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Ishita is standing on the terrace with the veil over her head, holding a see through channi which was given to her my her mother in law.Toshi ji is explaining her the rituals which she needs to perform before she breaks her fast, she is listening to them keenly, that's when both the women hear the footsteps of Raman.Toshi ji gives a shy smile and keeps her hand on Ishita's forehead and walks away,on her way out she again warns Raman to behave himself and not be rude to her.He gives her an irritated expression and kind of signalled Toshi ji to leave the premises, she knew it before he could speak out aloud, she smiles and pats him on his back saying " jaa ri aan mein" Raman blushes and walks towards his Jhansi ki Rani.

There he sees Ishita's expression which is surprisingly very serene and calm, there is a level of divine charm on her face and the moonlight just accentuates the entire effect, she looks magical to him, he expects her to be angry at him after his rude behaviour towards her while gifting her the saree in the bedroom but she's smiling and lighting the diya with utmost sincerity.If Raman could stop the time, he'd like the world to stop there and then, he'd never seen so much dedication in any one's eyes for him, she had kept a fast for him and she didn't even want him to know about it, the respect which he had for her rose exponentially.Her face had so much peace and her eyes had an exceptional glint that day, he could stare at that face all his life without a blink.She seemed so mesmerising to him. He was suddenly snapped out of his reverie, when heard her voice.
She said " hogaya Aapka!, let's perform the rituals"
He said " nahi Yaar! Do din aur Bhooki rehlo, bewfkoof aurat. Mana kiya tha na tumse fast rakhne se, toh phir kyun?"
She said " Abhi! Kya hain na. Ravan kumar ki aadat hogayi hain. Toh uske bina Jeena thoda impossible hain, hence the fast Aapki lambi umar ke liye " She said that with a wide smile which adorned her face and a certain level of proud and ownership flashed on her face.
Raman said tumhare saath reh ke, lambi umar nahi chahiye mujhe! Thank you. Tumhe Mubarak ho lambi umar. Vaise hi Jeena haraam kiya wah hain.
Ishita : Hawww! Hamesha Pathar nikla hain aaapke moo se kabhi toh kuch pyaar se Kaho
Raman : nahi aata mujhe! Ab fast toh Todho na. Seedha hospital ke glucose se todhogi kya.?
Ishita smiled and said okay, she carefully did all the rituals taught to her by her mother in law, she performed them with sincerity and dedication while her eyes spoke volumes of love for him, and Raman, on the other hand was awestruck by her beauty and sincerity. Rituals ended, he made her drink the water and gave her a bite of the barfee. Then Raman said " ab pair chuoo" Ishita laughed " pagal ho kya?", itni bhi crazy nahi hoon ab" he said " ab Sab Kara hain, toh yeh bhi Karo. She said haan chalo karti hoon, she took her foot and kicked him hard. He shouted " aaa' crazy woman" she said " haahaha! Btw mere Paas aaapke liye ek surprise video hain." He said " Ishita! I know you're a pervert, but chatt pe seriously, you like ' it' on the terrace baby,;) he winked. She shouted " ayiooo, parnth. Chee Ganda aadmi. That's not what I'm talking about. Ewww. Yeh Dekho"
Raman said " kya hain meri maa" he looked at the video and was befuddled to find Soraj on it, it was a video which showed him guilty of gambling. He said " OMG! Where did you get this and why? She spoke " I know everything about your sacrifice, and honestly I'm pissed we could have discussed over it na. But no RKB is RKB. Bond bana hain hamesha. How could you think that I would be happy getting my license when you have to give your president ship away? That's so not working out, hence Romi, Sarika and I made this plan, thus the video. What do those scoundrels think, they can mess with my husband's career and get away with it, they're highly mistaken. Bloody cheapsters. Mihir has already spoken to the New Delhi entrepreneurship' association they'll do the needful, rest Suraj has already been blackmailed regarding this and he has agreed to take his case back in exchange for this video. So yes, you're the president and I'm the doctor yet again. Congratulations Ravan and thank you for the saree, but still Bahaut mehengi thi. Zaroorat. Nahi thi."
Shocked would have been an understatement, Raman's fazed look at Ishita's outburst spoke about the immense admiration he had for this woman. He screamed " My Jhansi ki Rani I don't believe this, how could you do it? And why didn't you tell me. I hope you guys were safe and so much plotting and planning to get me back my post, that's commendable. I'm so honored but you didn't have to do this. You mean much more to me than any goddam post, that Ashok is eyeing on. He suddenly realized what he said and blushed but he was widely smiling and said " Jagga jasoos Tum bhi na! Sachi there was no need. She simply said " need toh aaapke resign Karne ke bhi nahi thi na Raman!"
He folded his hands in gratitude and admiration saying " Jhansi ki rani, you're truly the most amazing person, I've ever met in my life. Thank you for everything." Ishita said " itni sweetness by god. Mein toh faint hojaongi, sahi mein hospital Jaana padega."

Raman said " haha! Tumhe bhook lag rahi hogi na , chalo dinner pe chalte hain, acha Khana Khaye hue zamana hogaya, tumhare haathon ka khaane khaate khaate mein ek din sahi mein upar pahaunch jaonga and agar tumhare paas patients nahi aa rahe iska matlab yeh thodi hain ki gharwalo ko patthar jaise channe khila ke daant todh ke paise kamaogi"
She whacked him on his head " Ramannn! I hate you" He said " feelings are mutual,darling!

They decided to go to a nearby restaurant while they were walking on the road. Raman spoke " Ishita, thank you again for everything but you didn't have to do this, I'm anyway going to sell off my business after Ruhi's marriage. So please don't get overly attached to my business or anything."
She gave him a puzzled look and asked " what now? Why will you do that?"
He simply said " Arey that's my retirement plan, I shall work only till Ruhi's marriage then we'll be living in a beach house with booze, music and cricket matches all day!"
She inquired " and "how will that beach house function, with you not working and clearly you won't be changing your spending ways?, "
He said " Abey! Tumhe Jo license laake diya hain, uska poster thodi na taanga na hain, Tum toh daant saaf karti reh na, mein apna beach pe chill karonga,phir Tum shaam ko aana , hum dinners pe chale jayenge tumhara bhi change hojayega"
She screamed " mein buddhi hoke kaam Karu,aur aap Mazza se chill Karo, yeh kya baat hui and no we will stay in a hill station, Manali, Simla, massorie.
He enacted her voice and said Manali, Simla, massorie. Pagal ho Kya? And hillstation kyun? Vahan logo ke daant zyada kharab hotee hain kya? Vaise hi Tum kanjiwaram pehenti hoo upar se hill station mein sweater and shawl aur lapet logi, no thank you. We'll settle in Goa final kardiya meine. No discussions."
Ishita pouted " NO.. It's not final yet. Aur bhi Bahaut saari destinations hain, chennai bhi hain. Raman shouted " ek na rakh ke doonga mein, south india ka naam bhi Liya toh, biwi kya kam hain meri, Jo ab aur south ke darshan Karoon
Ishita said " Aapka Goa toh east mein hain na!


They continued with their fighting about their retirement destination, these two idiots failed to realise that they were talking about living together for their entire lives, the bliss they shared in each other's company had become way above than anyone else in their lives, they were united in the truest sense, they didn't need the confessions, they could hear each other's heart beat without them saying aloud. They were one!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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aaaw this brought the brightest smile on my face!!!😃

such a cute idea and wonderfully written dialogues ! as Rutu83 would say : kuch katti much meethi!


Loved it !👏
Edited by rajji-cutest - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very beautifully written
well done
keep writing
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome... Wish sumthing lyk dis happen in serial too... Luved it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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omg this ws so so typical YHM wale IshRa...tanya...this ws one of ur best stories..super loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aww such a sweet cute OS.. Love it. Was getting goosebumps reading Fast breaking scene. You know what Ishita might even touch his feet.
So looking forward to terrace pe breaking fast sequence in the episode.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome OS
Loved their fight in the last
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They continued with their fighting about their retirement destination, these two idiots failed to realise that they were talking about living together for their entire lives, the bliss they shared in each other's company had become way above than anyone else in their lives, they were united in the truest sense, they didn't need the confessions, they could hear each other's heart beat without them saying aloud. They were one!
This part of OS took my heart away.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awwieee... This one was so cutely written. I still have a idiot kind of smile plastered on my face.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aweee that was so sweet. Loved it

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