SS- Between The Raindrops | last chapter on page 34

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Hello again,
I know i might have begun to irritate you already with such frequent posts but with all the criticism and over-thinking of the current track going on in the forum, I thought we could use some dose of romance in here on Sunday. The story line is a bit hazy for now and I hope to form a coherent and interesting one as it proceeds.

Also, I'm trying to explore this side of romance writing for the first time and hope not to disappoint you all.

Looking forward to your feedback/comments.

Love
Amna

Chapter 1- page 1
Chapter 2- page 3
Chapter 3- page 10
Chapter 4- page 12
Chapter 5- page 15
Chapter 6- page 18
Chapter 7- page 22
Chapter 8- page 27
Chapter 9- page 30
Chapter 10-page 34




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Chapter 1


She was walking up the stairs with her daughter in tow, to her home, lost in her reverie of the small coupling that took place in the car.

Everyone had gathered at the Bhalla's to have dinner together and later at night they decided to have coffee instead of homemade tea. It all started after they left home and Ruhi insisted on staying with shravan on the way to the cafe. They had only reached the first signal together and after a look at his wife, he turned right instead of going straight with the troop. A few minutes later the car was parked under the tree, near the park. He slided her seat back and claimed her mouth like it was the only saviour of a drowning man. Her state was no less than him, she reciprocated his desires just the same. His hands were all over her bare waist, claiming her, savoring her.

It was the shrill of this cell phone that made them stop in thier exploration and brought back to reality. It was mihir asking about their whereabouts, since every one had reached except for them. He avoided talking much, knowing his voice would give him away which was thick due to the recent mingling. So he responded in just two words "yes?" And "okay." And cut the call before his dear confidante could prode him more into answering his current location.

"They have arrived." He informed her.

She nodded and tried to compose herself. A few minutes later they arrived at cafe coffee day and she was still trying to fix her Saree plaits which had come off due to him. He parked the car when she asked him "do I look okay?" And turned the rear view mirror to her side to fix her hair.


"No, you look beautiful." He said after resting her chin on her shoulder.

She blushed and got out of the car. He stood there, resting his back on the driver's side when she continued to walk towards the coffee shop. She turned around and asked him "what?"

"Come here." And she walked back to him on her still wobbling legs and stood in front of him.

He grabbed her waist and held her close. "I think we should head back home early." He said with eyes that disclose all the love that he felt for her. Before she could make her mind, they were disturbed by the presence of the bride-to-be who asked "do you think you can continue this little chit chat inside, we all are waiting for you two!"

"Tonight." He whispered his promise and they made their way in.

She was a bundle of nerves by the time she reached her doorstep, thinking about the promise he had made.

Thier first night as man and wife.

Just when she was going to enter her home, she was halted again by the same source who has apparently vowed to hamper the romance of her life, saying "you can't possibly think to sleep in there, come we have a lot to do" and just like that she tugged her along to her maternal home.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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👏👏im getting use to these surprises
yup we desperately need a distraction in the form of os/ss😊

wonderful, romantic start⭐️
im loving it already😃
i guess we shouldnt be surprised at mihika's tendency to interrupt their amazing moments..😆
waiting for raman's reaction 😆
looking forward to this one dear😊
take care
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sounds interesting..waiting for your next update 😃
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amazing update soon and pm me if possible when u r done with ur update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hahaha!! Mihika vs Raman jeeju! Nice beginning!
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Really well written. Eagerly waiting for the next update 😊
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nicely written
yeh mihika bhi na kabab main haddi
waiting for next update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing. ..
Will love to read further. ..
Continue soon ..
Pm me if u can
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wow another rockin story from u..beautiful romantic start

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