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AdventureGirl14

@AdventureGirl14

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#111

The last part really got to me.. it was quite painful for Ishita to have walked into that room..

But I really loved the update.

They're in an Interesting predicament.. i'm sure they'll have plenty of opportunities to realize that they've misunderstood each other and clear the air now😊😊

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sheena

@sheena_12

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#112

Wow nyc ff...plzzz do PM me wen u updaye nexr n make it soon plzz...vry intrstng

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agneeputra

@agneeputra

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Posted: 10 years ago

#113

wow fantastic hope their differences clear soon. pls pm me on next updates...superb writing waiting for next parts

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aaminah123

@aaminah123

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: felciya
Lovely.

Thank you :)

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aaminah123

@aaminah123

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#115

Originally posted by: usaonly
I just read all the part in one go love it. I still wait to know what happen why they lost connection for 4 months at lease Ishita still can talk to Mihika if Raman was sick. Still more story to come right.

Yes, there is I hope I can justify the story line and lack of communication in the next update or so. I'm glad you have liked it so far, thank you.

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aaminah123

@aaminah123

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: Liashna
My heart went for them Aamna, she came back to her own home as if she is a guest. She believe he is disappointed with her for the loss of their baby, and he thinks she has grown out of his love now. He is pining for her and she's no less in a same state. Misunderstanding hurts. Hope they have a clear conversation about the accident and miscarriage. The silence so hurts here 😭 Plus you added the baby's room 🥺

I really wish Mihika get them closer soon.

I was in tears. Could imagine their acts and feel the pain. Tone it down yaar, lest i will start crying 😒

Brilliant, you got me in the mood of the part and story.👏 Carry on

Awe lia, I plan to add their conversation in the next one but somehow sorting things out on the first day didn't suit well with me so I added some distant moments between the two.

Being in the nursery was her first step and I promise it will only get better from here :)

Thank you!

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aaminah123

@aaminah123

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: nrn1486
The last part really got to me.. it was quite painful for Ishita to have walked into that room..
But I really loved the update.
They're in an Interesting predicament.. i'm sure they'll have plenty of opportunities to realize that they've misunderstood each other and clear the air now😊😊

It was painful indeed but that idea of the nursery just came out of nowhere to me too and the description fell right in place. Look at it as her solace to find peace after losing her child, next update is emotional and has my favorite scene in it.

Thank you neethi. Being in the same house is enough to begin with, at least for now.

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aaminah123

@aaminah123

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: sheena_12
Wow nyc ff...plzzz do PM me wen u updaye nexr n make it soon plzz...vry intrstng

Sheena thank you for dropping in your comments and liking the story line so far. Accept my apology for not sending pm already because I'm just too lazy or inept as you may call it to send reminders to everyone.

Please bookmark it, thank you again!