New IshRa OS: Love:A Crazy Little Thing! Updated pg 10

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arshi33

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Wow...

This is so beautifully written...

Amazing job...

Plzzz update soon...😃😃

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Arooj

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Ooh, can't wait to read what he was mumbling in his sleep. Loved the first part!

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Paru

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Edited on Pg 1 😃

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jyo_loveurlife

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

👏 👏 As usual awesome di👍🏼

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omshreejaanu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: paru_rox
Res OJu ...coz I know it wud be good 😃

Edited:

Oh my ... had no idea that you were gonna dedicate this to me OJu 🤗

Loved it all ...the angst, the jealousy, the anxiety and best of all the hidden love. Only Ishita can bring out all of this in Raman in one go 😳

Loved the scooping up in arms ... am not getting my hopes for anything much in the show.

Waiting for the next part ... & this time I demand that you give us one soon. Bas.

I had to dedicate this after that huge compliment😆

I am glad u enjoyed it.

I am missing ur pints n ur take on the jealousy track. I dunno I feel something is missing. CVs r not adding the emotional elements in the show between IshRa which end making Raman insensitive n Ishita not so in love as she is supposed to b. No wonder the viewers are as confused as IshRa.

Let's c how this Mani track shapes up. I would love to read one special post of urs on the mani vs RKB track especially after our hero made an adorable fool of himself yesterday!!

Love indeed makes us do crazy things. 😆

Oh my update is almost ready. 😃

Edited by omshreejaanu - 10 years ago

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omshreejaanu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: Veeann
Awesome. So well written. Please update soon. And thank you Paru for making your friend write this. 👏 👏

Thanks dear !

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omshreejaanu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: Maaneet099
loved it!
Would love to see something onscreen instead of a childish Raman muttering and throwing tantrums!
continue soon!

Same here! KP as RKB the angry n intense young man is a treat to watch. I would rather want CVs to show us the man he used to be- intense, passionate n intimidating not the one they showed yesterday in front of Mani, trying to surpass the guy who looked more amused than impressed by Raman's stunts. 😔 I want my hero back not RKB clone.

Edited by omshreejaanu - 10 years ago

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Paru

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Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: omshreejaanu

I had to dedicate this after that huge compliment😆
I am glad u enjoyed it.
I am missing ur pints n ur take on the jealousy track. I dunno I feel something is missing. CVs r not adding the emotional elements in the show between IshRa which end making Raman insensitive n Ishita not so in love as she is supposed to b. No wonder the viewers are as confused as IshRa.
Let's c how this Mani track shapes up. I would love to read one special post of urs on the mani vs RKB track especially after our hero made an adorable fool of himself yesterday!!
Love indeed makes us do crazy things. 😆
Oh my update is almost ready. 😃

Its all too disjointed and something's missing this whole week that I can't put my finger on. The spark has gone missing OJu and NO ... am not talking about the confession coz don't even want that yet.

But really want to see Raman doing something for Ishita for a change something simple that a normal couple does ... maybe take Ishita (& Ruhi too) out for shopping or a late night ice-cream. Was watching the January shopping trip yesterday & that had so much chemistry & cuteness 😳

Am not writing till I get something good now OJu ... bre, bored & borest (yup that's a word now) at the moment.
Let's see what happens on Monday coz if they get it right, Ishita fainting track has so much that the CV's can milk into 😃

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omshreejaanu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: serendipity.
Res
aah OSJ,
Wonderful! :D Loved it. WHY did u have to stoppp? :(
cannot wait for you to continue, thanks for the shout out/dedication ☺️ i absolutely LOVED LOVED LOVED this. Your dialogues are SOO Raman-Ishita 😳 can totally picture them 😳

LOVEDDD Raman's jealousy and concern, and aah, the authority with which he took her to the room. LOVE!

Cannot wait for the update, Keep it up! 🤗

thanks buddy. It was a pleasure writing it n dedicating it to u. I try not to leave a request unfulfilled. 😳Yes I do get tensed once I am done😆 Boring my readers is what I fear all the time.

I always try to keep the characterization intact in my stories n it pleases me to no end when u guys say u can visualize this on IshRa.

Thanks for reading.

Will get back to u real soon. 🤗

Edited by omshreejaanu - 10 years ago