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peace..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#501

Originally posted by: ABBY92
God, Raman's reaction when Shagun said she doesn't love him anymore was hilarious but for once, it came at a good time. The ending was so sweet with IshRa naming their twins and having their whole family there with them.

So glad you liked yaar. Thanks for all the feedback you gave in the entire story. Thanks a ton! 😃

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#502

beautiful ending
n awesome names
ye apshagun sudhregi nhi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#503

Originally posted by: rockstar29
Cool yaa

😊 glad u liked 😊

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peace..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#504

Originally posted by: hina.khan1216
Hahaha that is so good last part...

😃 😃 thanks so much 😊 so glad u liked!

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peace..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#505

Originally posted by: -IshRaDivAn-
Catching up with all the parts I missed...
Lol, loved the way he was bossing her to go to sleep.. Typical RKB.. 😆
They are so cute.. Darling and my love..haye..Kaash we could get such words in the show too.. Adorbs.!! 😳
Hehe..She wanted to eat Medu Vade.?? Aiiyoo..
Ohh..twins for Ishra.?? Chaar bacche.!!! 🤣 They will have to be careful now when they do ahem ahem..they can't afford another one..already chaar hain..🤣 Loved the rain dance.. ❤️

Aww..Ruhi doll is so cute..Poor her..she is suffering in all of it.. Shagun deserves to know the truth.. Suffering for the three of them is painful..😭
Ughhh...damn I hate Subbu's mom..why can't she just leave Ishu alone.?? 😡 Poor Ishu..

Offo...Maahaan Ishu had to come to the picture.. She left afterall.. Hehe... laughed so badly at this part " baat baat pe chal padti hai " 🤣🤣 Poor RKB..

Haila.?? Bina kuch kare hi shagun out.?? 😆 She won't change ever..just like Raman said...😆 She doesn't want Adi either.? Haaye..doob mare chudail..Kitni selfish hai... 😆 Anyhow its good for Ishra..

"Ab main bollywood style mein airport ke andar to nahin aa sakta na. To tum ab bahar aa jao." OMG.!!!! This was the best thing I have ever read about a hero...Its RKB afterall, he is hatke anyway.!!! 🤣

Aww...finally they are one happy family.! ❤️ 2 daughters and 2 sons..No one can wish for more.. 😛

Perfect ending to a lovely OS.!!! Thanks for the PM's..Please continue writing..would love to read more.. 😃

so glad u finally got time to catch up with all the parts. Thanks for each and every bit of the feedback. So glad you liked my work, and the comic bit came across. Thanks for taking out ur precious time for me! 😃 😃

and rofl for the part in bold 🤣

Edited by peace.. - 10 years ago

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peace..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#506

Originally posted by: exploringmyself
superb..!!!!!!!

😃 😃 thank you!!!

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Posted: 10 years ago

#507

Originally posted by: rutu83
well written

thanks 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#508

Originally posted by: Gursharn3010
Hapi ending

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Nikki

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Posted: 10 years ago

#509

Superb part..!! M soo sad u ended it...but still happy that it ended on a really wonderful happy note..!! It was an awsumm part..!!

loved each and every bit of it..!! Ishita being idle ishita left raman for shagun and family..!! huhhh...But raman being a core punjabi did't let her do this time..!! heheheh

the way he was tensed for her...but thank god he came up with the idea of that checking mail. After reading ishita's mail i thought its gonna be like raman will have to wait for her again for some months and then it will be like they will meet somewhere accidentally...I thought some this stuff..but you proved me wrong,...And m so happy about that...Cuz the way u potrayed the story was wonderful..!!

Raman calling Ishita from outside the airport...and his dialogue for not being a hero to come in and shouts her name in a most old romantic amnner...heheheh..

But the way he wrote her that msg...i was laughing while reading that..!! heheh

And Shagun was helpless...Old habits never leave...Shagun proved it...! heheh

When she say to raman that she didnt love him anymore...i have thought some drama etc...but u again proved me wring...U showed it soo well...raman's reaction...Laughing like an idiot rolling on bed...that was really a funny scene..!! I was too laughing like that only..!!

wow..!! Shagun found Ambani,...!! She is really sick...but atleast she was herself ready to leave raman..!! yippee..!! that moment was also funny when Shagun said she will send divorce papers...and Raman ended up telling her that they are already divorced..!!

Whatever..! her reaction.!! hhahahah..!!

Overall it was sooo awsumm part..!! Ishita gave birth to boy and girl..! their four kids..!! heheh...:P And Punjabi tamilian fighing..!! well these things will never change..!!

Loved it..!! Will miss this OS..!! Plz do write more..! will be waiting for ur new creations.! and do pm me whenever u write..:D :D :)

take care..!

Edited by desire_nikki - 10 years ago