OS: An Inevitable Mistake- part-3 page 15

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Sunita

@avni_19

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Oh my Goddd this was sooo beautifull.. loved it. I was smiling like an idiot while reading.

Apko satisfaction nahi mili, lekin hume mila satisfaction. Complete justice ti the part u gave.

Bring on the next part too..hehehe. im loving it!

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Ash

@-RisingAsh-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

OMG beautiful beautiful update dear.. Awww i was imagining these two for real.. Wonderful job ! Loved the convo n atlast tht pillow fight.. Was a pleasure to read :)

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ABI

@ABBY92

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Glad Raman and Ishita cleared out that their misunderstandings and that Raman is no longer mad at Ishita. It's nice to see that their relationship moving in the right direction now.

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

wow such a beautiful update
awww...their pillow fight
n my cutie ruhi
loved it

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bhakti

@Nany

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

thanks for the pm deary...
amazing update

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JazzyM

@JazzyM

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Raman and Ishita hugged their precious daughter and Raman took her in his arms while he pulled ishita towards him,putting his arm across her shoulder.

Awesome yar... loved the above line. Very KP and YHM like. You nailed it yar. Good job

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Anu

@-HoneyDukes-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Seriously yaar, what made you think that it wasn't good enough.??
It was so brilliant..
Starting from their convo to their silent confession.. It was all superb..
Though they didnt say the three words but their feelings say no less. Loved their conversation ❤️
Specially about the trust..

The last part was super adorable..Ishra ki pillow fight..Damn I wish we could get something like that onscreen..but alas..I am wishing too much..Aaj kal toh ishra scenes ke liye tarasna padta hai..😭

Ruhi daadiamma...she is so adorable.. The perfect family... ❤️

Loved the update.. is there a continuation for this one now.? Thanks for the pm 😃