My imagination part 3 page 5.

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Hi friends
This is my figment of my imagination which I am penning down please tell me how you like it

Mani organized a party for all his assocites and clients on navratri as long with families a and kids.
Raman was not interested in going but went for keeping and eye on Ishita.That guy is getting on his nerves lately.Mihir and mihika also accompanied them.
Raman dressed in his black tuxedo was looking handsome as ever.Ruhi was wearing a link dress and Ishita was wearing a red Saree(similar to the Saree Raman gifted her on varalakshmi Pooja).Raman accidentally came in and could not breath for a while.Ishita was gorgeous in red and he could not help but drink in the sight before him.Ishita was about to do a hair do when he stopped her and warned her to hurry up.Actually he prefers her hair like that open with out pins.Raman says You look nice when you leave your hair open and left the room leaving a shocking and blushing Ishita behind.Now a days madrasan is looking gorgeous than any other woman in the world.
Even though he cursed Mani he appreciated Mani's idea to know his clients at a personal level.
Ashok painstakingly took Shagun and Adi with him.

As soon as Raman entered party he saw Adi and was very happy to see him after so many days.
Raman: hi Adi beta how are you and how is your tooth ache now.
Adi: I am fine
Raman: my son is so handsome but ...saying he bends down to tie his shoe lace.
Adi rolled his eyes in response and did not let him complete the task and left to kids play area..
Raman was very disturbed by this but could not say anything.
Shagun was taunting Raman to leave Adi alone a and accompany his behenji wife.
Ashok was enjoying the scene very much.
Ashok was eyeing Ishita and mihika who were looking out of the world today.
Shagun was stunned to see Ishita looking beautiful in the red Saree.
Ashok smirked and said Raman is always surrounded by beautiful women and who better than me can know this but surprisingly his behenji wife is also not that bad he groomed her well.

Raman fisted his fingers in anger but replied in calm manner.You are wrong my wife does not need any grooming as her beauty is skin deep unlike some people who cake their face with make up.She is a doctor by profession who takes care of my family to the perfection.
If she takes a responsibility she puts her soul into it .Mani was observing all this from Adi Raman Convo to Ashok Raman Convo and he was elated to know Raman's love for his friend ishu.

Shagun goes to kids play area to have a look at Adi and sees Ishita with Ruhi and other kids.
She taunts Raman and says that Ashok has bagged a contract from Mr Abhimanyu Raghav and Raman became a looser after marrying Ishita.

Ishita:Good for you Shagun but get your facts right.Ashok bribed in the name of Raman to get the contract. That proves !y husband is efficient in what ever he does.He left his presidency of entrepreneur s association for me so he can leave the contract for his children's mother.


Ruhi called Ishita so she excused and went near her.Shagun left with Adi.
Ruhi: Ishimaa this is vivaan my new friend.
Ishita: hello beta nice to meet you.
Vivaan: Namaste aunty.
Ruhi: sorry mumma maine aapse baat chupayi. I bet vivaan few days before and principal called papa to come to school but Mani uncle and papa made us friends again.
Ishita: I knew my Lil princess was up to something.I got a call from your principal after the problem is solved.
Ruhi : aap naaraz ho mujhe?
Ishita:no you owned your mistakes and said sorry so that's OK.
Vivaan:now we are friends aunty and shravan is also my best buddy.
Mani:and so are we.
Ruhi: hello uncle you are my Ishimaa s friend?
Mani: yes I am your parents friend.
Ruhi: papa Ke bhi ?
Mani: papa Ke bhi.
Ishita:vivaan is your son?she did not get her reply.
Mani excused and went to the hall again to see guests enjoying them selves but Raman was missing.
He searched for Raman and found him near pool where Adi was standing alone. Adi was about to fall because of his shoe lace but Raman caught him and tied his lace and said be careful beta.
Mani was touched seeing this.
Adi:thanks
Raman: love you beta.and Adi left.Raman went near the play area and was watching Ruhi and ishita silently he took a PUC of mother daughter duo and kissed it.
Mani: picture is in complete my friend.
Raman was caught red handed.but he said he was taking Ruhi s picture not Ishita s.
Mani: I did not ask whose picture you were taking. Raman you are giving competition to my friend in blushing game.
Raman:I don't blush.
Mani: right you don't blush and today is Feb 31st and I am sultan of Timbuktu.Both husband and wife are alike. She can put a tomato to shame when she taslks about you.Raman yeh Raman woh.
Raman: you discuss me how weird is that.
Mani: oh tried to divert her a lot but what ever she speaks there is a bit of Raman in everything.
Raman was surprised but did not show it.
Mani : Ishita is just my best friend now. I was an obsessive friend of her trying to protect from people like subbu. And owing my free flirting everyone thinks I am in love with her.
Raman was so happy listening to it he would done a bhangra had it not been a sophisticated party.

This is the first part and please tell tell me whether to continue or not.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice one.. 👍🏼
continue plz n pm me 🥱
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Very nice!!!! Five out of five stars to your imagination. Please continue soon.
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this ws wonderful..loved it..plz continue soon n pm me too plz
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awsme yaar...
do continue...😛😛😛
nd pm me if possible!😊
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Beautiful n interesting update! Great strt! Continue soon!
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it was great..do write more :)
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Thank you friends for your encouraging words.means a lot to me. Suggestions are welcome if any.
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wow...mazng...excellently written...loved it...esply mani saying im her best friend nd over protective bcpz i dnt want get her hurt lik subbu did to her...thts a suprb dialouge...pm me fr nxt...
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This is just superb...pls cont soon

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