OS: A night to Remember - Page 2

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Reeno! First off sorry for taking so long in responding. This was so beautiful. You know I love your writing style and this two shot was depicted so wonderfully. You manage to weave both romance and the more sensuous elements of their relationship seamlessly.

I'm so so happy you wrote this! Now I want more 😳 🤗 🤗

OMG you write so well.
The first part was just plain hilarious and the second part was so cute and hot at the same time. The thing I loved the most was both of them were so in character. Loved reading this.

I super loved it both parts !!!
The second part was tooo hot !!!
God how i wish the actual scene is passionate

beautiful !!

loved both the parts :-D
raman ishita nd their banter..they are incomplete without their nik-jhok
nd ishita's prank ..how i couldnt wait for dat :-D

i loved their walk on the lonely road..complete of togetherness ..their entwining fingers...shows how they jav grown in theor relationship ...frm being complete strangers on a rainy night to soul mates on the lonely road ...
cottage scene was justtt perfecttt !!
he kissed her thrice :O
wen will this happen .???

loved it ..
wish to read more. of your wrk :-)

if this happens on the show...☺️ i watch it with my mom yaar🤢

loved it! and i'm so glad you can't stop writing once you start 😉😃

Loved loved loved reading both the parts ..brilliantly written and you
are a fabulous writer.

woah 😲

Waouuu !!!! Totally but totally.. Hotty hotty !! Superb !!! Naughty Raman.. ;)

Passionate and romantic...loved it to bits!☺️

wow. u have written it beautifully. loved it👏😳