodo mujje" she tries to get up only to be pulled back by him
raman:wait madrasan mujje bahuth kaam hi,by stoping her struggling he moves down towards her waist while ishu feels restless with his romantic gestures
he starts trailing soft kisses on her waist taking his own time,the only thing she did is to whisper his name
raman:mi yaha hi naa madrasan dont disturb me let me do my work,holding her tightly he continues his kisses
while she shuts her eyes tightly unable to anticipate what happening to her,holding his hand sleeves tightly with her both hands
after trailing lots of kisses on her he pulls her towards him making her to lay her head on his chest wrapping her hands around him
raman smiles lovingly at her flushed face "kaisi hu madrasan mera revenge"
ishu:hugging him tightly she speaks with a smile playing on her lips "kuch bhi raman"
after staying on the same position for long time he speaks "madrasan mi koyi mattress nahi hu isa sone ka utoo mujje bhook lag rahi hu,aur bahuth kaam hi mujje
ishu:gets up from him with his help muttering "raavan kumar"
raman:chalo serve karo mujje
ishu:nahi i wont iam going kuch bhi karungi aap,shaam me jaldhi aavo she speaks all in one go without looking at him
raman:kya madrasan u like this,do u want me to do this again
ishu:kuch bhi,aapko kuch sharam hi nahi hi,mi jaa rahi hu,aur baath yaadh rako shaam me jaldhi aavo
raman:ishitha wait
ishu:looks at him
he walks to her,while she looks on at him
taking out the new mobile from his pocket he gives to her,"pagal if u want anything voh muh kolkarke bolo muhh bandh karke math baito
thumhara pathi hu mi,u have all rights on me ishitha,i know u never asks me wrong wishes,why r u seeing me as a outsider,it hurts me so much
he speaks with a sad voice
ishu:seeing him sad because of her,tears starts whelming in her eyes
raman:dont hide anything from me,it hurts me alot ishitha
he pulls her into a hug
ishu:hugging him back i wont hurt u raman sorry maaf karo mujje iss bar
raman:cupping her face kisses on her forehead
lisa who comes to inform raman about the meeting sees raman's back while kissing ishu
she turns away abruptly muttering sorry
raman:steps back from ishu and looks at lisa angrily who turned back to face them,"pagal ho kya door knock karna nahi aatha hi kya
ishu:holding his hand in a sweet voice "raman gussa kyou voh koyi urgent me aaya hoga"
raman:in the same sweet voice teeke madrasan he speaks looking at her eyes lovingly
lisa(st):yeh bagawan sir is speaking in a very cool way
ishu:smiles hearfully seeing raman,"mi chalungi"
raman:ha chalo,dyan se chalo,kaisa aaya thum
ishu:driver aaya mere saath,aap lunch karo,aur shyam me jaldhi aavo
raman:teeke madrasan
lisa(st):oh my god sir is going to his girl friend's house,lekin mujje lagtha voh ladki ka shaadhi hogaya,sindoor hi uska maang me,oh my god sir is living in wrong relationship
i have to stay away from raman sir
after ishu leaving their cabin,raman speaks to lisa,kya aisa door ke saamne kada hone ka iradha hi kya,andhar aavo,we have to work alot
lisa(st):haa what "we kya hi?"aur kya work hotha hi hum dhono karne kaa,bagawan why u r revealing new new secrets to me


forgive me if didnt reached ur expectationsšŸ˜›
i will try to update next part by tomorrow if possible but not puccašŸ˜›
😊

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sriya u wer awesome..
i loved the hospital and office scene so much!!!
lovely yaar
Edited by sush_rddt - 10 years ago
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Hahaha wonderful update hospital scene was really very funny raman bhi na sirf aadi Baath batakar doc ko bhi confuse kar liya... Ofc romance is awesome ab Lisa raman ko misunderstand karegi hope she won't spread dat rumour in ofc... Bechara raman ishu ki pranks ki vajah se vusko band bajjayegi
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Hi Sriya,
The way Raman asked the doctor for solution to kiss his wife was really awesome. Unknowingly he is hampering Ishita's efforts for his B'Day celebrations. Lisa was rocking. Now she thinks Raman as womaniser who is having an affair with a married girl. I wish u show more of Lisa scenes. She adds funny quotient. Emotional convo between IshRa in his cabin was really nice. Do cont soon..

With Regards-Kaarthikk.
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Awesome update 😊
It's really nice.
Raman going to the doctor and complaining is so funny🤣
Hope that doctor would cure this allergy. What kind of an allergy is it? Poor raman🤣
Ishu always misleads this Lisa.
Lisa getting scared of raman is awesome.
It's really a wonderful update 😃
Please continue soon can't wait to read the next part 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
super hilarious update...loved itšŸ‘šŸ‘..Shriya
hospital scene was so funny doc & ishita dono ka chera dekhnelayak tha...office scenewas fabulous...add more scene of lisa with some funny stuffšŸ˜‰
thank you for the pm

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