#1| IshRa : Meherbaan FF | Thread One - Complete. Moved to Thread Two. - Page 83

I was silent reader ( srry :p)but ur this update made me to comment
this story is very unique I just loved it
this is the best update of story
awesome and amazing are very small word for this
pm me when u update... :)

That was so beautiful - loved how you incorporated the first meeting with Rajji's story!

Originally posted by: RomComFan

Where do I even begin with this? Firstly, I am flattered by your mention Kiara- I encourage because I love this and I can see how much work goes into this, what's a few minutes of my time to tell you how much it's appreciated? On that note, RomComFan is a bit formal, you can call me Anu instead...😆

Next onto this update- this wonderful, looong, just what I needed on this Sunday before Christmas update! Please note that every sentence that follows mostly begins with 'love' - the one word RKB has been unable to say to his lady love on our screens so far.😛

Loved the way you tied in the 'jewel' imagery with Subbu and Raman. And Subbu's observation of ISHRA, his contributing flashbacks and her dismissal of him was just perfectly handled.

Love Rohit too actually, we all have that one friend that's on your side no matter what and it's a bitterweet thing to see him introduced this way, I can't wait for his reaction to RKB and Ishu.

Loved the way you tied this to Rajji's story. Rajji, you know I love you- I mean you are my first stalking victim on IF after all , and undoubtedly you ladies did a fantastic job tying these two great FFs together to make both even more beautiful. The mood of the original is definitely transitioned into the addition of it in this piece as well- very well done! *High 5*

Love the explanation of the transition from 'Raman Bhalla' to RKB.

Loved the dancing and the songs- you really know how to bring the story to life, it's a skill that truly deserves applause! Dance s an outlet for their feelings for each other , the things they can't express just works so beautifully.

Love the line about how he married the psycho and now the chronic lecturer- I believe it's borrowed from another great OS here non? 😊

Kiss= bliss! The description of it is as beautiful as any I've ever read and so utterly romantic I don't even know how to describe it.

Payal's quote and the way it's incorporated just ties this all together so so beautifully.

Really looking forward to your next update, and not just to the the progress of their relationship but more importantly the discussion of Raman's guilt, insecurity and uncertainty which you described so very well.

You girls, all of you, deserve a standing O- please take a bow on this incredible effort! And for your troubles I shall share some of my Christmas baking with you- please enjoy some cookies, cake and biscotti on me... and I'll even throw in a extra large double fudge Sundae with extra cherries, whipped cream and nuts galore for each of you! 🥳

Thank you very much for sharing your work- it's incredibly detailed, very well written and so very vivid! With real life interferences, having to collaborate and the holiday season all tied together at the moment, it could not have been easy I know. Just know that it's really appreciated. All of your efforts in writing and composing and thinking- all of it by all of you is very much appreciated!😊

Long comment- but you deserve even more! XX 🤗

Originally posted by: AraBearxx

Raajjooo. This is Neha. Neha, meet my awesome blossom second half, Rajjo. The girl with the Superwoman display pic. (LOVE!!)

Done with introductions.

MEHERBAAN Thread pe tera swagat ho... *royal ishtyle*

Did you just reject the offer to get high on me? #mean #mean

Originally posted by: SurrealFantasy

I did not reject the offer...merely mentioned the fact that I'm already high. If I were to get high on you too...I would go higher than the Burj Khalifa.🤣 #randomjoke #stillinnocent

And a virtual hello to Rajji, the one with the Superwoman display pic. 😆

"Kahaan hain mere sewak?" *royal-ty ishtyle*

Originally posted by: .Rajji.

Wait i missed the first part of the introduction.

Doesnt matter, i'm here now.

NEHA ! HI ! We're new best friends, bas. Don't try to deny it. Now i'll go and stalk your post. It's tradition here. Kiara (my baby chipmunk) talked to me about you already. *hugging you against your will*

@Rajji : Hello to my self proclaimed new Best Friend. Stalk as much as you want...I'm quite entertaining #stillhighonmyself

Originally posted by: SurrealFantasy

@Rajji : Hello to my self proclaimed new Best Friend. Stalk as much as you want...I'm quite entertaining #stillhighonmyself

*Enjoying the sorta molestation too much to complain*🤣

@Doc : Wait...so this is the five - some or something-some I wanted to be a part of? Whatever, any menage is fine with me 😆

And who actually enjoys studying? It's the curse that shall kill us all. But...mere vacations chhe till February, so you have full permission to burn in jealousy.

I really loved this long update. It established Raman and Ishita's relationship. I liked how we got to see Raman's thoughts, his fears almost despite all the happiness that surrounds his family right now. Somehow despite all the sweet moments, there was an uncertainty between Ishita and Raman when it came to their relationship. The end scene at the balcony removed all that uncertainty finally and now truly, Raman and Ishita are one.

awesome update I don't like rohit y he is being a jodimaker for subbu n ishita ruhanika beautiful they decide that name it was brilliant