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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 3

In morning

ishita woke up and realized that she slept on couch only and suddenly remember whatever happened last night subbu his proposal to shagun and she started to cried and remember her fight with raman and remind all those words OMG what did I do ??? maine kya keh diya raman ko he is my best friend and WTH I said to him OH god I will never forgive myself for this mujhe usse maafi mangani padegi and dial his number its ringing but he was not picking up jarur mujhse gussa honga aur kyu na ho hona bhi chahiye maine itni badi baat kehdi us insane se jisne mujhe humesha saath diya aur maine uska hi dil tod diya usne mujhe kafi time warn bhi kiya tha subbu ke bare me lekin main hi stupid thi jo nahi dekh payi main college jakar usse maafi mangugi and she got ready to left towards college

Near college gate she remember yesterday night main subbu aur shagun ka samna kaise kar paugi mujh me itni himmat nahi hain aur wo wapas jati hain kash raman bhi saath hota wo meri himmat hain and she reminds that I am here for raman and I have ask forgiveness and for raman I have to face subbu I already lost my love but don't want to loose my best friend and she again turn towards college it was not easy for her its really hard to face broken dream at whom ur whole life depended and its unbearable to see ur love with some one else she doesn't know how will she face but she has to do only for raman

Voice : hey ishita

I : ishita was shocked to heard voice and she doesn't have courage to look at their after getting so much courage she turned towards him

subbu : hi ishita kaha bhag rahi ho

I : hi subbu main actually wo raman

SU : cutting OMG yeh miracle kaise hua ???

I : confused

SU : arre aaj ishita raman ke bina kya hua dono ke beech jagda hua hain kya ??

I : don't know what to say ignoring his words tumne raman ko kahi dekha kya

SU : nahi to kyu sab theek to hain na ishita tum pareshan lag rahi ho

I : trying to control her emotion haan sab theek hain main pareshaan nahi hoon bas thaki hui hoon

Voice : Hey subbu

SU : hi sweet heart sorry ishita I have to leave

I : bye

subbu and shagun hug each other and shagun kiss on his cheek and it hurt ishita so much and she just left that place as soon as possible

ishita ran towards washroom and after locking up just started to cried and those flashback was coming in front of her eyes subbu shagun hug and kiss and proposal I cant bear this raman I really need you after sometime she left towards her classroom and ask everyone about raman but no one saw him from morning ishita was getting worried about raman first he is not picking his phone and he is not in college and she was scared to loose raman kahi raman bhi mujhse dur to nahi chala jayega nahi main usse manakar rahungi chahe kuch bhi karna padega and she saw subbu and shagun towards class room and she didn't have courage to go there but right now its not time to get upset becoz of them but raman is more important and she checked class room but raman was not there she left college and went towards raman's home.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 4



Outside raman's home
ishita was getting courage to ring the bell and doing practice to say sorry to raman and prepare for everything whatever will come from raman and she will manao him by hook by crook she doenst want to loose friend like raman but at the end it will be his wish she will accept that becoz whatever she said that was really harsh and she knew raman is not like that it would have been really hurt him.
Finally after getting courage she rang the bell no answer and one more time and again no answer and 3rd time she rang the bell and she heard voice of opening door and close her eyes and said Iamsorryraman mainejokahawogussemekaha merawomatlabnahitha pleasemujhemaafkardo and she opened her one eyes to see the reaction of raman but her surprised or shock it was not raman but toshiji who was looking at her confusingly
I : aunty aap ??? mujhe laga raman hain
T : haan main yeh mera bhi ghar hain sirf raman ka nahi said grinningly
I : sorry aunty wo mera matlab wo nahi tha
T : arre tum to serious ho gayi main to majak kar rahi thi aao andar aao bahar kyun khadi ho
I : haan thank you aunty
T : to beta kya hua itni subah subah
I : wo actually aunty raman aaj college nahi aaya tha aur phone bhi nahi utha raha tha isi liye mujhe tension ho rahi thi
T : yeh ladka bhi na kitni baar kaha ke mobile ki ring jab bhi ghar pe ho tab silent pen a rakhe lekin nahi karni to apni marzi ki hain karni hain
I : looking here and there for raman wo aunty
T : beta kya logi koi coffee logi
I : nahi aunty wo main
T : kya ???
I : wo main raman ko milne aayi thi wo mujhe laga ke wo mujhse naraj hain isi liye mera phone nahi utha raha kyunki maine kal usko bahut bura bhala kaha said embarrassedly
T : janti hoon
I : sorry aunty maine wo job hi kaha
T : cutting her tumne job hi kaha tum wo kehna nahi chahti thi bas gusse me nikal gaya aur main tumse naraj nahi hoon aur main samaj sakti hoon raman ne mujhe sab bata diya hain
I : trying to stop her tear aunty
T : hugging shhh nahi mera baccha aise nahi rote shhh chup hoja dekho beta main samaj sakti hoon tumpe kya beet rahi hain lekin beta isse zindagi nahi rukti tum yeh kyun dekhti ho ke tumhe tumhara pyar nahi mila yeh dekho ke tumhara pyar khush hain jaha bhi wo yeh aasan nahi lekin namumkin bhi nahin aur tum akeli nahi hoon tumhare sath hum hain, ishita kayi baar hum zindagi me us cheese ko dekhkar rote hain jo hamare paas nahi hain aur nahi kabhi hamari thi aur un logo ko ignore karte hain jo hamare saath hain aur jab humein us baat ki ehsaas hota hain tab tak der ho jati hain ishita tumhare liye asan nahi hain is daur se bahar aana lekin beta tum kab tak aise hi rahogi dekho kaisi ho gayi ho ishita main yeh nahi kehti aaj hi move on karo lekin aaj se shuruaat to karo samaj gayi beta main kya kehna chah rahi hoon ??
I : haan aunty sayad aap theek keh rahi hain thanks aunty
T : haye re mera bacha bada samajdar hain
I : nahi aunty me samajdar nahi hoon agar samjdar hoti to raman ke saath jagda nahi karti wo bhi to wohi batane ki koshish kar raha tha jo aap keh rahi ho
T : nahi aisa nahi hain beta us waqt tum samjane ki halat main nahi thi samjane ka bhi ek waqt hota hain raman galat nahi tha lekin uska samjane ka waqt galat tha lekin jo ho gaya wo bhul jao aura age badho
I : aap theek keh raho ho aunty aapse baat kar ke bahut acha lag raha dil ko sukun mila kash akl main seedha aapse milne aati to main raman se wo baatein nahi kehti aunty raman kaha hain mujhe usse mafi mangani hain
T : wo so raha hain
I : KYA ??? abhi tak so raha hain kyun ???
T : wo sahib kal bheegkar aaye the ghar to bukhar ho gaya hain aur medicine ki heavy dose ki wajah se so raha hain warna tumhe lagta hain wo ab tak sota
I : aunty main raman ko dekh kar aati hoon
T : theek hain beta main tab tak tum dono ke liye nashta banati hoon main janti hoon tumne kuch bhi nahi khaya hain kal raat se hain na ??
I : haan said hesitantly
T : theek hain jao tum usko milkar aao
ishita left towards raman room and toshiji towards kitchen



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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
Nice story...
but it would b great if u please put fullstops at d end of d sentence.Lack of punctuation is making d reading a bit difficult.otherwise all's fine 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice story..
waiting for next part..👏
please pm me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: debomaaneet

Nice story...
but it would b great if u please put fullstops at d end of d sentence.Lack of punctuation is making d reading a bit difficult.otherwise all's fine 😊

Thanks got pointing out I will try to improvise that 😊
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Originally posted by: VENBA

Nice story..

waiting for next part..👏
please pm me...

Thanks dear
U will pm u whenever I will update next part 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...EhSaas...


Thanks got pointing out I will try to improvise that😊


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Will b waiting for d next update 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 5

In raman room

Ishita entered raman's room and raman was still sleeping due to medicine effect. Ishita sat beside raman and spread her hand in his hair,

I (to herself) : agar abhi jaga hota to bolta ishita balo ko mat choona mimicking him pata nahi baalo me kya khazana hain ya hero se bane hue hain ke kisi ko haath lagane nahi deta. mujhe to chhodo apni maa ko bhi nahi haath nahi lagane deta sadu kahi ka. lekin kitna pyara lagta hain sote hue bilkul bacche jaisa iska dil bhi to waisa hain bacche jaise najuk aur saaf aur maine isi dil ko dukhaya hain bahut buri tarah. hey bhagwan please mujhe itni himmat dena ke main iska samana kar paau jab yeh uthe aur mafi maang paau aur wo mujhe maaf bhi karde kyunki ab main apne dost ko khone nahi dena chahati wo jo bhi saja dega main use bhugatane ke liye ready hoon.

raman was opening his eyes slowly slowly and at the other hand ishita was getting scared second by second and he stretched his hands and look here and there and he saw ishita near him and said good morning to her smilingly and raman was in his dream land and looking towards her smilingly and dreamingly and murmured to himself haye re kitna pyara sapna hain kash ke ek din sach ho jaye ishita was confused by his behavior she was expecting outburst for last night and watching her in his room

I : (scared) raman

R : (dreamily) hmmm

Ishita was scare of raman not becoz of his anger but his weird behavior

I : Raman utho

Raman was still looking at her dreamily and ishita was feeling uncomfortable and looking here and there

I : raman uthona

Raman took her hand in his and said

R : ishita

I : haan

R : u know

I : kya ???

R : ishita u r most beautiful girl

I : thanks

M : aur tum janti ho

I : kya ???

R : tum bahut achi ho

I : haan lekin tum se kam

R : hmmm ishita tum janti ho ke I

I : haan

R : ishita I I l.

T : yeh rahi tumhari garma garam coffee by saying this toshiji entered in his room and hearing her voice raman got up hastily and looking towards toshiji and Ishita confusingly and he realized that ishita is not in his dream but in reality and he thank his star that he didn't said about his feelings to ishita

R : ishita tum yaha

I : haan

R : mere kamre me

I : haan

R : ishita tum yaha mere kamre me wo bhi itni subah subah

I : wo raman main tumse

R : oh shit ishita mujhe tumhe lene aana tha college ke liye aur tum hi aa gayi tum thodi der ruko main fatafat ready ho jata hoon

I : par raman

R : par war kuch nahi ishita tum coffee peelo main fatafat ready hota hoon

T : are raman

R : maa dekho hum already late ho chuke hain

I : raman

R : kya hain ishita

toshiji and ishita were trying to say something to him but he was not listening after irritating both shouted

I & T : RAMAN

Raman was cared after hearing their voice

R : kya hua ??? tum dono chilaayi kyun ??? itna jor se koi chillata hain

his face was scare and confuse and looking at his face ishita and toshiji burst out in laughter

R : tum dono has kyun rahe ho

T : laughingly raman but she couldn't speak any thing

R : kya ???

I : in same condition but control her laugh and said raman tumhara chehra dekho kaisa hain

R : kyun kya hua mere chahere ko (look at mirror)

I : tum kitne dare hue ho

R : (stammering) main main nahi darta kisi se

T : accha bacchu tumhe kisise darr nahi lagta

R : haan to aap dono jis tarah se chillaye the koi bhi darr jayega

I : haan to hum log kya karte tum hamari baat hi nahi sun rahe the

R : haan to ek to college ke late ho gaya hain aur tum dono aur late kar rahe ho

T : raman tumne time dekha

R : nahi

T : to dekh lo

Raman look towards watch and shouted WHAT ???

I : keeping her finger in her ear by god raman aise koi chillata hain

R : itni der ho gayi mujhe uthaya kyun nahi maa ???

T : kyunki tumne jo medicine khayi thi uska asar tha aur tum bahut gehri neend me the bacchu tum bhul gye kya tumhe bukhar tha

R : phir bhi maa aapko uthana chahiye than a meri aaj ki class miss ho gayi

T : to kya hua ??? arre tum insaan ho machine nahi aur kaunsa bada toofan aa jayega agar tumne college nahi attend ki to ek din

R : maa tum janti ho na kuch bhi ho jaye me college kabhi bhi miss nahi karta

I : tum aunty ko kyun suna rahe ho unhone jo kya wo sahi kiya aur tum over react kyun kar rahe ho ???

R : main over react kar raha hoon ishita mene aaj college miss kiya hain mere lecture miss ho gaya

I : theek hain na raman ek din chalta hain

R : ishita tumne college attend kiya tha

I : haan lekin lecture nahi kiya

R : kyun ???

I : tumko dhundh rahi thi

R : by god ishita tum bhi na at least lecture attend karti to notes to milte mujhe

I : to tum kisi aur se le lena na usme kya hain

R : kya main aur kisi aur se notes lunga

I : haan to kya hua ??

R : raman Bhalla se log notes mangate hain naki wo logo se

Toshiji keep her hand on her head and ishita was looking at him shocking

I : kya ???

R : kya kya laga rakha hain ??? maine raman bhalla hoon jiske notes student mangate hain aur tum chahte ho ke main unse notes mangu meri izzat ka kya ??

I : kya inzzat lol raman notes mangane se tumhari izzat nahi loot jayegi

R : shut up ishita rehne do main khud ho notes bana lunga

I : na koi jarurat nahi notes bananeki aaj ke din aaram kar lena kal jo karna wo karna jitni notes banana hain wo bana lena

T : haan ishita theek keh rahi hai aur baccho mujhe market jana hain kuch saman lana hain to main aati hoon aur ishita aaj ka lunch hamare saath fix hain to kahi mat jana

I : theek hain aunty

T : ok bye aur raman tum ready ho jao aur medicine le lena ishita uski jimedari tumhari

I : ji aunty aap fikar na kare iska khayal main rakh lungi

T : aur haan tum log jagda mat karna ache bacho ki tarah behave karna

R : suna ishita no jagda

I : haw tumhara matalab yeh ke main jagda karti hoon sabse bade jagdalu to tum ho

R : main main jagdalu nahi tum ho humesh jagda tumhi start karti ho abhi bhi tumne hi jagda start kiya hain

I : jagda maine start kiya ya tumne ???

R : tumne

I : maine nahi tumne

R : tumne

T : CHUP dono ke dono chup and both are quite maine kaha than a koi jagda nahi karega matlab koi nahi said fake angrily samje

R & I : ji

T : good and bye

After Toshiji left

I : by god aunty ko gussa bhi aata hain pehli baar dekha

R : yeh maa ka fake anger tha asli gussa abhi tak dekha nahi hain

I : aunty ko itna gussa bhi aata hain

R : haan to mera gussa maa pe hi gaya hain

I : main nahi manti

R : mat mano

I : by god agar yeh sach hain to bachke rehna padega

R : ghabrao mat ma aka gussa jyada hain lekin wo bahut kam time gussa karti hain waise ishita tumne lecture kyun attend nahi kiya

I : wo maine kaha na ke main tumhe dhundh rahi thi

R : kyun ??? ek phone kar leti

I : wo main tumse kal ki baat ke liye mafi mangana chahti thi raman maine jo kaha wo mera matlab nahi tha I swear raman mere dil me aisa kuch nahi hain tumhare bare me balki main tumhari bahut respect karti hoon aur tumse bahut pyar karti hoon kyunki tum mere bahut hi ache aur khas dost ho aur maine tumhe bahut phone kiya tum utha hi nahi rahe the to mujhe laga tum bahut naraz aur gussa ho to maine socha yaha aakar hi mafi manglu kyunki maien apna pyar tokho diya hain lekin apna sabse acha dost nahi khona chahti (she said cryingly)

R : shhh ishita chup bilkul chup

I :raman please mujhe maaf kardo tum jo chahe wo saja dena lekin mujhse dosti mat todna aur mujhse dur mat jana main tootjaugi

Raman just hug her and let her cry, after sometime when her sobbing was less

R : baitho yaha are u ok ???

I : nahi jab tak mujhe maaf nahi karoge tab tak main theek nahi hougi

R : maine tumhe maaf nahi kiya ???

I : kyun ?? dekho raman main janti hoon ke maine jo kiya wo galat tha lekin please tum mujhe jo saja dena chaho wo de sakte ho lekin please mujhse dosti mat todo please raman I beg of you

R : shhh chup bilkul chup kitna bolti ho tum mri puri baat to sunlo tumhari train hain jo chalu hui wo rukne ka naam hi nahi le rahi aura b main jo bolunga tum chupchap sunogi kuch bhi nahi bolungi samji

Ishita just nodded her head

R : good girl to suno maine tumhe maaf nahi kiya kyunki maaf usko kiya jata hain jo insaan naraj hota hain aur jab main tumse naraj hu hi nahi to maaf karne ki baat hi nahi aati aur maafi tumhe nahi mujhe mangani

I : cutting raman par raman

R : shhh maine kaha na kuch bhi nahi bologi haan to main kaha tha ha na mujhe tumse maafi nahi manganic chahiye balki mujhe magani chahiye kyunki maine tumhe kal akela chhod diya jab tumhe meri sabse jyada jarurat thi ishita I am really sorry main yeh nahi kahuga ki mujhe bilkul bhi bura nahi laga juth nahi bolunga mujhe bahut hurt hua tha ke meri sabse acchi dost mere bare me aisa sochati hain isiliye maine waha se jaldi chala aaya lekin baad me mujhe ehsaas hua ke maine galat kiya kyunki tum mere bare me wo nahi sochti lekin us waqt tumhe tumhara dard bahar nikalana aur wo tumhara mujh par gussa nahi lekin mujh par bharosa tha haan tumne mujh par bharosa kiya aur wo gussa mujhpe kiya

I : raman tum mujhse sach me naraj nahi ho na kahi tum mera dil rakhne ke liye to anhi keh rahe ho

R : hey bhagwan maine itna kuch bola aur fir bhi tum wohi pe atki ho mian tumse naraj nahi hoon tum batao ke tumne mujhe maaf kiya ki nahi

I : raman tumhe maafi magane ki jarurat nahi hain tum bahut acche ho aur tumhari koi galti nahi I m sorry

R : hmmm ek idea hain hum ek dusare ko maaf kar dete hain theek hain

I : lekin raman

R : lekin wekin kuch nahi deal or no deal???

I : ok deal

R : aur yeh topic yehi pe khatam karte hain

I : raman I promise ke main kabhi bhi is tarah se behave nahi karungi

R : mujhe aisa koi promise nahi chahiye lekin ek promise chahiye ke we will be best friend for forever

I : promise

And both smile and like this all 3 spended their whole day happily and raman ishita were really happy becoz they were thinking that everything was over in their relation but it was come out as more strong and looking them happy she was most happy, though plan was for lunch but it stretched till dinner and it was too late raman drop ishita at homeand return back.

At raman home

R : thanks mom

T : for what ???

R : maa main samaj gaya hoon ke aap us din kya bolna chahti thi aap janti thin a ke main ishita se pyar karta hoon

T : haan main janti thi

R : par kaise ???

T : kyunki main maa hoon said dramatically

R : mom I love you and you are my strength u are not my life but becoz of you I am having life thanks for being their with me always either I said or not to you

T : awww mera beta senti ho gaya aur mujhe bhi senti kar diya I love you too beta and becoz of you I m alive becoz after ur dad's death its only you who is the reason of my life

Raman just hugged her

T : chal ab bahut late ho gaya emotion talk chalo ab so jao kal college hain agar miss hui to phir se bologe mera lecture miss ho gaya meri notes

Raman just smile at her and kiss on his cheek and good night mom and I love you

T : pagal good night

R : thanks mom for saving me in morning warna aaj to main jata kaam se

T : pehle maine socha tha ke tumhe apne dil ki baat bolne du aise nahi waise to bloega lekin who waqt sahi nahi tha usi wajah se maine tumhe toka warna aaj tumhare relation pe affect karta jo main nahi chahti thi

R : haan wo to hain mujhe to laga tha kal raat ke baad pata nahi kitna waqt lagta hamare relation ko lekin agar aaj me bol deta to sayad hamara relation hi nahi rehta

T : haan aur is waqt ishita us condtion me nahi hain ki who is baat ko samaj jaye

R : hope so wo is phase se jaldi bahar aa jaye

T : wo to aayegi hum hain na bas humein use force nahi karna chahiye

R : hmmm aapp theek keh rahi ho

T : chalo ab seriously so jao its too late

R : good night

T : raman mujhe acha lagega agar tum mujhse apne dil ki baat share karoge

R : I promise mom and same goes to you

T : yes boss

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Hi Jaya...Thanks for pm ...
i will revert u back as soon as i finish reading all 5 ch...
u made me land in YHM forum...u know where i actually belong to apart from BDSAH...
still thanks a lot..
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Originally posted by: srilotus

Hi Jaya...Thanks for pm ...

i will revert u back as soon as i finish reading all 5 ch...
u made me land in YHM forum...u know where i actually belong to apart from BDSAH...
still thanks a lot..
love to have a buddy like u 🤗

U r Wel come dear 🤗

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