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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aYASHIKA

When are u going to update yaar 😒


will definitely try n update soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 6:

It was 11:30 in the night.

"Tumne raat ki dose theek se le li na Ishu? aur tum abhi tak soyee kyun nahi?" Raman spoke on the phone.

"Haan baba le li saari medicines. Aur abhi to bataya aapko thodi der pehle ki aaj clinic mein late ho gayi thi, tabhi late so rahi hoon" Ishita replied.

Raman: " hmmm..phir theek hai. Ab jaldi se so jaao. My biwi and baby need rest."

"Ok! take care haan" Ishita cut the call.

15 minutes later her phone beeped.

She read the message, it was Raman's, and it said." Abhi bhi I can see you online on watsapp. So jaao ab"

Ishita smiled and replied "Ok"

Another 15 minutes passed, Ishita heard her phone ringing.

Ishita:" Raman kya hai! Ab aise kaise chalega! Saara din aap mujhe har 15 min ke baad call karte rehte ho. Main abhi so rahi hoon naa thodi der mein!"

"Happy Birthday to you, Happy Birthday to you, Happy Birthday dear Ishita, Happy Birthday to you" Raman sang as he stood in the balcony of his house.

A smile broke out on Ishita's face, her eyes became wet. "Aah! To aapko yaad tha! Aiyyo, I am so sorry Raman, maine aapko aise hi itna daant diya. Thank you for the wishes. Thank you soo much"

Raman: "Hmm..ab iska matlab ye nahi ki tum ab timely nahi soyogi. Achcha ek baat suno"

Ishita: "Boliye"

Raman: " Kal mere saath date pe chalogi?"

Ishita chuckled softly: "Date pe??!"

Raman: "Haan date pe"

Ishita: "Agar aisa hai to this will be our first date. But Shagun.."

Raman: "Phir Shagun! Please uska naam mat liya karo. Aur vaise bhi wo subah Mumbai jaa rahi hai thode dino ke liye"

Ishita: " Hmm..Ok. To phir kal milte hain"

Raman: "Hmmm. Aur so jao tum ab. I love you"

Ishita: "I love you too Raman, Muaah!"

Raman: "Take care.."

***

"Mihiku..ye kya hai! Mujhe ye western dress nahi pehnni! Main isme itni moti lagoongi. Raman mera mazaak udaaenge" Ishita spoke as she looked at her cute little 4 month baby bump in the mirror.

Mihika: "Arey no akka. Pehno naa! Aap bahut achche lagoge isme. Main itne pyaar se aapke liye bday gift layi hoon"

Ishita:" No yaar..aur iss haalat mein heels bhi nahin pehan sakte, uske bina achchi bhi nahin lagegi"

MIhika: " To kya ho gaya Akka, bas aap pehno ye dress."

Ishita frowned, but did not resist any further and put on the dress. It was a beautiful fuschia pink dress, and it totally complimented the blush on her cheeks because of her pregnancy.

Mihika: "Jaldi chalo jeeju aapka bahar wait kar rahe hain"

As Ishita opened the exit door of her house, Ishita saw Raman waiting right outside, looking dapper in a navy blue shirt and grey coat.

Raman walked towards her, cupped her face and kissed her softly on the cheek.
"Happy Birthday, my love " he spoke.

Ishita smiled and and spoke looking into his eyes "Thank you, darling"

"Ab chalein" Raman held her hand supportingly and took her to the car. He ensured that she seated carefully, before they drove off.

***

"Ye kitni achchi jagah hai Raman" Ishita spoke as they entered a the luxurious, well lit dining place.

Raman chose a comfortable seating place for Ishita, and they both settled down.

Raman: "Ab first date to special honi hi chahiye. Glad ke tumhe achcha laga"

Ishita smiled and started browsing the menu card.

Raman called the waiter. "Ek fresh lime, ek.." He looked towards Ishita "aur Ishita tum kya logi?"

Ishita: "Mere liye ek medhu vadaa.."

Raman intervened and spoke to the waiter: " Ek minute..Hum abhi decide kar ke batate hain. Please give us some time"

Raman to Ishita: " Ab yahan par bhi aake Madrasi khanna khaogi? No..tum madrasi khaana nahi khaogi. Mere bachche ko bhi apni tarah madrasi banaa dogi tum"

Ishita: " Ab aapke do bachche Punjabi hain to do Madrasi bhi to hone chahiyein naa!"

Ishita's eyes widened as she put her hand on her mouth realising what she had just spoken.

"Kya???" Raman stood up in excitement, without realising that everybody around in the place started starring at them, distracted by the noise made as Raman got up.

Ishita quickly got up and ensured Raman settled down. She held both his hands and looked into his eyes.

"Raman, main actually aapko surprise dena chahti thi. But abhi galti se mere muh se nikal gaya. I am sorry I dint tell you. We are having twins Raman"

"Kya! " Raman smiled and his eyes filled with tears of joy.

"Ab aap kyun ro rahe hain issbar, isme rone ki kya baat hai?" Ishita spoke.

Raman laughed, tears flowing down his eyes "Mere char char bachche! Isiliye ro raha hoon"

They both laughed together.They smiled looking into each others eyes, both their eyes were wet. Raman went ahead and kissed her forehead.

Raman: "Thank you Ishita. Thank you for bringing so much happiness into my life"

They enjoyed the rest of their dinner.


***

"Raman aap ye mujhe kahan le jaa rahe hain?" Ishita spoke sitting in the car, some time after they left the dining place.

Raman: " Shhh.. please thoda wait karo"

Ishita: "But Raman.."

Raman stopped his car in the middle of a colony area.

He switched on the music player of his car. Ishita heard a very familiar song, an unforgettable song for her..

Kabhi jo badal barse, mai dekhun tujhe aankein bharke..
Tu lage mujhe pehli Baarish ki dua..


Ishita looked around. It was the same place they had danced in the rain some months back: it was here where for the first time raman had hugged her..the first time he had opened her hair..the first time he had touched her waist.. the first time he had got so close to her physically..the first time she had realised that she felt soo strongly for him..

Raman got out of the car, went towards Ishita's side and opened that door of the car.

Raman: " Dance?"

"Raman.." Ishita looked shyly at Raman.

Raman: "Kyun Salsa champion, aaj darr gayi?"

Ishita :"But Raman, is halat mein?"

Raman: "Dont worry, main hoon naa. We will dance, but slowly. You will be fine. Come."

Ishita stepped out and Raman pulled her carefully onto his chest. This time Ishita hugged him properly, not as scaringly as she did last time. Raman pulled the clip
from her hair, and her silky hair fell smoothly on her back.

They looked into each others eyes. Ishita then looked away as she did last time, and walked away shyly. Raman pulled her carefully and she rolled into his arms slowly.
This time he kissed her on the her collar bone. They followed the same steps as last time..but this time Ishita looked into his eyes lovingly.
She gave herself to him totally, willingly following everything he made her do. They smiled looking into each others eyes in the step in between where they almost hugged, and he pushed her down holding her back very carefully.He trailed his lips on her neck. They gazed into each others eyes smilingly as they got up holding hands.


Koi Nahin..tere siva mera yahan,
Manzilein, hain meri to sab yahan..
Mita de sabhi aaja faasle, main chahoon mujhe mujhse baant le,
zaraa sa mujhme tu jhaank le, main hoon kya..

"You smell so good Ishu" Raman spoke into her ear as he held her from the back. They continued to dance exactly like last time.

And this time when the song ended, he came closer and placed his lips on hers softly. They kissed with all the love they had for each other..

***

"Raman aapko ghar nahin jaana?" Ishita asked him as he closed the door of her house and latched the door from inside.
"Nahin..today I wanna spend the night with my wife and my kids" Raman answered.

Raman took her to her room and laid her down carefully on the bed. He removed his clothes and joined her. He wrapped his arms around her from the back as they
lay side by side.. He pulled down the staps of her dress... and trailed his lips down her back, her shoulders, her arms, her hands.. Ishita responded by implating kisses on his chest..his neck, his ears, his cheeks, his eyes..
They spooned into each other and made love.

Raman pulled her hair aside and kissed her on her ear. He realised that Ishita's eyes were wet.

"Kya hua Ishu?" he spoke looking into her eyes from the side, worriedly.

Ishita: "Raman, sab theek to ho jaayega naa. Kabhi kabhi bahut darr lagta hai"

"Sab theek hoga Ishita" Raman spoke holding onto her hands from the back.
"Our babies are with us." he spoke. He bent his head from the side, kissed her on her cheek and caressed her arms assuringly.

~End of Part 6~


So how did you find this part? Also do let me know which is ur fav part so far!
Edited by peace.. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wonderful update 👏 👏
Raman is sooo sweet 😃 😳 😳
Awww...loved their date 😳 😳
Wow...ishra having twins
Loved their rain dance ..
Fabulous update.
Loved it..
Cant wait for next update
Continue soon
Edited by aYASHIKA - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awww..lovely update..
Liked their first date ..
Plz continue soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update
Raman ke char bacche 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely update..
Ishu's fears are but natural..

twins what a surprise..
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow...twins...cant see ishra lik dis...close the shagun drama asap...ofcrese chup chup ke milan se maaza aata hain lekin...ishra ko saath dekna hain raman ke gahr mein...iss shagun ka kuch karo...loved the part...
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Posted: 10 years ago
first date...romantic update dear...
thnks 4 pm
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow...superbbb update yaar... n such a cute os... raman has bcom a very caring husband... n now he is going to be a father of 4 children... wow... dats fantastic... very interesting plot... plsss continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Www so cute and romantic. Pls get that shagun out soon

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