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Posted: 11 years ago
it was superb romantic.. seriously i lov it.. 👍🏼
plz post nxt updat asap.. 😊
waitng 4 d confession.. 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
cant wait for the confession. beautifil touchy touchy update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
lol raman's plan backfired. touchy touchy karke ishita se confess karvana tha and ended up revealing his feelings 😆
aww raman's going to be upset without ishita around but yay for the confession
hope you update soon

thanks for the pm 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
wowww !! i loved the touch touchy update! lol
naughty Raman... ahahha!

do continue soonn! cant wait for the confession!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very beautiful update. Missing reading your story so read all in one go. Please continue.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank you all for your comments. Updated the next part below
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Posted: 11 years ago

Hi all, iam back with another part. Please let me know your feedback to continue this story or not. Excuse any grammatical errors / spelling mistakes. Apparently wanted to have the confession as part of the last part only but couldn't accommodate it. This would be a short part

Part 15: The confession

She wipes the tears off her eyes and heads happily to geos to kitchen and resumes her activity. Raman comes dressed up for breakfast. Ishitha is very bright and happy. Raman notices that. Ishitha is happy and hands over his tea with a pleasant smile. Raman was little surprised by sudden change in her behavior. She had made his favorite aloo paratha for breakfast. She brought the same and placed it on the table lovingly. As she leaves to go to the kitchen, Raman holds her wrist. He makes her sit next to him and have breakfast with him. Ishitha gives him a shy smile and says she is fasting today but will stay till he finishes. Raman asks her enquiringly with eyes asking why she is fasting. She smiles and shakes his head saying just like that. Raman is little surprised about her unusal behavior. She used run away from him but today he wanted to play with her feelings calling her close to him. Here she was all blushing and willingly sitting with him.

Post the breakfast Mihir comes and both Raman & Mihir are leaving to checkout marriage venue for Mihika and Mihir. Raman asks Ishitha also to join and Ishitha denies saying she will have to go out for some work.

When Raman and Mihir are back in the afternoon, they find the house locked. However Ishitha has prepared lunch. This was irritating Raman to death. Here he wanted to somehow make her confess and have some intimate moments before the kids are back. But here she was missing without even informing him. He had lunch with Mihir and they spent some time watching match. It was evening Mihir left with Mihika for a date. Raman tried reaching Ishitha her phone was switched off. He was cursing her to death. It was 6 Pm now; still there was no trace of Ishitha to return. Raman was growing worried. She generally informs if she is late and never in these 11 months of marriage had she been indifferent like this. Raman decides to go and find her out.

Raman is searching for her all over. First he goes to her college and then to library, he searches all the shopping malls, He searches in her friend's house. She is not to found anywhere. Raman is in tears, the fear of losing her is evident in his eyes. He is very restless and shaken. With a heavy heart he is coming back home. He had been calling her continuously, but her phone had been switched off. He had been searching her for 3 hrs all over the city. Earlier also he had lost his love but still he could revive. But today his heart was literally aching with the mere thought of losing her. She was an angel in his life who had brought all that happiness he had ever yarned for. She was his true soul mate and lately he had realized that. He came home back and the lock in the door step made his heart beat skip. He was assuming she must have been back and will give her his peace of mind for the mistake she had done. But when he found the house locked the weird thoughts started coming across in his mind. He simply sat it the chair of the living room.

Ishitha was very happy in the morning she really wanted to thank god for giving her most valued treasure of life "Love". The only compliant that she had to god for years was the lack of love in her life. She always felt sad when she thought why god didn't bless her with love in her life. Here after years of love less life she had got the love of her dearest Raman. He wanted to thank her god enough and seek the blessing for the god to maintain the peace of her current life. She wanted to give all the happiness of her life. She had fasted for Lord Murugan and went to the Malai Mindir to worship. She had a detailed worship plan and she tried calling Raman to inform while leaving. His cell was not reachable. She missed to charge her phone and the battery was dead. She was happily coming back. She reached home at around 9.30 PM.

Raman was getting restless as the time was passing. He was about to leave to lodge complain in the police station when he heard the door open. It was her. She was divinely dressed in kanchepuram Saree. Raman in fit of emotion went and hugged her tight. She could see a huge greif on his face and an unusual fear. She also observed a lone tear in his eyes.

I: Kya hua Raman, Chodiye mujje. Mere saree kich rahi hai( What happened Raman. Leave me, my Saree is getting struck)

R: Bewakoof tumhe tumhare Kachepuram Saree ki padi hai. Yeha meri toh fati padi hai. Kha gass charne gaye thi. Phone jab uttana nehi hotaha hai toh rakthe kui ho. Pagal aurath. Pichle 3 ganto see puri Dellli me tumhe dood raha hun, tum toh kisi magalam hall ki party me jakar aa rahi ho. Bol kar nehi ja sathithi. Agar tumhe kuch ho jatha toh amma, appa ko mai kya javab deta. Bacho ko kya safai detha, mera kya hotha sochha tumne. Kuch bi karlethi ho, jashi ki rani kahi ki. (Stupid, here iam completely in soup and you are bothered about your Saree. Where did you go to graze? When you don't have to lift my phones why do need a phone in first place. For past 3 hrs I have been searching you in whole of Delhi and you have gone for some stupid Tamilian function. Couldn't you inform me and go. If something happened to you what will I tell appa and amma. How will I convince the kids? What about me? Always you do whatever you want.)

He spoke all those things without letting a breath. He was stilling hugging her. His heart was beating hard. She hugged him back to comfort him and after he was clam and his heart beat became normal she tried to part from him. He was adamant and not letting her go. He was behaving as though a small child has got back his candy after fighting with his siblings.

I: raman, phale mujje chodiye. Apko phone kiya tha mane. Lag nehi raha tha. Mai Mandir gaye thi. Abb toh codiye na.( Raman leave me first. I tried calling you, but was not reachable. I went to Malai Mandir . Leave me at least now)

R: Nehi chodunga. Tumhe kya lagtha hai, tum nehi rahogi toh mereko kai farak nehi padega. Pagal (I will not leave you. What do you think it doesn't matter if you are not there? Mad lady)

I: Janthe hu Raman( I know raman)

R: Kya janthe ho, kuch nehi janthe. Pyar kartha hau tumse. Yes damn it I love this lovable idiotic JSKR. Tumhe patha hai, meri toh saas hi ruk gaye. (What do you know? You don't know anything. Do you know I stopped breathing?)

I: Janthe hu, issiliye mandir gaye thi bhagvan ko thank you kehne. (I know, that's why I went to the temple to say thank you to god.)

Raman pulls her out of the hug and looks at her with astonishment. She lowers her gaze not being able to face his intense gaze.

I: Subha mene apka pura sapna sunliya thah. Sapno me apne kaha ki app mujjse pyar karthe hai. Mai bahut kush hogaye, isiliye mai mandir gaye thi aur fast be raka ajj. ( Morning I heard what you were dreaming. You told that you love me. I felt very happy so I went to mandir and also fasted today)

R: Bolke chale jathi, Ajj dophar ko hi, mai bhi saath aa jatha.( If you would have told me , I would have also come with you)

I: App mujjse nehi puchege mai kui kush thi. Merko kui farak pada( Will you nit ask me why I was happy)

R: Farak padega na, mujjse pyar jo karthi ho.( Ya you will be happy only, you also love me right)

Ishitha is surprised to know that Raman knows that she is in love with him.

R: Kyui yaar hamesha dusroko underestimate karthi ho. Sir tum jaga Jassos ho kya. Mai bhi hun. Mane tumhare dairy padli.( Why do you underestimate others, are you only jaga jassos. I read your dairy)

I: Chi gandi bath. Dusro ka dairy nehi panda cahiye( Chi bad, you must not read others dairy)

R: Dusro ka todi pada mane, meri biwi ka pada. ( I didn't read others, I read my own wife's)

Saying so he tries to get romantic with her and wants to kiss her. Sensing that Ishitha backs and warns him

I: Raman, Ajj pas math ayeye, mera vrat (Don't come near me, I am fasting today)

R: Arre , kud Murugan ki mandir jake ah rahi ho aur mere pyar per ok tok kar rahi ho. Tumhare Murugan toh pyar ke dushman nehi hai. Kud unke dod do biwiya hai yar. At a time me dono ko sambathe hai. Meri toh wasi bi ek hai. (You went to Murugan temple right.Is he enemy of love. He himself has 2. At a time he is managing both, I anyways have one)

I: Chi Raman why are you talking about god like this.

R: Ohh chi. Ajj tumko Chi ka matlab samjatha hun.

I: Phele dinner kar lethe hai

R: Uska matlab, dinner ke baad are you ok?

Ishitha blushes and leaves to their room. Raman is smirk.

Part 16: The Grave shock

Raman is waiting next to the window waiting for Ishitha. He had undergone a traumatizing encounter of the fear of losing her. He need to ensure himself that she was his. Today he needed to do what he had been yarning for days. Ishitha comes and closed their door. Raman smiles seeing her. She doesn't look up to him.

Hi all, the story from here on will be little mature. It will have a twist and the mature content needs to be incorporated to support the story line. Please let me know if I will have to continue.

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Posted: 11 years ago
omg...stopped at very wrng place yrr...
rlly short update...
now u hav to update soon...dont take much days like earlier..pls pls update by tomorrow...
w8ng for romance...
continue soon n pm pls

by the way..m i d frst one to comment?
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Posted: 11 years ago
kya yar...!!
bich mai hi fullstop laga dia... 😆
it was lovely confession.. waitng 4 nxt .. try 2 updt it soon.. plzzz 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely confession and then you stopped??! oh pls continue sooon
thanks for the pm

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