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Swathi

@swathibalan

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Yaar.. You are just too good..Brilliant. Amazing

This had me smiling and blushing like a teenager☺️

Nahi mujhe tho garmi lag rahi hai and he winks. ☺️

He wants her to know he is fascinated by her and the only way he can show it is by letting his lips stay a second longer on her cheek after she shifted her hair behind her ear.

Bal main peeche karun?

Nahi main hi karti hun

Main tumhe bolunga phir Karna

Bolna nahi Sirf dikhana

Don't worry shot ke time pe meri bolti vaise hi band honey vali hai.☺️

Her lips smile, his lips stayed.

You transport me to an alternate world everytime with your post and that world is so damn believable.

🤗 for writing like this and for the pm.

The like button is not enough anymore.. I want LOVE or SMITTEN. for your posts

Edited by swathibalan - 10 years ago

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bluetaurean

@bluetaurean

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Thank u thank u thank u 🤗hugs to u, for including the shower and kiss scene, you are so so so amazing. Oh yea he's definitely clean bowled by her.and we are bowled over by your awesome creative ,amazing writing 👏

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Gollums Precious

@OfTheHeart

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Your posts makes me dare to dream!

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columbia

@columbia

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: AraBearxx
I can't even.

I hope that's a good thing 😕😛

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felciya

@felciya

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Brilliant. Loved it. Thank You C. You have added kissing scene, shower scene n his JJ teams launch iv. Well Done.

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columbia

@columbia

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: shalz_123
Damn I had to log n.cudnt stay away. M already in a soup..in 2 weeks phd presentation. N we were informed today.. thought will not come online.. but but...I cudnt control. After reading ur story I had to come online n comment. Kaise kaise karte ho...I m amazed.. I can see them thru ur words...C, ek request orek ho jaae..plz plz pretty plz...it will help me control my fluttering nerves...itu chota sa bhi chalega...

😆

Maybe it is better if you concentrate on phd

Mera bheja ko bhi rest chahiye ya!

😆

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DiVa

@Dihiva

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Sweet!! Thanks once again for a wonderful update!!

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Ashu25

@Ashu25

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

wowieee...another wonderful post again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thank u so much:)))

loved it to the core...some more pleaseee...cant wait for updates from u now...i toh want one everyday from you just like we get OLVs everyday 😃

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WhyAmIHereAgain

@WhyAmIHereAgain

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: columbia

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Maybe it is better if you concentrate on phd
era bheamazingja ko bhi rest chahiye ya!
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Ouch...u r sounding like my guide... 😭

Sure girl...it was an amazing read

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columbia

@columbia

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: nrn1486
Oh.My.God!
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Columbia.. Ye padh ke meri bhi bolti band ho gayi 😆😳

As if all these scenes from the show weren't magical enough, you've just gone and added new meaning to them.

Loved each line.. EACH line! It's like poetry for all us die-hard romantics. So beautiful. Sigh!

It goes from silent, unspoken words, to subtle hints, then not-so-subtle ones, and now the ball is in her court! Seriously, this couldn't have been written in a better way.

Kudos👏

P.S: Your works deserve an index!