Ishra ff:Breath of Fresh Air: last part(chapter 16, page72) - Page 38

Originally posted by: sahibasharma

oh this is getting better with each update..

he is such a tease...

but the idiot he is why can he not say love rather want..???

things wud have been easier then...

ooh ishita is also thinking about second chance..now that is progress..:P

precap sounds interesting...

he will surely try to make her jealous...it is going to be fun...so much fun...

loved it...

waise pls tell me what is up with this white saree and her remembering something...pls clear my confusion...i dont seem to collect that part...

ps: i am so happy that@desire_nikki and @arunabhiare ready to proceed with the ajab leher...so curious to read that forward...big thanks to them and thanks to u too for convincing them...

thank you :) :) :)
the white saree shower dreams that Raman had in the first few chapters, remember? :o and he told her that the night they made love :)
i'm wating for their update too :D it'll be fun

Originally posted by: shalz_123

tht is amazing... subtle n yet sizzling hot... the story is different...i can connect with ur Ishra so much... they are our YHm wala Ishra... hope u continue soon... n i m sad to know that you r not continuing with ur other story... n i sincerely hope you write again...n come up with another great story... ofcourse after finishing this... update soon...😃😳

:) thanks :) i'll pen down stuffs when I get bored of asli dunia, i'll surely post if i come up with something :)

Originally posted by: dochdoe

:) thanks :) i'll pen down stuffs when I get bored of asli dunia, i'll surely post if i come up with something :)

WOW... ROMANTIC UPDATE...

Lovely update Doc. Raman love Ishu so much and hope Ishu too will give her life a 2 nd chance. Only last part I don't understand much cause write in Hindi sorry to say that cause I don't understand Hindi. So what you mention about he will tell that he will get marry to another girl or he will ask his mom to come and ask for Ishu to marry him. Thank you for let us know you will continue Ajab story with our friends.will wait for next update both stories.Have a wonderful weekend dear.😊

Originally posted by: usaonly

Lovely update Doc. Raman love Ishu so much and hope Ishu too will give her life a 2 nd chance. Only last part I don't understand much cause write in Hindi sorry to say that cause I don't understand Hindi. So what you mention about he will tell that he will get marry to another girl or he will ask his mom to come and ask for Ishu to marry him. Thank you for let us know you will continue Ajab story with our friends.will wait for next update both stories.Have a wonderful weekend dear.😊

hey, thanks
I m sorry, I actually assumed that every1 here understands hindi, im comfortable in writing both, my other stories are totally in english, so I thought of giving this one a desi tadka :) will update in english for the rest chapters... Raman's mom has selected a bride for him and she wants ishu to make him agree to the proposal, in the precap he agrees :)
Ajab will be written by them only, you'll enjoy that :) tc

awesome update ab kya kregi ishu??

oh god..wonderful update..u r such a gifted writer...undoubtedly in this forum,the list of writers whos work i SIMPLY ADORE has u too..!! i fall in love with this ff more n more as evry update pass by...!! u rock dear..!!

eagerly awaitin to read next update

"You are only trying to shield yourself behind his long faded so-called-love. You know when I look into these eyes, I find him nowhere. You are a coward who doesn't have the courage to move on and give life a second chance. And when did you hear me say friends-with-benefits? I can want nothing less than a full fledged relationship from you. And you know what I know what you feel more than you know yourself. Stop lying."

awsome...this is getting more and more interesting