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Posted: 10 years ago
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ist part was fabulus
2nd will read now
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Thanks to all those who have commented... Planning to start this after completing my other work... Sorry for the delay...
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Originally posted by: krikumar.91

Thanks to all those who have commented... Planning to start this after completing my other work... Sorry for the delay...

maine abhi abhi suru kiya tha😭
koi nahi other one will cnt na👏
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Originally posted by: ashlesha2

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OMG...Itna sab kuch likh diya... Thank you... Will try to continue soon... Let us see how it works...
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Originally posted by: ashlesha2

maine abhi abhi suru kiya tha😭
koi nahi other one will cnt na👏


Yes... I'll continue...
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After boarding their flight,

Ishita: Raman...Mujhe yahan tension ho rahi hai...

Raman: Jaanta hoon... Take off ke waqt tumhe darr lagta hai... Hold me na...

Ishita: Usse jyada darr iss baar landing ko lekar ho raha hai...

Raman: Itna tension kyon le rahi ho yaar?

Ishita: Amma ne message bheja... Kal Subbu aa raha hai...

Raman: Tumhari periamma ki cousin... Ab tak uss phattu ne shaadi nahi kiya?

Ishita: Mere liye wait kar raha hai...

Raman: Tum bhi na... Ek baar photo bhejni chahiye tha na... Darke ussi waqt bhaag gaya hoga...

Ishita: Itna ghatiya joke maarna bandh karo...

Raman: Tension kis baat ki hai isme... Tumhe toh sach bolne ki shouk chadi hai na... Bol do...

Ishita: Aur voh jaake amma ko sab kuch batayega... Ki main unki jaani dushman ke beeba puttar se pyaar kar rahi hoon... Nice...

Raman: Toh second option hai na...

Ishita: Kya?

Raman: Ussi phattu se shaadi kar lo...

Ishita smacks Raman's shoulders...

Raman: Kya? Tum sach bhi nahi bologi na jhoot... Aise mein insaan kya karega? Uski koi girlfriend?

Ishita: Impossible... Voh ladka mujhse shaadi karna chahta hai... Kahan hogi girlfriend?

Raman: Serious relationship nahi...kuch aise hi casual wala... Like us...

Ishita: Raman...

Raman: I said not like us...

Ishita: Ab tak meri kaan behri nahi hui...

Raman: (In a low voice) Kaash... (To Ishita) Toh jawaab do...

Ishita: (After thinking for a while) No... Kuch bhi nahi hai...

Raman: Iss jawab dene le liye itna kyon soch rahi thi? Banda window shopping bhi nahi karta?

Ishita: Nahi... He hasn't talked to a girl in his lifetime yaar... Mere alava ofcourse...

Raman: Kya yaar? Waise na bolne ke liye reason ka hona zaroori hai kya? Bas bol do ki tumhe who ladka pasand nahi hai...

Ishita: Amma ko voh pasand hai kyonki voh shart ko bhi maanta hai...

Raman: Kaisi shart?

Ishita: Ghar jamai banne wali shart...

Raman: What? Agar mujhe tumse shaadi karna hai toh mujhe bhi yeh shart manna padega kya? Bakwaas...

Ishita: Aise nah... Ek minute... Tumne usse bakwaas kaha?

Raman: Haan... Kaisi shart hai yeh?

Ishita: Meri amma mujhse bahut jyada pyaar karti hai... Isliye aisa keh rahi hai...

Raman: Lekin ghar jamai...

Ishita: Stupid hai lekin yeh toh periamma ka kaam hai... Amma ko brainwash kiya...

Raman: Tumhari periamma ko pehle lapaata karo... Toh kya amma Subbu ko almost fix kar diya?

Ishita: Sort of...

Raman: Hmm...Ishita... Tum manaa nahi kar sakthi kyonki gharwale sawaal karenge lekin voh manaa kar saktha hai na?

Ishita: Kaise karega?

Raman: Tum uske zindagi mein aanewali pehli ladki ho lekin voh tumhare zindagi mein aanewala pehle ladka toh nahi hai...

Ishita: Phir wahi pe aake ruk gayi... I can't tell this story to him...

Raman: Uski kya zaroorat hai?

Ishita: What are you trying to say?

Raman: Ishita...Aise log bahut possessive hote hain... Usne kisiko aankh utaake nahi dekha toh voh wahi expect karega tujhse...

Ishita: Ya...

Raman: So...just show him that you are not like that... Kisi ladke se socially move karo aur usse mirchi lag jayegi... Phir voh khud hesitate karega... Ispe tum drama kar lo...

Ishita: Do you think that this'll work?

Raman: Tumhare pass aur koi option hai? (Ishita shakes her head) Toh try karo na... You know.. Main ladkon ki psychology jaanta hoon...

Ishita: Lekin ladka kahaan se dhoondh laon? Delhi mein humare koi bhi dost nahi hai na ab...

Raman: Mera dost...Mihir...

Ishita: Haan...usse toh bhool gayi...

Raman: Toh khush... Hogayi plan fix?

Ishita: Hmm... Let us see...

Raman: Itna pyaara plan bataya... Iske chakkar mein take off bhi ho gayi lekin koi yahan grateful hi nahi hai yaar...

Ishita: Hum itne saare log ke saath flight mein travel kar rahe hain...

Raman: Sab apne apne kaam mein busy hain darling...

Ishita who was about to kiss him on his cheek gets startled by the sudden vibration of her mobile and the kiss slips down to the nape of his neck where a bright lipstick mark stays behind...

Raman: Ishita ji... Yeh kya kar rahe ho? Gaal pe kiss maanga maine...

Ishita: Shut up... Ab kuch nahi milega... Mujhe movie dekhna hai...

Raman: Mujhe sona hai... Bye...

Finally, Ishita and Raman lands in Delhi airport to meet their family... While parting, Ishita gives a kiss on Raman's cheek leaving him surprised...

Raman: Meri Madrasan... Kaafi bold ho rahi hai... America mein kiss maanga aur humare desh mein de rahi ho... Meri Bharatiya naari... Wah...

Ishita: Har baat pe tujhe taunt karna hai. Kyon?

Raman: Chal... Bye... Ab apne territory ke taraf march karna padega... Wagah border mein bhi tension isse kam hi hoga...

Ishita: Bye...

Just then, Ishita notices the lipstick mark on his cheek... Before Ishita could call him, Raman disappears from her view... Ishita quickly follows him but her family catches hold of her before that...

Madhu: Ishu...En kanna...

Ishita: (With a tensed face) Amma...

Madhu: Aise kyon react kar rahi ho tum Ishu? Hume dekhkar khush nahi hui?

Ishita realized that she can't save Raman after that and started conversing with her family...

Ishita: Illa amma... Kuch aur tension tha... Chodo... Chalo...

Meanwhile, Raman was moving towards his family and greets everyone... Mihir who hugs Raman first notices that lipstick mark... He tries to stop Raman but in vain...

Mihir: Raman...

Raman: Kya?

Noticing that everyone's eyes are fixed on him, he gave up...

Mihir: Handsome lag rahe ho yaar...

Raman: Main toh paida hi aisa hua tha... Thanks Mihir...

Mihir notices that Rinky was standing two persons away from Raman and goes near her.

Mihir: Rinky di...

Rinky: Kya hua?

Mihir: Raman ke gaal mein lipstick mark hai...

Rinky: Kya?

Mihir: Aunty ne notice nahi kiya lekin Param jeeju zaroor notice karenge... Do something...

After getting into the car, Ishita starts searching for her mobile.

Bala: Ishu...Abhi abhi land hui ab mobile dhoondhna shuru... Hume bhi waqt do...

Saying so, he took her hand bag out of her hands...

Ishita: (Thinking) Ayyo... Mera Raman... Murugaa... Save him...

On the other hand, before Raman could take Param's blessings, Rinky jumps in between and hugs him...

Mihir: Raman...

Raman: (With a astonished look) Rinky di... How are you?

Rinky: (In a low voice) Ek minute ke liye hug ko break mat karna...

Raman: (In a low voice) Kyon?

Rinky: (In a low voice) Tumhari pyaar ki nishaan ko mummy ya kisi aur ke dekhne se pehle mitaana hai...

Raman understood the same and Rinky slowly wipes his cheek with her kerchief...

Toshi: Oye... Raman... Usse chodo...

Raman: Ma... Aaj mujhe meri behen pe bahut pyaar aa raha hai ma...

Rinky: Ho gaya...

Toshi: Kya?

Rinky: Pyaar...Doosron ke saath bhi baatna hai na... Mere saath ho gaya...

Raman: Thank you di...

Toshi: Thenk you?

Raman: Kitna sawaal karogi ma... Mujhe aashirwaad do...

Raman gets into the car with Mihir, Toshi, Simmi and Param while others gets into the second one...

Raman: Jeeju...AC chal raha hai kya? Kitna stuffy hai?

Saying so, he unbuttons the first button of his shirt making the nape of his neck visible... Once again, Mihir notices the second lipstick mark too...

Mihir: (Thinking) Ramannn... Yeh kya hai?

Mihir: (To Raman) Tumhe itna paseena kyon aa raha hai?

Raman: Kahan?

Mihir: Yahan...

He wipes his neck with his kerchief when Param notices the same...

Param: Mihir... Sab teek hai na? Tum dono ke beech... Airport mein saale sahib ko handsome bulaya aur ab yeh kya kar rahe ho?

Raman: Kya jeeju? (To Mihir) Tu bhi kya kar raha hai yaar?

Raman snatches the kerchief out of his hands and notices the pink mark on it... He looks at Mihir who nods his head assuringly... Apart from Raman, another person notices the mark in that kerchief...

Toshi: (Snatches the kerchief) Oye... Yeh kya hai Mihir? Tere rumaal mein yeh rang kaise aayi?

Simmi: Dikhavo mumma... Yeh toh lip stick jaisa lag raha hai...

Toshi: Mihir...

Mihir: Auntyji... Aisa kuch nahi hai... Aap mujhpe bharosa karo na...

Param: Arey Mihir... Jo maine pehle socha usse yeh toh behtar hi hai... Kam se kam ladki toh hai...

While all this was happening, Raman had a difficult time controlling his laughter leaving Mihir to boil in fury... On reaching home,

Raman: Aap log jao... Main aur Mihir saaman lekar aate hain...

When the clan moves out of their earshot, Raman bursts out...

Mihir: Has rahe ho? Tu has rahe ho Raman? Bas...

Raman: (Finally controlling himself) Aur kya karta? Mere bechare dost...

Mihir: Tum dono flight mein kar kya rahe the? Har jagah lipstick ka mark...

Raman: Har jagah?

Mihir: Maine kahaa Rinky di se...

Raman: Thank you Bhai...

Mihir: Sharam kar tu... Tumhare kartoot ke wajah se aunty aur jeeju mujhe galat samaj rahe hain...

Raman: Sorry yaar...

Mihir: Ishita kaisi hai?

Raman: Teek hai... Actually, mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai... Chalo...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Heyy plz continue this ss again its lovely plz plz continue why you stopped it
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Thanks yaar...
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Originally posted by: Isha_Pathare

Heyy plz continue this ss again its lovely plz plz continue why you stopped it


Will try to update it regularly... Let us see...

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