Doorii Sahi jaye naa - SS Last Part page 14 [Index pg 1]

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I saw quite a few OS's about Raman/Ishita going somewhere and the missing each other. So I am here with my story.
Sorry if it's not up to the mark as today the forum's state and YHM episodes are quite distracting now a days and not encouraging😕

Anyway here goes my story, Sorry for any mistake as it's not proof read.

Part - I

Another Morning in Bhalla house, the daily routine was to be followed and so Ishita woke up and got freshen up and after waking both father and daughter she went to prepare breakfast. And then made Ruhi ready and sent her with Mr. Iyer to school. After that she noticed Raman was not yet in the dining table, thinking he must be searching something she went towards their room and sees him on the phone
Raman : No.
I said I can't
Shut up Mihir, I don't care. Handle if you can or just let it go
Mihir you know I can't go anywhere not even for a whole single day let alone two nights.
Okay, I will talk with them.
And he disconnects the call a little irritated, and looked towards Ishita who seemed to understand what the phone call was about in bits and peices. She knew he was asked to go somewhere probably for business purpose and he is ignoring for her. He can't live her with that Param, but he can't avoid his work too. So she thought to ask him what's the matter.

Ishita : Raman breakfast is ready, Please come
Raman : Hmmm [Taking up a file to give it a last look if all is perfect for today's presentation]
Ishita : You are going somewhere?
Raman : Are u nuts, Where do I go everyday in my formals?? [in him cranky tone]
Ishita : I am not talking about office, I meant the phone call
Raman shook his head and said : You aren't deaf enough to not hear my answer Ishita.
Ishita : But you should go, the deal must be important na, that's Y Mihir was adamant
Raman looked up from the file he was reading and answered : It's not about any deal. But the presidentship. [He chuckled a little as he remembered their convo and said] Your wish is granted, they are sending their president for two nights in Mumbai for some formal matters and some meeting is being oorganised with all the foreign presidents of this entreprenuership organisation on those countries too. Yeah it will have some big business tycoons too included but presidents are asked to come specially as it is for their development of the organisation.
Ishita : Then you must obviously go, how will Mihir handle this. And how can you say no to this. Infact, you should be happy you are getting a chance to...

Before she could continue Raman walked outside whereas Ishita stood shocked at the audacity of this man, and she followed him muttering 'Mannerless'

On the Dining Table Raman sat and was looking at irritated Ishita who was pouring him his coffee and held his hands, Ishita looked towards him when he asked her to sit through his eyes. She sat

Raman : I have a important meeting here so I can't go, and I didn't had the whole day for your good-for-nothing lectures so I walked out
Ishita : Stop lying Raman, I very well know the reason. [Raman sighed and spoke after a small pause]
Raman : You know I can't go with that leech here, I didn't forget what happened last time
Ishita : I understand Raman, But this time I have my whole family my mother's, my father's, Romi, Mikku everyone Raman. And I will take care of myself I promise, and moreover you have Mihir and now even Mihika is in your team so they can report you if I don't follow your orders. But don't just give this oppurtunity.
Raman : Ishi..
Ishita [cutting him off and keeping her other hand on top of his hand which he was already holding] : I know, No oppurtunity is bigger than your family [with a big smile]. But for me your success matters too. So you are going and that's decided or I will go on and ask Papajee to make you understand that how stupid are you in your this Mission Biwi Bachao [she laughed]
Raman : Very funny, BTW I was going to say Don't give yourself importance, I was worried about Simmi not you. And moreover you don't count in the number of peoples for whom I will give up any ooppurtunity.
Ishita : Yeah.. I very well know Mr. Raman Kumar Bhalla "Meri biwi ke liye aise 100 posts sadqaa " Lines kahii suni suni lag rahi hai na [She was laughing hyterically and Raman was embarassed being caught red handed and wondered how she came to know about this dialogue even Mihir wasn't present there]

He walked up in haste and asked her not to fly high as it was just to show Shagun and also said her to pack his bag.Whereas he wasn't sure if he should go or not as he didn't want to leave Ishita alone but at the same time he can't let Ishita go and ask everyone to manaofy him as he knows everyone will atlast force him to go anyway.

He went to office and asked Mihir when shall he leave. Mihir said tomorrow morning, and then they have a meeting tomorrow itself after they reach.
Raman asked him to confirm his tickets and cursed himself as why he didn't asked Mihir the details before handed as he could have easily avoided office today and stayed with Ishita. But again he dismissed his thoughts saying how follish of him to think like this as he was going to stay away for only two days and he is already missing her and bbehaving like a roadside romeo.

He was in conference whole day and after the conference was over he had to do some work as he will be away for two days. After finishing his all the work he looked at his watch to see it's already midnight and he cursed himself loudly to work blindly and miss a few moments with Ishita too. He knows she must be tired too and he can't be selfish to keep her awake all night as she has to wake up early in the morining and go to clinic too.

Raman returned his home and opened the door and entered the living room only to see Ishita sitting there on the chair and seemed like she was going to sleep any moment. He walked towards her and shook her gently. She woke and asked him to change and she will heat the food.

Ishra sat to have their dinner when Raman informed her that he will be going tomorrow early morning and will come after two days but he will try to come back asap. She silently nodded and both finished their dinner, and Raman walked inside the room while Ishita was cleaning the table. Ishita though showed that she was normal but she wasn't very happy that he was going. If it was not for his succes she wouldn't have let him go and it was not for Param, it was for herself, she didn't want him to go there because she remembers that previously he was with Shagun. How much she makes her understand that she is okay with Shagun and how much she shows Raman that she isn't bothered if he talks to Shagun but only she knows how it hurts her. She knows Raman is not in Love with Shagun but she feels a strange hurt in her heart whenever shagun is mentioned anywhere near Raman.

Raman on the other hand kept waiting for Ishita but she was no where to be seen, and at last his pent up tiredness gave up and he went to a deep slumber in his sitting position.
After few minutes Ishita entered the room and seeing Raman's position and the TV's main switch off she understood he was waiting for her and she was sad that due to her nonsense thoughts she missed a few moments with Raman. Slowly she made him sleep in the bed and went to take her place on the other side. She too drifted off to sleep.

It was 4 am when Raman heard slow moments and tingling of bangles and opened his eyes to see Ishita standing in front of the mirror looking all fresh and small droplets were dripping from her hair to his face as she was trying to dry her hair. He woked up and went to freshen up. As he came out he saw his clothes were ready, his luggage was at a corner of the room. He got ready and went out to see none of his family member woke except Ishita.

Ishita placed his breakfast
Raman : Seems like you are very happy as I will not be here to disturb you Madrassan. Mere ghar ko apna bananeka mazaa hi aur hai na ?
Ishita was about to reply him when Toshijee spoke up
Toshijee : Arrey uth gaye tumlog , Changa hogaya
Mr.Bhalla : Aur nahi toh ki toshijee. Chal raman puttar ab chetti chetti kar flight ka time hogaya hai.
Raman : Jee papa jee, Waise where is Romi ?
Toshijee : he must be sleeping na
Raman : Hmmm, [looking at Ishita] Please bring my bags out I will be leaving now

Saying so he moved to Romi's room.
He waked up Romi and said him to take care of Ishita and not to leave her anywhere alone even not while going or coming from clinic and for this if he needs leave from office as a price then also it is accepted but if he gets to know Ishita landed in any problem due to his negligense, his 32 teeths will be out and even Ishita can't do it all right. Romi ensured him that he will be always there for his Bhabi.

After a while both Raman and Romi walked out of the room and not seeing Ishita around he said Toshijee to not go out for these days and if she did then to please take Ishita with her. And let this Param stay far away from her. Both his parents assured him.
After a while both Simmi and Param comes out of their room even Ishita comes out and every one says Raman bye and tells him to take care.
When he turned thinking to go to Ishita suddenly he heard his little angel asking him
Ruhi : Papa you are going without saying bye to Ruhi ?
Raman moved towards his daughter : No baby, How can Papa forget Ruhi ? But Ruhi was sleeping na so I thought I will talk to her later and not disturb her.
Ruhi : [she kissed on Raman's cheek ] Bye papa, Take care and bring me lots of gifts
Raman letting a laugh : Sure princess now bye [and kisses her]

MrBhalla : Fast puttar jee it's already late, Now go
Raman : Yes papa bas 2 min
Suddenly Mihir came in that exact moment and dragged Raman outside explaining some inportant details about their some project and asking his how they should proceed in this matter when he was not here.

Ishita stood there with tears, he couldn't believe that man just walked out without saying her a bye. Yeah Mihir dragged him out, so what when did he listen to others. But anyway she too decided she don't care and walked to her room.

On the other hand, Raman was restless he didn't even say her a good bye but how can he say so now Mihir was sitting right beside him and non stop talking as if he was going for 2years and the company's burden is all over this Mihir.

He took out his phone and Messaged her
Soon her phone beeped and she beemed seeing the sender's name Ravaan Kumar.
She opened it and saw "Good Bye, Don't miss me too much . . I know it's hard but still ;)"
She kissed the message and Raman's name and then blushed realising what she did.
Thinking what to type in return she took whole 5mins to reply him back after writing and erasing the message for nth time she at last sent
"Miss you ? Not even in your dreams. BTW No need to hurry Mr.President take your sweet time to return."
Raman smiled reading the message and replied
"Yeah Sure !! But I have to return for my daughter, wish I could take her with me so I could have live years away from you"
Ishita replied back
"I hate you, Get lost and don't text me back"
Raman laughed on this, he really loved when Ishita gets pissed off with his taunts and jokes. If only he can let her know what she means to him. His thoughts were again disturbed by Mihir when he asked him a question again and he shook his head in irritation and kept his got engrossed with him totally with peace to have said Ishita a good bye atleast.

Ishita on the other hand keot reading those messages repeateadly and smiled.


This is for today. Please let me know how it was. Leave a Comment and Press Like button if you liked it.
Love you all🤗

Index:
Part 1 - above
Part 2 - Page 5
Part 3 - Page 9
Part 4 - Page 14
Edited by Guguminti - 10 years ago

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VasuKaShlicious thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely part dear... i wanna missing each other scenes in show too... 😳
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Loved it 😊
Continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Congrats for the new TS.. Brilliant start...
So Raman off to Mumbai.. Loved his care.. He wasn't ready to go but agreed after all..
Aww.. It was so cute to see a J Ishu.. 😳 He is so worried about her, loved how he told Romi and Toshi Ji to take care of his Jhansi ki rani..

Ishra's phone convo was so adorable. And Ishu kissed his message and his name.. Awwieee.!

Update the next part soon.. Will be waiting 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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loved it...plz pm me next part if possible😳😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awww.. this is sooo sweet and cutee updatee!! im loving Raman as the "protective Bhalla" for ishita! love how he instructed his parents and romi to take care of ishita and the message exchange, realy sweet one!!
great goingg!! loved it completely.. plss PM me whn u update the next part! thanku so muchh!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome begining...👏👏👏👏
Continue..
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ufff .. my fav. song frm one of my fav singers...
Nice starting...
good job gugu...
continue soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wen will this 2 grow up...

ruhi ka shaadi ke dhin bhi...eh dhonom ladege,...

ha ha ha ha ha

if raman got time to wish ishu...

how would have he wished her...bye...

poor ishu... to b 2 days alone...

hope she will be fine...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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superb...curious about next part..
loved their messages..

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