My original scene part 2 page 4 by lucky

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Now in the morning

Ruhi is fiddling around with Raman phone

And when shravan comes in

He too wants to play a game on the phone

They are each trying to snatch phone from each other

And in the melee

Phone slips and falls on the floor and breaks

Ishita sees it

Ishita and Ruhi decide to bring a phone for Raman

Not wanting to take chances with Ruhi

She selects the similar phone

And gives the SIM card to be put in phone

Now when ishita is waiting to make payment

Ruhi quietly takes the picture of ishita

Now Raman who was perplexed and quite frantically searching for his phone

Now ishita and Ruhi reach home

Ishita tells him the story and gives him the phone

Raman asks if even this time it is pink phone

Ishita says don't worry this time I have selected myself

And goes from there

Now Raman opens the package

And is quite shocked when he starts the phone

It has ishita wallpaper on it

Raman then smiles

Raman wondering ye jkr kehna Kya chahti hai

Well he did not know it was Ruhi who had set the wallpaper
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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
Super amazing
Very well write something like this can happen in reality too
Very good please do write another part
It's very good loved it
Perfect dialogue by raman at the end
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res, will go to office n then read Leo

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Very nice Leo... first story on a post-accident track that I am reading :)

you know what I will say next!!! continue this one please. and let us know how Raman will find out ki Jhansi ki Rani kya kehna chah rahi thi :)
Edited by always_a_TV_fan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awww... so cute 😊 great idea!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: peace..

awww... so cute😊great idea!

thanks
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Cheers and thanks for the feedback
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hope they show something like this in serial
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: always_a_TV_fan

Res, will go to office n then read Leo

***EDITED

Very nice Leo... first story on a post-accident track that I am reading :)

you know what I will say next!!! continue this one please. and let us know how Raman will find out ki Jhansi ki Rani kya kehna chah rahi thi :)



Thanks lucky

Well had no plans to continue

But lets see if I can think of something

If you want you can continue

I will give you copyrights haha
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: whitelily

Great👍🏼

thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
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And maybe lucky will continue this

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