IshRa FF : MY BELOVED.... PART 6 : pg 21 7th Dec - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: v_ani_patel

I didn't watch movie...but looks interesting..

Looking forward for update..
Plz continue..

Thnx for the comment 😊

Happy to kwn tht u liked the storyline even if u didn't watch the movie. The movie is really worth watching. There are links with english subtitles also.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: yazhi

even its one of the bestest my fav film... i am very eager to see ishra in such a situation.. plss do update soon

Thnx yazhi for the comment 😊

Raja Rani is one awesome movie. I hope you like my IshRa version.


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Posted: 11 years ago
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heya...glad to see u in this forum too...and looking fwd to ur works on ishra...
:)
all d best...cont soon...
pls send me pms
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sahibasharma

heya...glad to see u in this forum too...and looking fwd to ur works on ishra...

:)
all d best...cont soon...
pls send me pms

thnx for the comment!! 😃
Will give my update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thnx for the comment. Will update the first part as soon as I complete it. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hellooo...thnk u all for your appreciation.

Here we start...

PART 1

"Mayur Vihar Phase 1 Extension station. Doors will open on the right. Please mind the gap" The door opened and a tall young girl squeezed herself out of the crowd careful that the packet in her hand was unaffected and got out of the metro. The girl had a striking figure and an attractive face which was now glowing with excitement. After all its her akka's marriage tomorrow. How could Mihika not be happy??



After all those efforts by periyappa her sister Ishita Vishwanathan Iyer was going to get married. She was on cloud nine!! She was on her way to home after buying loads of jasmine flowers for the next day from INA market. They lived in Samachar apartment and the Bhallas also lived in the apartment adjacent to them. Mihika came to Delhi to do her MBA. Eventually she got a job here and continued her pleasant stay at periyappa's house only. She had no other siblings. But she never regretted that bcoz God has blessed her with the world's sweetest sister Ishita. A dentist by profession she had the most beautiful smile in the world according to Mihika. Her smile would melt even the darkest soul. Even though she had not seen her periyamma her mother made sure that their daughters stayed together always. Vandu akka being the eldest was more like a mother-figure but Ishu akka and she were like friends who shared everything. Even though Mihika can't imagine a life without her sister she was happy, finally Ishu akka's marriage. All those years they were looking for a groom everywhere in the matrimony sites, marriage beauraus and who knew the groom was living in the family next door.

As Mihir took the turn from the highway to Mayur Vihar Phase 1 extension his eyes fell on the beautiful girl walking down the lane, Mihika Iyer, his to-be bhabi's sister and a girl way out of his league sighed Mihir. But then looking at his bhai Raman, he could say matches are made in heaven. This only meant that we mortals had no control over who would be our life partner. This alliance was decided amidst a chit-chat between two neighbours on a morning walk. Bhallas and Iyers were neighbours. But this is Delhi, people hardly knew who lived next door. The Iyers moved to this apartment 3 yrs back. The girls exchanged a "hello-hi" to Toshiji and her daughter Rinky occassionally. Mr. Iyer and Mr. Bhalla became good friends as they met in the society meetings and daily walks. It was on one such occassion Mr. Iyer expressed his concern about getting his daughter married. She was a perfect girl in all aspects except one. As they were honest people they told the truth to everyone and then the boy or his family would back out. What Mr. Iyer didn't tell Mr. Bhalla was that Ishu wasn't that bothered about her not getting married. Infact she was happy that the catastrophe was delayed. However Mr. Bhalla who was himself worried about his still unmarried 30 yr old son asked for Ishita's hand to Mr. Iyer as a result of a spur of the moment thought. Till date his son Raman had rejected every single proposal that his mother or sister brought. This was the first time Mr. Bhalla was taking a step. He immediately called Mihir and told him about Ishita. Mr. Bhalla requested to make Raman agree to this proposal somehow. If Raman rejected this, there wont be anymore girls to look for him in Delhi. Mihir assured Raman's father and his endless efforts paid off. Raman agreed. Mr. Bhalla had asked him to talk to Ishita and even gave her number as instructed by Mr. Iyer. But Mihir himself saw how Raman threw away the piece of paper in dustbin the moment he was out of his papaji's sight. He couldn't say anything to his bhai on this topic. In fact he still had fears that Raman would back out from the wedding any moment. The only thing he didn't understand was why the girl didn't demand an explanation from the boy who never called her or talked to her even after they were engaged for three weeks.

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Vandita kept the jasmine flowers that Mihika bought inside the fridge. She saw her sister Ishita chatting with Mihika and smiling now and then. Her smile was so pure and angelic. But this one was not from her heart that she knew for sure. It was a miracle that Ishita agreed to get married and then the humungous task of finding a groom. But Ishita remained detached from everything till date. Vandu wondered how Ishita is going to cope up with her new life. At that moment she felt a hand on her shoulder.

Vandu smiled, "Bala!!"

Bala : Ishu is goin to be fine. She is a big girl. You my beautiful wife don't worry about that.

Vandu : you think so?

Bala : I know so!! Now concentrate on the work ahead. Guests will start to come any moment.

Vandu : ama ama...(yes yes..)

Mihir reached the Bhalla's apartment. Before he could knock the door, he was greeted by a worried looking Romi holding a helmet in his hand.

Mihir : kya baat he Romi?

Romi : panga ho gaya he bhai..

Mihir : hua kya he Romi?

Romi took Mihir inside and said in a hush-hush tone, "bhai nhi mil rhe"

Mihir : nhi mil rhe matlab? Chote bache thodi na he. Kisi kaam se gaye honge bahar a jayenge.

Romi : abey...gayab matlab kal raat se nhi he ghar pe. Wo raat ko yeha sab party sharty kr rhe the aur bhai naa bahar nikal gaye. Aur aj shaam tak nhi aye.

Mihir : to ghar me kisi ne nhi pucha??

Romi : papaji ko mene kaha ki tere saath kisi kaam se gaye he.

Mihir : tabhi papaji ne mujhe yeha bulaya. Dn worry I vl manage. Tum jao aur ek baar airport wagera check kro kahi wo nikal to nhi gaye. Me unke regular bars me dekhta hu.

Romi : theek he.

Mihir was about to meet papaji when he stopped at the door to their room hearing their conversation.

Toshiji : Bhallaji ek taraf shaadi ki khushiya he to ek taraf mujhe Raman ki fiqar ho rhi he. Ishita jaisi nazuk ladki usey jhel payegi? Apko lagta bhi he un dono ne baat kr li hogi sab apas me?

Mr. Bhalla : arey tussi fiqar na kro Toshiji. Ishita samajdar ladki he. Wo sab sambhal legi. Aur phir bacho ki un sab baato me hum na hi padhe to acha he. Badi mushqil se Raman raazi hua he is shaadi ke liye. Hume us par zyada zor nhi dena he.

Toshi: najane kiski nazar lag gayi mere Happy puttar pe..wo bacha to kisi se unchi awaz me baat tak nhi krta tha aur ab hasna to dur pata nhi kis duniya me khoya rehta. Kis manhuz ghadi me humara mann kiya ki usey bahar jakar padhai krne di..Dilli me kya kam college the jo Ahmedabad bhej diya?

Bhalla : ap bhi na Toshiji. IIM se padha he humara ladka. Zindagi me khub tarakki ki he to tension to aa hi jata he is bhaag daud me.

Toshiji : ap nhi samjhenge lekin me ma hu. Samaj skti hu ki kuch to taqleef he jo usey khayi ja rhi he.

Mihir sighed looking at the old couple. He needed to find Raman bhai quickly. He left the Bhalla residence hastily. On the way he collided with someone and she dropped her things down. Before he could look up the girl, Mihika started shouting at him, "uffo..kaha dekh ke chalte ho... God!!! Kitni mushqil se ye kele ke patte milte he yeha aur ab mujhe dobara leke ana padega!! Whats wrong with these guys in Delhi! Pata nhi in logo ki naak itni chadi hui kyu he.."

Mihir :woah!! Ek second...ek to ap mujhpe takrayi and upar se mujhe sorry bolne ki jagah mujhpe hi chilla rhi he ap...

Mihika : really? Are you expecting a sorry from me? Me sahi direction jar hi thi. You were looking somewhere else aur ab mujhe sorry bolne ko keh rhe ho...dekho ye fact he ki your Raman "bhai" is goin to marry my akka but uska ye matlab nhi ki tum har baat pe uska advantage lete rho mujse

Mihir : advantage? Arey kis baat ko kaha le ja rhi ho?? Bhai theek kehte he. Ye South Indian ladkiya hoti hi khadus he..

Mihika : wat?? Tumne mujhe khadus kaha? Aur saari South Indian girls ko? Mihir Arora ab dekhna tumhari kya haalat krti hu me...

Mihir : ok ok chill...just calm down.. I'm sorry. I was just kidding. Sorry agar tumhe bura laga


Mihika : bura to laga hi..lekin sorry se kaam nhi chalega. Ye Mayur Vihar wali market se na aise hi kele ke patte leke ao, tab manungi..

Mihir : ok! Done deal..

Mihika smiled happily and went inside her home shouting "akkaaa.."

Mihir couldn't help but smile looking at her. He had met Mihika a year before during one of his visits to Raman's family. And it was love at first sight for him but Mihika considered him as a good friend. Well, as long as he didn't get friend-zoned Mihir was happy to be a friend. Right now he had to concentrate on a more important task, finding Raman bhai!!!

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He was wearing a faint pink shirt and light grey trousers. The first two buttons of his shirt were carelessly left open. His hair was dishelved in contrast to his clean shaved face. His steel strapped watch shone brightly in the dim light of the bar and Raman Kumar Bhalla was having a go at his third bottle of vodka. He was leaning on his table letting his body loose with the alcohol and had a scornful smirk on his face.

Raman was taking a gulp of yet another load from his bottle when he spotted Mihir moving towards his table.

Raman : Mihir mere dost, mere bhai...aa ja meri barbadi ki jashn me. Lets celebrate my barbadi.

Mihir : bhai..ye kya kr rhe he ap..

Raman : kyu sale ankhe kharab he kya teri... Look at me I'm enjoying my doom!!

Mihir :whats wrong with you bhai. Kaisi baatein kr rhe ho ap?

Raman : to aur kaise baat kru? Tujhe to sab pata he na..phir tu kyu ye puch rha he?

Mihir : ha bhai I know everything! Isliye keh rha hu..I have a gut feeling ki ye jo bhi ho rha he its all for good.


Raman : really? Tujhe pata he meri feeling..arey feeling kya me to jaanta hu ki kal se meri life ki watt lagne wali.( he smiles yet again) arey itni sari ladkiya reject kr kr ke finally ha bol bhi diya to..kisi Madrasan se...ye papa ko bhi pata nhi kya suj rhi thi. Itni Punjabi kudiyo ki kami he dilli me jo Madrasan se rishta jodne chale. Engagement me dekha tune kaisi sadi si shaqal banake khadi thi. In fact mujhe to lagta he uski shaqal hi aisi sadi hui he, he na?

Mihir tried to hold Raman, "bhai bobat ho gaya. Ab hume jaana chahiye. Kal 9 baje shaadi he apki."

Raman : ha to dulhan kaunsi Katrina he wahi sadu shaqal wali he na..Naam kya tha yaar uska..

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PRECAP: Shubhalagnam!! 😊

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PS : To those who have seen the movie, do you want IshRa to talk to each other till first half scene or not??? plsss let me knw. 😳

Edited by madhubala123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanks for the pm dear...
loved the talli raman...
:)
cont soon...looking fwd to this
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow its superb yar
I want to read more
update whenever u want just pm m😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sahibasharma

thanks for the pm dear...

loved the talli raman...
:)
cont soon...looking fwd to this

Thnx for the comment. Glad tht u liked my very first version of Talli Raman. 😆

will update soon. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

wow its superb yar
I want to read more
update whenever u want just pm m😉

Thnk u sooo much for the lovely comment!!
It gives me lot of confidence 😃

update whenever u want just pm m😉 --- thts just the right kind of reader I'm lukin for 😆. definitely vl pm u.

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