THEY never talk about each other, by popular demand pg7 - Page 8

Originally posted by: Jyoe

"Gujarati style mei sari pehna hai, abb tho mat akdo! ☺️

Throw the BTS camera guys out and I will show you how much in Love I am! --- ☺️

These 2 lines just took my breath away and I was smiling , blushing sheepishly!!!😆

Originally posted by: nrn1486

Hey..thanks so much for the PM.. 😊

Haha.. loved all the teasing. And the poor guy is so affected by her. She scolds him a bit and it ruins his mood for the entire duration of the shoot. So cute.. just like how a real couple would behave😆

Really liked how you put in the bit about last night's scene. That was clever!

And you ended with a bang.. again! Good one..Had so much fun reading this OS! 😃

Originally posted by: ATTITUDEBABY

A lovely piece again.. Loved the ending

Originally posted by: felciya

Lovely. Loved it. I know that its unrealistic but you made it real.

Originally posted by: Nisha0604

I will have to write a disclaimer first...

I have been KNOWN to SEE things where none exist. I have been KNOWN to SEE things FIRST.😉

I dont know where your your fan fiction fits in the above disclaimer. I hope the latter not the former.

I dont feel ashamed at wanting to see two people that have the most glorious chemistry fall in love. There can be no greater reward in my opinion for the reader... its almost like a validation of their love for the story being narrated... in this case yours.

Your story lacks a fancy title and a 10 page prologue and doesn't fall into the traps of over description... the words jump out and touches the right hemisphere of my brain...immediately helps me comprehend the visual imagery and make sense...

This whole series might afterall end up becoming the best tribute to a love story... the tribute going to the person behind the character.

I will share what I "saw" ...

Saw the girl dancing... until she dropped of fatigue... energetic, enthusiastic, smiling... redoing her steps over and over again... sulked when her dupatta clung to her... waited when he turned away to finish a conversation, held on to his one hand when his other clutched a phone... she didnt care if he participated or was interested in her moves... she danced anyway... breathlessly whispering the lyrics like a child... or a woman in love...

I am reminded of the following song

Promise me that you'll give faith a fighting chance
And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance

I hope you dance
I hope you dance

Lee Ann Womack - I Hope You Dance Lyrics | MetroLyrics

I saw the guy being there... I saw the guy engrossed in every conversation possible... not paying any attention to her... if he could afford to😳... he smiled when he felt it was being recorded for the shoot, other times he did what he had to... was gentle yet firm in his grip😳

Its like they fit each other PERFECTLY like a jigsaw puzzle... they knew which part of the arm, wrist, hand to hold... every time she held, his fingers folded over hers... many times he was amused by some steps, kept his amusement in check... quickly abandoned her to go laugh it off...

She twirled, spun danced around him, even if he was preoccupied he WAS THERE for her... helped her with her practice... the lazy, amble... he buttoned his jacket, as she twirled, he clapped his hand swung his arms to get over the discomfort of being wooed like that... many times he openly smiled...

And ONE time, she listened to instructions, he rehearsed his move and found her hand outstretched and placed his spontaneously on it... for a fleeting second... and withdrew...

Like they both realized its natural and extempore...

Your ending to this part raises my hopes... we are ALL in this TOGETHER, the bunch of us that enjoy and fantasize about this imaginary couple... IF we get to celebrate or have our hearts broken only you the creator of this fantasy knows...

FOR NOW... your end line makes my heart soar like no other👏👏