SHE does not want him to know - Page 6

hey tht was superb! i wasnt following ur writings so far, cos i wasnt keeping very free..but abse i will try not miss any.. so loved dis..i love ur concept of writing wat dey feel behind d scenes. super entertaining! 😃

lovely!

Hey C!

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I must say I am going purely by their chemistry which is unmatched and by my fascination to weave stories. I am lucky that so many are like me we are like a small island which is floating in the sea in between reality And fiction and fiction within reality it is nice na we are a small strong island!
Thanks so much Aishu for always encouraging me thx

I am so so sorry I completely forgot to mention the request to write something on kya scene came from Jyoe. Many thx to her also
Jyoe- am so sorry completely forget to credit u ya! Itney din baad came on IF Bhul Gayi!

Beautiful.Its short but very effective.

Rusty? If this is what you come up with when you're rusty, I can't even imagine what you'll write when you get back into your groove 😲

C, you have really proved that brevity is the soul of wit. Your fics are short yet beautiful enough to bring a smile to our faces. Really commendable!

The main attraction of your fun fics is, of course, that they're based on THEM. But what gives them that extra bit of charm is that you turn some teeny tiny off screen moments and weave your imagination around them to create magical scenes. If it was the Gujarati Saree line in the previous one, it was the 'sachi' nahi 'pukka' bit that did it for me in this one. How do you come up with these? Brilliant stuff 👏

I especially loved that we got one from her POV. While HE is quite vocal about his emotions, SHE is always composed and careful, hesitant to express.
Here too, she's affected and is aware of it, but she doesn't let him know.
But that doesn't matter. Because the glow on her face says it all 😳

Loved it, C! 🤗

Awww!! How could She not get affected with that 'Kya'!.. I felt that when they enacted that scene and also the scenes where He almost confessed, How could She resist him and how could He being so close to her, JUST ACT?! I felt they would definitely get affected with those dialogues and that closeness.. but you gave us that treat!! Thank you for that! Beautifully written👏.. short and sweet!!⭐️

Originally posted by: Mrs. SIR

Shoot it!! Hell yes! its the glow and blush she had on her face and the grin he had on his that made our hearts all warm through out that long weekend.. followed by monday, when they didn't air the scene.. 🤔 till it actually aired and we're STILL not over it...

after i read the tears & blanket scene.. i thought wait, what... i know what you're talking about but i haven't seen it. i need to see it... though i had the perfect image in my head (cuz i had seen the stills somewhere 😕) so i paused the reading... cuz i needed to go see the on location video 😆😆 priorities!! after some 10 pages later... i found it! and i watched and i smiled.. though it was one hell of a sad scene... but i smiled nevertheless cuz of your writing! as that's what was in my mind as i was watching but on another level, the one where im following IshRa's story.. it made me sad.. 🥺

then i came back to continue the reading and if i may say so..such a 'short' story this time (if you could write a thesis on this, i'd be SO happy!!)... so i read on... and the images from the scene came to mind (the infamous 'kya') and the grinning continued... just perfect..❤️ its so imaginable... that's what makes it so amazing... such a small scene (with a power packed performance by the duo) but just that one line said by him... led to so much beauty that even the director didn't care for the lights... he just wanted it captured.. so Action!!!...

aww man... now there's two ways to look at this scene... the one we saw on TV and then this 'funfiction'... love them both... that was so beautifully written... this little dose of happiness (the grinning and smiling) is so worth it.. 😳

though it was one of the shortest funfictions you have written... there was really nothing left to be said... it was just perfect!!! 👏👏 keep 'em coming 😉

Originally posted by: GanBarunFan

C I just read through all your fun fiction posts ...quite an imaginative mind and great writing skills you got there... I had to keep on reminding myself this is a fiction ... As some situations are like a follow up of real happenings,.. The lines get blurred sometimes .. Our minds play a trick ... And I had to again remind myself... Fiction v reality

Great writing !👏👏