ISHRA SS - Divinity in disguise (Last Chapter - Pg 94))

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ishra123

@ishra123

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#341

excellent!!!!!
very Hot! !!!!!!
Emotional! !!!!!
Thanks fr Sharing

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Nikki

@desire_nikki

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Posted: 10 years ago

#342

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Okay...That was again an awsumm...amazing...superb part..!! This part is full of Adi..who has to suffer right from his childhood...Indeed a 12 year child had seen more than any other child have,,...But the way Ishita was feeling about him...awww...such a motherly affection that was...she noticed him...that he spoke almost after days...& she even didn't felt bad whatever he said...aww...😊

And then in starting when u showed Ishita sleepin in middle of Raman & Ruhi...awww...it was such a cute moment...Raman n Ruhi are indeed adorable...😳 And when Ruhi consoles Ishita...omg mi was smiling ear-to-ear after reading the whole trio scene...heheh...😆

Most emotional part was when they gave Shagun's picture to him...and then he expressed his inner turmoils...his situation he was going through...and The new parents..aww..they are acting as friend to him...They are giving him much needed support and space...wow..you define everything so well...It seems like it's the reality of Adi shown in YHM...!! Poor him...but i am happy that Raman n Ishita is there with him...😳

Seriously...such an amazing part...full of much needed family moments..!! & then romance of puttar and madrasan...haaye..😳😆 Loved each n every part of it..!!

And yeah please continue it di..! Don't end it at such a note...I would love to read..!! Please...😊😊

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shimerrr

@shimerrr

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#343

superb update.
this is one of d best stories i have read in d yhm forum...and i love d way ishras relation is shaping and d way they are handling adi...pls do continue this ss.

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lourel24

@lourel24

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#344

Wow!it was awesome.Glad adi poured out his feelings.sometimes it is quite necessary.

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Manmeet

@mrsrakhra

Navigator

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Posted: 10 years ago

#345

😊 thanks for the PM Aruna...

its another fabulous update from you👏... i totally loved it how you portrayed Adi here... about what he is going through due to the relationship between his father and mother...how badly it has affected him and left so many scars on his soul...which will be really hard for Ishita and Raman to heal... because he is kid who is soon going to be a teenager...

i am really excited to read further as to how these 4 will develop that bonding... and finally be a happy family... but i must say... a tough task for Ishita... first she had transforemd one Raavan Kuman...and now here's the junior version.. 😆

keep up the good work 👍🏼

and please PM me for the next update. 😊

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Nikki

@desire_nikki

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#346

Comment unres on pg 48...:)

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usaonly

@usaonly

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

#347

Beautiful update the way you make Adhi express his feeling is so good and he had his parents to be by his side like he never have this kind of attention before. It slowly will make him develope his soft corner for them with their uncondition love. Aru You are getting better day by day the way you are portray all character make us get connect to them. Thank you so much for all you time and hard work for us.👏👏