Doorii Sahi jaye naa - SS Last Part page 14 [Index pg 1]

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shravani_2311

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Posted: 11 years ago

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i want to see ishu's confrnce in mumbai...nd she agreed fr tht so tht she can be wid raman nd ruhi...nd the two angls of his life to suprse him by dis sweet presence...

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Posted: 11 years ago

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reallyy amazinggg amazinggg updatee!!! loved itt!! esp the ishra phone convo.. how cuteee!!

do continuee soonn the next part! :) <3

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Sabina

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: shavi2311
i want to see ishu's confrnce in mumbai...nd she agreed fr tht so tht she can be wid raman nd ruhi...nd the two angls of his life to suprse him by dis sweet presence...

I thought other way that Ishita to not go to the conference as then I wil have to write more parts And by the track these CV's are going I can't guarantee when will I take a break from thinking about cute things 😆😆

Thankyou so much for reading it and giving your suggestions will still think about it😳

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Sabina

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: avni_19
reallyy amazinggg amazinggg updatee!!! loved itt!! esp the ishra phone convo.. how cuteee!!
do continuee soonn the next part! :) <3

Thank you Avni and thanks for not getting bored with the phone convo which I thought some will be😳

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Anu

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Such a cute update that was...

Loved Ishra's convo again.. So he chose to spend his day shopping.. 😆 Raman Kumar Bhalla shopping so patiently.. Phew.! Sab Biwi se dur hone ka Asar hai..

I loved how he said the angels of my life..😳

The last bit was cute once again.. Naughty Bhalla.. Neither of them are able to bear the distances.. Hope we get some romance in the next part ❤️

Thank you for the cute update.. Update the next part soon.. Thanks.!

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Sabina

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: -IshRaDivAn-
Such a cute update that was...
Loved Ishra's convo again.. So he chose to spend his day shopping.. 😆 Raman Kumar Bhalla shopping so patiently.. Phew.! Sab Biwi se dur hone ka Asar hai..
I loved how he said the angels of my life..😳
The last bit was cute once again.. Naughty Bhalla.. Neither of them are able to bear the distances.. Hope we get some romance in the next part ❤️

Thank you for the cute update.. Update the next part soon.. Thanks.!

Well I definitely don't know to write romantic parts 😉😆 So yeah will give Ishra scenes cute one's romantic ka pata nahi😆

And thankyou so much for the long comment, means a lot.

Glad that you liked it 😃

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