YHM | 200th Episode OS Contest

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Prii

@SweetButSpicy

Coolbie

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

Hey YHMians...Few days ago, we posted a OS Contest and now we're back with voting round.

It's time to vote for your favorite one.

Let's first go through the voting rules before proceeding any further😃

Rules

- Vote for 1 entry. No more!

- NO MID voting. MIDs are against IF's Rules

- Newbie votes won't be counted

- Do not advertise/promote your entry. It'll result in your entry(ies) being terminated from the contest.

- Do not vote for your own entry(ies) if you are a contestant. Your votes will be voided if you do.

Voting will end on Wednesday, July 30th, 2014

If we missed anyone's entry, please send a PM to me (BubblyR) ASAP!

Good luck to all participants!

BubblyR | Nichuss | QH_DDEJ_Fan

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Prii

@SweetButSpicy

Coolbie

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

Entry #1

Sirf Mohabbat Ke Liye

The limo steers away with Raman and Ishita closely seated. Raman huffs and puffs: "Ishita, I want to..but not like this..". She looks at him coyly and nods in agreement. "You understood what I am trying to say?..seriously; when did you become so smart?". She quips: "While you were wavering like a pendulum" and bursts into laughter. "Whatever.." retorts an embarrassed Raman and gets busy on his phone. Ishita steals a look at his phone, but he hides it from her and she sneaks behind him thus smashing her face onto his back!. Raman turns to her and cups her face in his hands: "Ishita, are you OK?" She is lost in his touch while he whispers: "Don't you know that Jhansi Ki Rani should not attack from behind?". "Kadoos!", she retorts. He pours them both a drink. "I know madam doesn't even drink wine, so just hold it". "Cheers!"; she takes the first sip. He starts to say something when she puts her finger on his lip: "sirf Raman ke liye" she says with a deadly smile. He returns a dimpled smile while he takes a sip, twitches his face and exclaims: "Apple cider yaar!!!". She motions a thumbs up. Shaking his head, Raman mimics: "sirf Raman ke liye". Both start laughing when they bump into each other as the Limo comes to a screeching halt. Her hair gets stuck in his shirt button and his watch strap in her dupatta. Gazing at each other, he moves towards her and she towards him as if a kiss is in order. The door opens. Ishita is surprised and speechless to see all their family members. Raman carries her up a lengthy flight of stairs, both lost in each other as he climbs up. When he puts her down, she realizes they are in a temple: "Raman, are we shooting for Chennai Express?". He responds: "yes and I am SRK!". Ishita is dragged away and brought back in a stunning bridal outfit and Raman equally handsome. Raman goes on his knee, holds her hand: "Ishita, will you marry me?" She blushes while looking at him. All are taken aback! Raman kisses her hand, blushes and asks: "sirf Raman ke liye?". She still doesn't respond! All are irritated with her. Raman gets up and hugs her very tightly and she immediately reciprocates as if she will never let him free from this hug. They both have their heads rested on each other's shoulder smiling with tears and tightening their hug. Raman says: "I love you Ishita" and she responds: "I love you Raman". Raman and ishita break free from the hug. Raman puts his arm around ishita, looks at her, wipes her tears: "Ishita, will you marry me?" pauses and asks: "sirf mohabbat ke liye"?". "Yes! Raavan Kumar!" she says as she wipes his tears. They happily go through all the rituals with everyone's blessings and take off in the same limo to begin their married life filled with love!

Entry#2

Life is a Rom-Com

He grumbles as his Sunday is ruined, no make it his life is ruined and it is all because of that woman.

It's a Sunday and with the tensions he was recently embroiled in he had no time to catch up with FIFA, he was about to watch a rerun late last night when things took a turn somehow and they ended up arguing. Not that it was out of the usual; only his daughter marched in with her favorite Pokmon soft toy in hand and started on him for fighting with her Ishimaa.

Somehow, Ishita got her to calm down but Ruhi wouldn't budge and hence slept in with them. In the morning, he got a punishment for his rudeness and insensitivity.

He had to watch a movie of Ishita' choice since he made Ruhi upset and fought with her Ishimaa only because he didn't want to lower the TV volume.

So now, he finds himself in bed in his room with his wife and daughter as they watch a movie - Hum Tum - the woman had to pick a Rom-com to torture him!

He doesn't realize when but perhaps midway through the movie he started involuntarily comparing Karan and Rhea' story with his and Ishita'. They too always ended up bumping into each other he realizes, in all sorts of places. How they became friends and how... just like Hum feels lonely and miserable without Tum - when she was gone and had stopped talking to him recently he was just the same.

He shakes his head as he realizes he was just comparing himself with a cartoon! The things this woman does - she is making him loose his freaking mind.

He turns to look at her with anger and disgust and notices her tears. Ishita loves this movie and somehow even when she has seen it loads of times already she cries when Karan and Rhea part ways due to misunderstandings. He shakes his head and rolls his eyes watching his feisty wife be such a girl!

He hands her a hanky that she blows her nose on and his disgust rather than any polite manners make her keep it.

Around the end of the movie as Karan watches on his newborn baby girl with his arm around his wife, he cannot help but smile at the scene. The little girl reminds him so much of Ruhi, he looks down at his baby stretched across their laps - with her head and torso in his and her legs perched on her Ishimaa' - that he notices she is asleep.

Running a gentle hand over her head he is about to tell his wife he is changing the channel now when he feels her head landing on his shoulder and realizes Ishita too is asleep.

The moment fills him with so much peace, he decides to switch off the TV instead and with an arm around his wife' shoulder falls in a deep slumber.

Entry#3

A fate so twisted.

She sat by her favourite corner, watching the rain cascade down to earth. Her eyes closed and flash backs came rushing in her mind. Painful yet sweet memories of every twinkling second spent with him. Her lips turned into a beautiful, soft smile. She remembered how he would call her at night and they would talk for hours until she slept off. She remembered their crazy arguments on every little detail - yet he would always agree with her at the end to make her smile. She remembered their slow dances in the rain, on the dance floor during parties, in their bedroom during those special moments she would always cherish the most. She remembered his soft caresses on her waist through her saree's pallu in those dark corners of the halls. She remembered everything with him and her - with them. And then began the most agonizing parts of her life, when they drifted apart. Tears pooled in her closed eyes, slipping through the tired lashes as she remembered the last time they were together.

Ishita saw Raman coming out of their room with a suitcase in tow. She wondered where he was going since he hadn't informed her of any business trips. She got up from the table and headed towards him but before she could utter a word, he spoke his final words, paralyzing her.

Ishita humara safar ab yahin tak ka tha. Isse aage main tumhara saath nahi nibha paon ga. I'm sorry!

Please Raman, ap yeh kya keh rahe hain? main janti hoon pichle kuch din hamare beech misunderstandings thi lekin hum unhe solve kar sakte hain.

Nahi, mujhe ab jana hoga. Main yahan aur nahi reh sakta. aur waise bhi misunderstandings solve karne ka koi faida nahi hai.

Aap aisa nahi kar sakte? Main Ruhi ke bina nahi reh paon gi, woh meri jaan hai. Please Raman, ruk jaiye. Sab theek ho jaye ga, please!

Tumhe ek dafa ki baat samjh nahi aati? Mujhe nahi rehna tumhare saath ab! thak chukka hun main aur nahi jhel sakta tumhe. Tum rakho Ruhi ko apne pas, nahi chahiye woh mujhe.

Tears streamed down her cheeks as his every word pierced her heart but he didn't care and stormed out of the house. Ruhi rushed towards Ishita as she broke into sobs.

Few days later as she lay in her bed, her phone rang with his name but with an unknown voice. She rushed towards the given address and saw him lying on the hospital bed with needles and tubes. He had fainted on the road when someone bought him here and called the first number on his speed-dial. The doctor explained to her the critical condition of her husband with brain tumor, second stage.

She entered his room and held his hand while he looked into her eyes which shone with hope and she said,
"We'll fight this together - me & you!"

But they had lost because "Not even need and love can defeat fate." -Quoted by Ursula K. Le Guin

Edited by QH_DDEJ_Fan - 11 years ago

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Rajji (Shanu)

@.Rajji.

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

entry 2 ! (because of HUM TUM reference ! First one was very funny too)

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Israa.

@Recovery.

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

Entry 1.

Really liked the storyline!

More like a fairytale but funny xD

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Vedika211

@Vedika211

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

I like all 3 but entry 2 the most :)

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aaminah123

@aaminah123

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

Entry 2 off course but the last one was too emotional, he left her because he was zickk :( aww may be later you will treat us with the third os.

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Kalyani Nitin Bujone

@Kore-Soteira

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

Beautiful OS guys hats off to every writer who wrote. Brilliant work.
But my vote goes to Entry number 2

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

I like all n entry 2 is so sweet.

But my vote goes to entry 3.

It was gripping from the start. Why was he leaving the two precious women of his life? I was hooked.

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athira

@shruti-love

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

entry 2

loved all but my vote goes to entry 2

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#10

best wishes to all and every OS is awesome!

My vote goes to Entry 2

Edited by vidya.anand - 11 years ago

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