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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -roshnee-

This is the first Ishra SS that I'm actually liking. Hope you update soon.

Lol..me too!!somethng new and fresh!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ruchi,

The SS was simply superb.Read both the parts at one strech.Beautifully written down the emotions of ishu and raman. Eagerly waiting for the rest. You are a great writer.

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Posted: 10 years ago
Please continue! This story is so good! Waiting for next part 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
hey nice ff...pm me wid ur future upd8s
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Posted: 10 years ago
Just like this...update soon...and plz pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
A/N - Thank You guys for lovely comments.
I am so sorry that my updates are pretty short but I am honestly running out of time. So please bear with me. Hope you enjoy reading it.

''My Mind forgets to remind me
You are a bad Idea.''

"Can you just stop digging your nails in your duppata? It is irritating." His first sentence to her and she glared at him. How dare he ?
"I don't care if it irritates you. My nails my duppata." She snapped and he smirked
"Since we are gonna get bonded for lifetime, it should affect you." He slowly whispered Payback!
"Why are you even here ?"
"I love sambhar made my Iyer Aunty, opps I mean Amma" she wished she could have killed him the moment he called her Amma, his Amma
"Go and plunge in that bowl of sambhar." He chuckled, it almost sounded Go! go commit suicide.
"Stop laughing. I am getting married to a moron !"
"Oh wow ! I am getting hooked to a drama queen."
"Then why did you say Yes?" She almost hushed in a whisper
"My mom did." He replied honestly.
"Oh little kindergarten kid !" She faked a squeal of joy and he couldn't help but laugh at it.
"You know, you are a kid." Thats it.
"My mother doesn't take decision for me."
"Oh ! so you yourself agreed to this marriage?" He crooked up his eyebrows and she sighed in irritation.
"Why did I even sit here!"

She walked upto her Appa and he got one thing "Her Appa,her confidante."
He stretched his legs and looked around, his mother and her mother excitedly sat next to pandit while his father was indulged in a conversation with her and her dad.
He amusingly recalled the last night event and one stupid leak by Mihir.

"Mihirr..mmm" he struggled with his phone as his mother forcefully made him eat entire ladoo.
"Bhai ? Hello you there ?" He heard hir friend shout from other end
"Hmm hmm." He managed to speak and glared at his mother
"What happened to your voice bhai ?" He gulped down the last bit before blasting
"What the hell is wrong with you Mihir ?" He shouted
"Oh finally you are back !" He rubbed his temple in frustration "what happened bhai ?"
"You told ma about Ishita coming to meet me. Are you mad?" He controlled his volume
"Bhai, Auntyji called me since you were not picking up your phone, so she asked and I told her. Trust me bhai."
"Ma said yes for my marriage and you ! You better dont come in my radar tomorrow. "
"Bhai.." and he ended the call and walked to his mother
"Aur Ma aap ! Mere se puche bina haan kaise kehdi aapne."
"Ma hoon teri itna haq banta hai mera."
"Ma yeh possible nai hai "
"Meine aapni zubaan di hai uss madrasan ko. Tu chaahta hai ki yeh shaadi na ho toh meri zuban kaat de." His mother replied dramatically and he sighed in exasperation
"Zuban kaatde ? Maa kya ho gaya hai aapko. Bhagwan ke liye aapne ghatiyaa serial dekhna band karo. Please." He folded his hands
"Tikh hai. Ab mein aapni madrasan bahu ke saath madrasi channel dekhungi." She giggled with his father
"God ! One more minute and I am gonna enrol in mental hospital." He mumbled and walked away with Ishita's fuming face in his mind.

He was brought out of trance with Ishita again sitting next to him, or forced to sit next to him as her mother did aarti of them both. His eyes were only fixed on her hands, they were not digging her dupatta anymore but instead she was rolling her ring. He glanced at her face as his mother gave her gifts, she did smile but her eyes said different story "She is gonna cry in two minutes." He cursed
"Oe" she looked at him
"One of the boxes has sword in it."
"Sword?"
"Jhaansi ki Raani jo ho." His comments made her fume
"Just pray I don't use it on you." He laughed and she shook her head
"You are always this insane ?" She asked and he rolled his eyed "You can be dealt only with insanity." And his trademark smile.
"Why did I even thought of talking to you?" He smiled at her
"Ok.. cool ! Why did you Not say No to this marriage?" He asked and noticed her face fell for a moment before she gripped herself back
"Appa thinks you are a nice guy. I am taking risk." She said and he scrutinised her face. She looked at him, not turning her gaze away like she did a second before.
"So, you working as a dentist ?"
"Yes." She was for the first time glad for changing the topic so conveniently
"Toodne ke kaam hi kaarti ho !" He replied cheekily
"Oh right ! Atleast I am not sitting idle and bossing around." She snapped and he chuckled.

Mrs Iyer looked at the duo happily, wiping off the tears
"Madhu ! What happened ?"she shook her head in negative
"I am just happy for my daughter. Look how engrossed they are." Mr.Iyer looked at his daughter and stiffled a laugh- he knew his daughter more than anyone in this world but for once he prayed he is proven wrong one day by the guy sitting next to her.

...

She slumped on her bed and tears glistened in her eyes - Today was her Roka and she will soon be Mrs.Raman Kumar Bhalla. She wiped them harshly and pondered about everything

"Ishu he said Yes." Her mother's voice echoed in dining hall while she looked at her shocked.
"Mom ! He cannot say yes."
"Ishu.. tumne suna nai. Toshi called." Before she could reply, her neighbour entered with her trademark evil grin.
"Oh ! Someone is getting married. Really ?" Her tone literally told her disgust.
"Yes Shagun. I am getting married." Ishita said crossing her arms and glaring at her.
"Good for you." She flipped her hairs and Ishita looked at her Amma, mumbling curses at the intruder.
"You came for a reason, right ?"
"Oh yes.Mom is asking for the recipe book Aunty." Shagun replied playing with her nails and Mrs Iyer walked off leaving not so good friends together.
"I am happy that you are finally over Subbu."
"I was never into that bas***d."
With this she walked off
.

"Did Subbu ruled my this decision too?"
But he is not that mean.
He is very mean
He is chauvinist
He is funny
He makes fun of you
Appa likes him.

Her thoughts continued as she drifted into a deep slumber .


Much Love

Ruchi


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Posted: 10 years ago
I dont know what to say and where to start.
Will try to put it delicately..
Tu na sahi thi - Yeh na - accha nahin tha😕
I had to read 3-4 times phir bhi flow samajh nahi aaya mujhe..
Uff.. yeh kya pada maine.. Aisa laga mujhe

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Accha. now that I have told you what you wanted to listen

Read what I have to say😛
I just loved it.. It was so funny, esp their constant fight
all the one liners - even Ishitas were so funny and I was constantly laughing🤣
THe whole convo is very natural and not at all filmy
but at the same time, the 2 moms are so damn filmy.. POLAR opposites..*ahem*🤣🤣
As you made Raman rightly say, "aapne ghatiyaa serial dekhna band karo"😆
har ghar ki kahaani..
Amma as usual on her own tangent..🤣

But still in all this I loved how Raman could read her eyes and her mind☺️
and I just loved the bond between appa and Ishita..beautiful. A Dad daughter bond is so special😳

And Shaggys entry and the twist- baap re - I was shocked like in serials.😲😲😲 teen baar face close up..
Ab jaldi se next post kar..I am not able to handle the twist..mujhe jaanna hai whats the majra..

Edited by swathibalan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
res 😛
Doc you are silly, really silly...take some break between birthing babies - of other people not your own 🤣 if you think this is crap I can bet my money you have been in the labor room one time too many this week and havent had enough sleep because of those babies which would make your sleep-depraved brain think this is crap because it is NOT!


Oh I am loving this battle of wills and wits between IshRa here can actually see them you know...him being this infuriating smartass and her actually wishing she could kill him with her bare hands if given a chance to do so 🤣

Hell you have even got melodramatic FILMY Toshi aunty who would make Nirupa Roy and Kirron Kher proud and put them to blush all at the same time ABSOLUTELY RIGHT!🤣🤣


LMFAO at him saying stop watching so many shows - have used that line once or twice on mom too 🤣🤣

And 😲 didnt see this coming you have Shagun here and she is what Subu' wife 😲😲😲 like KYA, KYA, KYA

update soon doc I so wanna see where you are taking this
Edited by EkPaheli - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Pehle tho A HUGE sorry for having missed reading this so long!😒
But having said that, aaj shuru se padke im feeling so good!! and so im gonna comment on all 3 together here 😳 so bear with me pleej.. irrespective of what happened in the show and knowing where this will all lead to, i loved everything about this!! The way you started it! the way Raman is being in character, Ishita's fiery attitude (not to miss her one-liners here for a change), the parents setting it all up.. you set the balls rolling for one helluva story ahead 😳👏👏

And Mihir ka intro! Ahem.. 😳 Yaar yahaan tho mein floor hogayi (sachhi wala floored not tera wala 😆) I have loved how Mihir has been the only one to understand even what Raman doesn't say! And hence, his intro where he notices the change in Raman was just so awww

Aur is bar Shagun ka intro!! 😲 And so differently refreshing!! But the moment i liked more was Ishu's father stifling a laugh seeing them together!! Arent this dad-daughter too cute??? 😳👍🏼

Aur ab actual reaction:

Woah Ruchi!!! 👏 pata hai we've almost always spoken only gutter and suraj and hence reading this got me so excited and happy! Its like i've known a new side of you and its so awww!!😳You write with a certain style which includes a mix of mischief, love and maturity and mein tho floored ho gayi re😳😳 devrani chod mein tho teri pankha ban gayi hoon! bachke rahiyo! 😆

PS: Jaldi firse likhna!! Warna get ready to be stalked! 😉


Edited by Ohgod! - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice and Lovely update Ruchi.
Portrayal of emotions are brilliant. The hatred, the irritation, the curiosity, the sensitivity all leading to love are well depicted. Loved reading it.
Do update soon...

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