And she shot me through my soul- IshRa OS - Page 4

Originally posted by: Nikita99

You are an amazing writer. The way you explain their closeness it always increases my heart beat.

Keep writing and thanks for pm.

Originally posted by: beebutterfly

Was planning to read this in the morning but the intro pushed me to read right now.😳

So so wish to see something close to that in the show. You portrayed jealous possessive Raman exquisitely. Loved how you made him admit it tormented him to have her notice anyone else and that he was not strong enough to bear it. Beautiful! <3

Originally posted by: luvsagar

Uz..have I told you how beautifully captivating your writing is?????...AMAZING..SEND TO CREATIVE AND GET THEM TO ENACT IT ON SCREEN !

Originally posted by: rutu83

amazingly written
like your poems when you write these OS, you have this talent of writing few words yet capturing a world of emotions. beautiful 👏

thx for the pm 😊

Originally posted by: Autumn.

Your writing is mesmerising. So beautiful!

Originally posted by: mnr123

Wow brilliant piece f writing ⭐️👏 Take a bow dear m a fan f urs... 😊

Although m not a fan f d song but the line that uve taken is too gud ... She shot me through my soul shot me through my heart

It was gud to see bold side f Ishita 😆 N Raman completely possessed ... But I needed more of this ... I just had started n bam it ended it felt so less 😳 M so addicted to ur writings that I find ur More is Less 😆

Originally posted by: EkPaheli

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Jesus holy christ! Uz girl you are on a roll - not that I am complaining- LOL you make me feel less guilty for flooding the forum 😆 but this one is spectacular.

I love that you have explored this side of Raman' underneath it all I see a very insecure man in him you know, this bravado and all its all for show... the man who he was whenever we see his FB' that guy is nothing what we see in the present day scenario, and while I do feel people change but they basically just don't lose themselves entirely... they may be altered but loss of one' identity, the core essence is next to impossible in my opinion.

All his high handed behavior is just a clever technique to not let anyone else gain the upperhand but its at the end of the day a technique and not him and somehow that is what you have conveyed with this piece to me.

I don't know how much this comment made sense really 😆 but thats what I got from this😳

Originally posted by: CharmGal

Hi Uz,

Remember me? It's Mary. 😳 😊

This os was wonderfully written and I absolutely loved it!

This is something that Raman would have done if his beloved wife went to a bar since he is both possessive and protective of her. Raman is capable of having an uncontrollable rage bottled in a sea of angry ocean whenever any male touch or approach to his wife for instance, remember the incident when Pervmeet offer Ishita a lift and her husband bashed him blue and black, he only stopped since other people had to pull him away from Pervmeet. He, then, dragged his wife away and held her hand very tightly.

Originally posted by: Nikki_Titli

Uz...another amazing os from u..loved it

Originally posted by: always_a_TV_fan

The Mirror-Uz is back :) oh how I missed her!

Brilliant work hun... Everything we want Raman to realise and everything we want Ishita to do, is in your story. And i dont mean him beating up the other guy or Ishita gatecrashing their party!

The best part was the last para!

Keep em coming :)