Ishra ff:Breath of Fresh Air: last part(chapter 16, page72)

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Jyoe

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

very nice! there are sparks flying from the beignning itself huh!! nice..waiting for next update.!

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Sunita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Lolll... soi cutee n sweet update! Completely different story n concept! Keep continuing. Eager to read part 3 . Plsss PM me. Thnkuu soo muchh

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Tinni Kazi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

WOww...superb prt
tnx fr pm
updt soon

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florine_20

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Wow awesome update. And last line was cherry on the pie. Wonderful. Update soon

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Divan_Sashona

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

woh kya hai na, subhe kuch kachra chala gaya tha muh pe, ussi ko saaf karwane aaya hu" and winked.

typical RKB style one liner nice update

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maya252

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: paru_rox
I do hope you plan to update regularly ...coz I just can't get enough of this story. That is how much I like it.

Psst ...what are chances of fireworks in Ishita's clinic today ... in more ways than one😉.

Raman better consider if he really wants Ishita to be treating him, she might just pull out a couple of his teeth 😛

I plan to update twice a week, so that the quality doesn't get deemed 😊 thanks for appreciating my work
fireworks for sure, when they are together fireworks are bound to happen
A toothless raman wud be horrible to kiss don't u think so? 😳 poor ishita will have to pay for her own deeds then
and I must tell,I love ur comments 😊

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maya252

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: twerping
haha!!! Ramannn!! Excellently written... funny and emotional at the same time! Can't wait to read about Ishita's revenge!

thanks 😊