Halchal Hui, Zara Shor Hua - An Ishra OS - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Raatri

..thnk u...actually im arty person...thoda bahut sketching karte hain...not original but copy...jo pasand aye...usko apne haat se phir se utaro...😆...my name is nisha

Wow, it is great work. Copy, paste bhi amazing hai... as I said, I cannot draw a straight line without making a mistake .. great work Nisha.
BTW, your username depicts your artistic nature well ... Nisha and Raatri .. beautiful 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: btalwar

Aani 🤗 .. OMG, this itself is a big compliment for me ... You already know that you have a fangirl in me when it comes to your writing so you interested in my work ... (Doing a tap dance) 😳😳 ...


Bhanu you really are being too sweet I swear ☺️ your work is really beautiful and of course I love the way you write 😃 so its a pleasure to read what you come up with for sure 🤗

To answer your question, No. These are the only two things I have ever written. I am a novice yaar. I always written some of my own thoughts, more like an online journal but nothing before on any public forum. But then, YHM fever caught me and here I am 😳.


Oh okay, I hope though now you dont stop 😳

I have always loved Bala's character. He is one sorted out guy, therefore, in my opinion, he is the best candidate to play cupid between these blissfully ignorant souls. In my opinion, Raman has high regards for this man, and anything which comes out of his mouth will carry some weightage. So, I happily asked him to do the "Aag me Ghee" vaala work.

😆 yep he is a darling and is someone Raman respects in a way not to mention I love how you mentioned the aag mein ghee bit yep that he did do and oh so subtly 😉

I initially debated whether Vandita should be included in the plan or not. Later on, I purposefully settled for both of them because in my opinion, they are one normal couple who happen to share every ups and downs together and Bala will surely share something as important as this with his wife, especially when it concerns her little sister.

They make a cute couple so I am glad you added her 😊
😳😳 .. Well this incident of Bala is actually a straight rip off from one of my personal experiences. My hubby was trying to make me jealous by dancing and fooling around with one of my very close and hot friends ... (apparently, it turned out to be a bet between them and my young sis 😡). Well, I was jealous 😳😳, though I tried my best to give a "I don't give a damn" attitude .Needless, to say, later on, he had to pay the price ... 😉😛😆 .. I just tweaked it to suit the occasion.
😆 something tells me your sis wasnt exactly spared too


Yes. Bala is someone who will not beat around the bush and yet never overstep his limits. So, I wanted this to be direct yet subtle realization. I purposefully avoided writing Raman's thoughts because something like this is sure to make him numb for a while and his thought process will be invaded slowly and steadily.
Hahaha ... I am not sure whether I will write the next part .. honestly, more so because I am not sure how to proceed. Being a novice, writing different genres is not my forte and realization will lead to awareness and attraction. I am not sure I will be able to portray it aptly .. but lets see ... with so many people asking for me to continue. I have decided with a may be ... 😳😳 ...
who knows ... will keep you posted it I decide to proceed ...

No pressure on the sequel just come up with whatever works best for you I find thats how it works for me inspiration and creativity have a mind of their own 😳
Again, thanks a lot for reviewing. It means a lot 😊.

No thanks between friends yaar 🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: btalwar

Parul 🤗 .. Tight vaala hugs to you girl ... This OS is there is all because of you 😳. As I said, I was out of ideas and then our ranting on the episode made me think and I had this idea in a second.

I know I didn't tell you before 😳 .. but only because I was not too sure myself about this idea ... rather, I just wrote the draft in my phone and edited in late in the night.
Spiritual Guru ... brilliantly apt term for Bala. He is indeed the savior for both these souls and I will love to see something the real series ... hahaha ... dvds ... 😆😆
I agree about them being at peace with their present state. It is but natural for anyone who is leading a troubled life to find even a bit of happiness to be comforting. And both of them have found this after such a long period. So, naturally, they are too afraid to disturb anything at all.
But, of course. we are here to do that from various mediums 😉😆. In my case, it has be Bala and therefore, I officially made him the cupid between these two ignorant souls.
I love the movie too. Madhuri and Konkona. Both brilliant actresses. Nice to know someone else also likes this movie (I have been made fun of watching its rerun on TV mane a times )
Thank you for liking my work dear. See you in your post.



Lol Bhanu ... I say Param is an even better cupid. And I absolutely love all the episodes where RKB has beaten him. Only scenes of Pervy I watch with glee & excitement 😆

Yaar Konkana Sen is my all time fav actress ... I loved Mr & Mrs Iyer. Watched it n number of times when I was in college & actually wrote a philosophical review on it about love and religion in my diary. The only movie I have done that with 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Woow!!!! It was lovely OS... Bala ko maanana padega... Amazing hai woh kitne sahi tareeke se usne Raman ke dimaag or dil ki ghanti bajayi... Bina ishra ke personal lyf mein jyada interfere kiye... & d one where he flirted wid ishu was actually cute one ... Totally loved it can I get link to oder stories of urs on ishra???? Actually I m new in dis forum...
Prati
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you so much Lata 😊.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks KReyAS 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Luvforever

Woow!!!! It was lovely OS... Bala ko maanana padega... Amazing hai woh kitne sahi tareeke se usne Raman ke dimaag or dil ki ghanti bajayi... Bina ishra ke personal lyf mein jyada interfere kiye... & d one where he flirted wid ishu was actually cute one ... Totally loved it can I get link to oder stories of urs on ishra???? Actually I m new in dis forum...

Prati



Thanks a lot dear. Glad you liked it. I know in the show it looks like Mihir is going to be the love guru between them but then in my version of Ishraland, I somehow found Bala to be more apt for this.

Welcome to our forum. I am just merely more than a month older but this one is surely addictive ... 😊

I have not done much work earlier. I have only written two other pieces of work.

The links for each of them are as follows:

1. Halachal hui zara shor hua: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4132384

2. Sirf Tumhare Liye: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4082938

Hope you like them as well 😊.


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Posted: 11 years ago
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plz update soon yaar...waiting😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aww so sweet OS... I want to know what happens next :) Do write ahead please. :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Well d way u wrote & described d whole scene... I jst loved it...
Thank u :) yeah mihir & mihika do try to bring dem closer bt bala too help dem at tyms like d " kaccha aam " incident & its so easy to thing him doing things I love him too lambu ;)
Yeah I agree totally addictive it is... We never I find tym I find myself here recently... :D

& I m definitely going to read d oder work of urs too... Thnx a lot for d link... :)

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