FF : Second Chance of Life - Epilogue - Page 90 - Page 56

Originally posted by: RomComFan

Beautiful story, wonderful ending! 😃

Thanks so much for sharing...👍🏼

Originally posted by: shavi2311

so sad bcoz it ended...

bt good thngs cme to an end...

i loved it cmptly...

such a beautiful stry...

mix of all emotions nd all stages of life...

its is perfct nd prfct ending...

Originally posted by: VENBA

It was such an awesome update...👏👏

Everything was perfect..

But why did you end the story...Feeling very sad..😭😭😭

I never expected it..

Perfect ending..

The family supporting Ruhi and Ishita providing the evidences was superb..

Finally Raman realising the dream was fabulous...

It was only two days before i was reading the whole story from the beginning..

And i never thought i will be reading the last part today..

It was such an awesome story and will remain my favourite Ishra story forever.. You are such an amazing and brilliant writer..👍🏼👍🏼

I wish you to come back soon with another story of our Ishra...😊😊

Take care..Come soon...😊😊

Originally posted by: Ishrafanno1

Nice really nice. Take a bow! It's so refreshing to read this when the real show is crappy at this time. As much as I love the actors. They are doing an excellent jo. It's the creatives who have messed the show up. Why am I writing all this?


You are the saving grace my friend. I enjoy reading this story. Looking forward to your other writings.

Originally posted by: ankita_sidana

Superb...beautiful one nithya

just loved itt...wat an update

ishita can do anything for her family...she is always there for everyone..for her family

loved ishita adi and ishita ruhi convo

aww sarika...so nervous and romi blushing...the imagination of scene made me blush actually

and the night...raman ko to bas ishita chahiye

aww...she still supports him and he also apologized...such a sweet jodi

and then shagun and her games end finally

raman back to police...his dream

beautiful update it was

i loved this story yrrr

enjoyed the moments you gave to the fullest

never wanted it to end

but if you have already made the last part...give an epilogue pls

thoda sa romance or family moments or ho jayenge

and yess...that ishita preg actually cracked me up...india ki population ka kya hogaa...lol

Originally posted by: felciya

Happy ending.😃 Waiting for your next story.

Originally posted by: sweet_menu

it was really awesome... i loved it...so beautifully written... wowww...great Job...

Thank you Sooo much guys for encouraging me to write this story. Iam so elated that I could write 30 parts of a story and glad that many liked it also. Please consider that as a sincere thank u note to each one f you . I long for reading your comments and that did motivate me to write this story further. Thanks a lot. Will for sure come up with an epilogue for this story

Originally posted by: iloveyhm

Thank u so much for your comments. Sorry for the delay in response I really didnt find any aspect of extending this story. However will try an epilouge

Iam so happy that I could write something which would be favorite. And really felt glad that you read it again also. it means a lot to me . thank u sooo much

I will come back with new story soon. really very busy at work and with my kid so will take time. But I assure you that will come up with a new story soon

Hi all, Iam back with an Epilogue based on the request from most of you. I just hope I have made it ood. Tried to make it little funny and also incorporate the teenage growth and Adhi's personality change aspect. I hope I have not disappointed with this update.

Epilogue:

5 Months Later - Commioner office Delhi

Attender: Hello Madam, app ider, sir se kuch kam tha kya( You are here, did you have any work with sir)

I: Hai sahab hai kya (Yes, is sir there)

Attender: In his cabin.

She goes to his cabin and knocks.

R: arre yeh kya hai, bola tha na mujje adhe gante keliye distrub mat karo. (Whats is this I told you not to distrub me for half an hour)

She still barges in

I: Are you busy for me also

R: Doesn't even look up and examining something in the file. Arre Ishu what are you doing her. Iam really busy yaar. Let stalk when I come home

I: Home, do you even remember that you have a home. Its 3 days since kids saw you. They are complaining Raman

R: Janshi ki Rani please, don't start fighting now. I will come home tonight.Early

She comes and hugs him from back encircling her hands arround his neck

I: Ok will not fight, but shall we romanace. Its three days my dear husband.

Raman closes the file and stands up, removes her hold on his neck

R: JSKR, there are CCTV cameras in my room. Do you want others to see us romancing?

I: Kaise nukari hai yeh, ghar nehi athe ho. Mai kud tumse milne auvo toh chainse appko kiss tak nehi de sakthi. (What job is this? You don't come home. Even if I come to meet you, I can not even kiss you peacefully). Do you remember your cabin romance of ours earlier? How you used to love it and I used to long for it.

R: I will come home tonight, will be all yours. Tab koob pyar karna. Ab javo na.( That time love me a lot. Now leave)

I: Come home tonight. I will takecare of you. You don't even remember that it's our twins birthday in a week. Preparation me kuch nehi. And you are driving me off. Come home tonight apki kyar nehi.

Saying that she leaves. Raman is calling her out and she is not listening.

Ishitha self talk, tommorow is my birthday and he didn't even remember. What has happened to Raman. He didn't even notice my saree. I wore his favorite colour and his favorite saree. What is so much about work that he is forgetting the family itself? She is scolding and driving. She is being stopped by goons and kidnapped by blindfolding and tieing her hands. She is continously yelling

I: Iam wife of the comissioner, if he gets to know he will not leave you.

She is taken through a very long drive and the car stops. She is being dragged inside the house by two people. When she is taken into the house and pushed on to a bed and a person speaks

Unknown person: what did u say, you are comissioner's wife. Now wait and watch what I do to you and I will send it to your husband. He is be delighted to see a sexy video of his wife

Ishitha feels she is aware of this voice and had heard it somewhere. She is panicing hearing what the man said. The man progress further and touches Ishitha shoulder.

I: Oh Mr do whatever you want. Iam all yours.

Unknown person: Hey mad women whats wrong with you. It will be disgrace for your husband

I: My husaband doesn't have time for me. Iam also a women, I also have needs

Unknown person: So just because your husabd didn't give ou time for past three days will you cheat on him.

I: How do you know that my husband didn't not give me time for past 3 days only?

Unknown person: hmmm. That I

I: Mr Ravan Kumar, even after so many years do you think I will not know you by your one touch.

R: Hey JSKR, how did you know its me

I: I told you already. I know the touch of my Ravan kumar. Please now remove my hands and open the blind fold. Its paining.

R: You decided to trouble me by wearing a sexy saree and that to office. Now I will torture you. I will ensure that you long with desire to touch me but you cannot. But I will play arroung. I will just open your eyes and not hands. Do you know why am I opening your eyes so that you can see me hot and tempting but cannot touch me. Saying that he removes her blindfold.

I: Raman what is this.Please Haat Kolo na.

R: No JSKR not today.

Saying that he removes his shirt. He stands in front of her with a teasing smile.He starts kissing her starting from her head. He is way too slow and enticing her to the core. Slowly he moves to her neck and chest. She is unable to bear the sweet torture he is giving her; She wants to hold him as she is going weak and falling. But her hands tied and he is teasing her further by raining kisses on her waist. She is unable to bear the pleasure he is giving her. He slides her saree pallu and grazes his lips over her blouse. She falls on the bed with complete submission unable to do anything. She is morning. Raman is enjoying her state. He further advances to fiddle with her blouse. They hear a knock and Adhi shouting

A: Papa Papa , open the door

R: Yeh Adhi ko bhi abhi ana thah

I: Adhi who bhi yeha hai.

R: Madam do you realize, you are in our farm house. He is here to check the birthday party preparations and arragements. He opens her hand finally, sarre tik karlo. He also wears his shirt

I: App bhi na, you didn't tell me that Adhi is here. Setting her saree up.

R: After seeing you in this avtar, how will I remember why did I come here.

I: Chi Raman, go open the door

Adhi comes in and gives a teasing smile to both his parents.

A: So papa shall I go, I guess you are still not accomplished with your task. I hope iam not distrubing you

R: abbe , distrub karke kya puch raha hai( What are you asking after distrubing)

A: papa I know you are busy romancing, but the birthday that we are planing is not only my brother and sister but also your kids. So I think it's your responsibility also. Don't keep romancing always do some work also at times.

R: what do I do, your mom is so sexy I am not able to keep my hands off her

Ishitha is feeling shy listening to the father and teenaged son's conversation

A: Papa , if I cannot control sexy girls do you know what will happen. You will have complaint about your son daily. Girls these days are too sexy, amma needs to learn a lot and you are calling amma sexy.

I: Adhi yeh kya badtamise hai. What are you talking?

R: Ishu why are you scolding him, he is Raman Bhalla's son. Beta lagee raho. 10 select karna, pacanh ke sat date karna, 3 ko propose karna and finalize one and get married.( Beta go on, select 10, date 5 , propose 3 and finalize one and get married)

I: Raman what are you teaching him. He is becoming notorious these days. He was smoking the other day to challenge his friends.

R: Yes he told me, my son tells me everything. It's just a challenge Ishitha. There is a saying learn even to steal and then forget. He needs to know everything.

I: Kuch bhi

R: Kya Kuch Bhi, lets go and look at the arragements

They leave togather and meet Ruhi and twins. They all had come with Mihir. They discuss with the event managers about the function, caterers and feel satisfied about the whole planning.

R: Adhi you go home with Mihir. I will come with amma tommorow morning.

A: What appa, romantic night out with your wife

R: Abbe jab their shadhi hogi terreliye bhi arange kardunga. Abhi keliye humme akela chod na. (When you get married I will arraoge for one for you as well. Now leave us alone)

Ishitha was feeling shy and turning red due to embarassment. But she didn't realize that he was planning for her birthday. After Ishitha leaves

A: papa not fair you will celebrate amma's birthday alone

R: Pehale meri Biwi hai, bad me tu8mhare amma. So please celebrate with her tommorow

A: No ways she is my mom forst and then only your wife

R: Ok let's go to her and ask

They both goto Ishitha who is in the kitchen checking what can be made for dinner.

A: Amma tell me you are my mom first and then only appa's wife or it's the other way arround

R : Bolo Ishitha

Ishitha was giving a helpless look. She turned to Raman and tells him

I: Raman please don't mistake me, I will tell you the truth

Raman's face falls as he assumes she is going to say Adhi first, but to his surprise

I: Adhi and Raman, can we differentriate between which eyes of the two is importanat. Both are equally important. Similarly all of you are equal for me.

Adhi and Raman feel delighted that she holds a similar position for both f them. Adhi leaves with his siblings and Mihir. Raman doesn't even wait for dinner, carries her to the bedroom and starts with his antics. Ishitha trying to shy away and he making her give in to the pleasure he is giving.

They make love passionately. He is not at all letting her go for a min and continously making love or fiddling with her personal parts.

I: Raman it's aching, nowerdays your hold has become so hard. Don't treat me like how you treat criminals. Don't hold me so hard

R: JSKR they don't call it hard, they call this passion. Which I have for you.

I: Raman, ab chod bhi do. Yeh accha hai, hafta ya mahena ber kam me dube raho aur ek din Biwi ki jan lelo (Leave me, this is good you get drowned in work for whole week or month and one night you take your wife's life)

R: Jan le raha hun kya. Nehi chodunga. Abb pay back time hai.( Am I taking your life, will not leave you. This is pay back time)

I: Please Raman, bhut tak gaye hun. Please we are getting old abhi raat bhar yeh sab nehi hota( Please Iam tried, we are getting old we cannot do it for the whole night like earlier)

R: Budiya tum ho gaye hogi, mai abhi bhi javan hi hun.( You have become a granny not me. Iam still young)

I: Tik hai javo abhi, budhiya ke pass kui aarahe ho.( Go now, why do you come to this granny)

R: JSKR gussa mat ho na.

While he is taking the clock strikes 12 and popers burst and fall on Ishitha. There is happy birthday florecent light glowing. Ishitha is surprised as she didn't expect Raman to remember her birthday

He kisses her forehead and tells her happy birthday Ishu. She happy and pecks his cheeks. They smile togather and he says he wanted to celebrate with her alone and and told Adhi also to help me on the preparation. They have some lovely talk for sometime and sleep into a deep slumber.

The next day the whole iyer and bhalla family celebrate Ishitha's birthday. A week later they celebrate the twins 2^nd birthday. They were a true happy family supporting eachother and cheerished to be part of eachother's life. The whole family posed for a nice photo shoot. M- Mi with their kid, Ro - Sarika with her full term pregnency. Mr and Mrs Bhalla's loving eyelocks. Si - Param's lovely family with Ananya. Mr and Mrs Iyer, Ishitha's brother family. And last but not the least the family of six with lots and lots of love for each one. The whole family took a snap that was to be cherrsihed as treasure.

How was it? Please let me know your comments can be positive or negative. Thank for all the encouragement I got from this forum all of you..