OS:Chahun main ya Na! part4 pg13 (21/7) - Page 8

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Part-4
**not proof read. Apologies for any spelling and grammatical errors.**


Raman and ishita order their dinner when they hear an announcement- "Ladies and gentlemen, we hope you all are having a great time in this resort. To make your stay more memorable, we are organising a couple dance competition. I request you all to have your dinner and join us on the dance floor in another 30mins. Thank you."

Raman and Ishita look at each other trying to read the other's mind.

Raman teases her saying "ghoor kya rahi ho? Mujhe tumhare saath dance karne ka koi shauk nahi hai!"

Ishita let out a sigh of relief teasing him back "acha hai. Kamse kam beizati to nahi hogi sabke saamne. Aapko dance karna jo nahi aata!"

"Salsa competition ek baar jeet kya gayi, tum to khud ko choreographer samajh rahi ho"

"Choreographer na sahi par aap se achi dancer to hun!"

"Excuse me? Maine tumse acha dance kiya tha mihir ke sangeet me!wo bhi Tumhare saath."

"Haan par wo isliye kyunki mai aapke saath thi. Mere saath dance karne se aapki flaws hide hogayi mere flawless performance se!" Ishita boasted about herself to irritate Raman.

But she didn't had the slightest idea that she would have to repent later for what she did.

Raman's ego was hurt and he decided to show her how good he can dance.

"Theek hai. Tum kya ab puri duniya dekhegi iss Raman Bhalla ka high energy dance!"

She is shocked to see him get up and walk to the dance floor. But the organizer says he can't dance solo as this is a couple's competition.

Ishita laughs at him when a young girl wearing a mini dress and high heels walked upto him offering to be his dance partner.

Raman was not interested and was about to refuse when he saw the sudden change in Ishita's expressions on seeing the girl with him.

She was getting too touchy with Raman which made Ishita fume in anger.

The girl introduced herself as priyanka. She gave her hand to Raman which he accepted and they started to dance.

All the couples were dancing including Raman and Priyanka while Ishita was alone sitting and getting jealous that raman is dancing with someone else.

Raman was hoping that Ishita will get the chipkoo girl away from him and dance with him but she didn't move from her seat.

Then a tall guy came over to Ishita and called her by name "Ishita?"

Ishita turned to him with confused look as he seemed to be a stranger.

"Yes, aap kaun?"

"Main, Raghav. Your batchmate in dental college. Bhool gayi?"

Ishita recognizes him and greets him. "Sorry, itne saal baad mil rahe hai to dhyaan nahi raha"

Raman notices a tall guy talking with Ishita and wonders who is he. He sees that ishita shook hands with him and is now smiling and talking to him while ignoring Raman.

Meanwhile Priyanka accidently steps over Raman's foot with her pointed high heels which makes him further irritated. He tries to leave her and go to Ishita but the girl doesn't let him to.

Raghav asks Ishita why she is sitting alone to which she replies that her husband is on the dance floor. She shows him Raman dancing with Priyanka.

Raghav understands that she's getting jealous. He gives her an idea- "will you dance with me? Lets show your husband that if he can make you jealous, so can you too!" He smiled.

Ishita initially refused but later she agreed to let Raman know how much it hurts when he is with some other woman.

Raman is visibly angry and shocked seeing a tall guy holding ishita's hand in his and his other hand around her waist.

Ye ishita kya kar rahi hai? How can she even agree to dance with someone other than me? No no...I cant bear anyone else touching her. I'll kill him!


Raman pushed priyanka away and ran into ishita-Raghav. He pulled ishita by her arm towards him and warned the guy pointing his index finger on his face "how dare you dance with my wife? I'll bury you alive if I see you anywhere nearby me or my wife. Get it?"

Ishita tried to stop him but he shut her up and dragged her to another corner.

Ishita jerked her hand out of gis hold as she said "problem kya hai aapki? Na jagah dekhte ho na aas paas ke logon ko. Har jagah tamasha karbe ki aadat hai aapko!"

Raman came close to her and held her strongly by the shoulders as his eyes were burning red. He angrily asked "tamasha main kar raha tha ya tum? How can you let any random guy or for that matter any guy to even touch you, let alone dance with you!"

"Kyun? Sirf aapko haq hai biwi ko chodke kisi bhi ladki ke saath dance karne ka? Agar aap kisi 'hot' ladki ke saath dance kar sakte ho to main kisi 'tall' ladke ke saath kyun nahi karsakti dance?"

Raman replied her in warning tone "tumhe har baar kyun batana padta hai ki tum meri biwi ho. Aur tumpar sirf mera haq hai...Tumhe aur koi chuey to mujhe bilkul pasand nahi. Do you get that? "

Ishita smiles happily with tears flowing down her cheeks.
She replies in a soft tone "bas. Yehi haq main bhi jatana chahti hu Raman. Kya ye aap nahi samajhte?"

Raman realised what she meant to say. He could now understand how she might have felt whenever he was with shagun and today when he danced with some other girl.

He freed her from his hold and replied in a calm tone "I'm sorry ishita. I understood your point. Shayad main kabhi tumhare feelings ko samajh hi nahi paya."

Ishita smiled and said "Ruhi sahi kehti hai. Aapko sab kuch samjhana padta hai." Both laughed at that.

Raman said "main sirf tumhe jealous karne ke liye uss ladki ke saath dance kar raha tha. But jab maine tumhe kisi aur ke saath dekha to samajh me nahi aaya ki kya karun"

By then Raghav too came and introduced himself to raman. Ishita explained Raman about their plan to make him jealous.

Raman stood there motionless, embarrassed as Ishita and Raghav tried to hide their laughter.

As the whole scene sank into him, raman apologised for his rude behaviour to Raghav.

Raghav smiled saying "I'm glad Ishita got such a protective and loving husband. Please take care of her. I'll take a leave from here. Bye"
Raghav left from there leaving a shy Raman and blushing Ishita looking at each other.

Ishita outstretched her hand towards him asking "kya aap mere saath kadam se kadam milake dance karoge?".

Raman smiled widely as he held her hand happily. They both went onto the dance floor and danced passionately, lost in each other completely that they failed to realise all other couples stopped dancing to see ishita and raman dance brilliantly.

They came back to their senses only when the music stopped and there were loud claps from everyone present there.

Raman and ishita stood embarrassed there as the organizer announced them as winners and gifted them 20thousand rupees cheque along with an award trophy.

Ishita refused to take the cheque and requested organizer to give it to an orphanage which would help children benefit with their education and basic neccesities.

Raman is moved by her generosity. He remembers his past when he earned bonus for the extra hours he worked in the office and how shagun spent the entire money on her shopping and spa yet complaining to him that the money was not enough.

Ishita turned towards him saying "chale Raman? Kal subah jaldi nikalna hai yahan se. Main chahti hu ki Ruhi ke uth ne se pehle hum ghar pahunche. Main uski goodmorning hug aur kiss miss nahi karna chahti."

Raman loved the way she cared about Ruhi. Even being miles away from her, Ruhi is still on her mind, in her talks and in her heart.

As she turned to leave, raman held her hand to stop her. She turned back and looked at him confused.

He pulled her closer, taking her both hands in his and looked straight into her eyes. He told her "ishita... mujhe koi farak nahi padta ki kaun mere baare me kya sochta hai. Lekin tum alag ho. Tumhari har harkat, har baat, har ehsaas se mujhe farak padta hai."

Ishita's heart beats at a faster pace. He continues "maine apne aap ko kho diya tha uss shagun ka pyaar paane ke liye jo asal me pyaar tha hi nahi. Par aaj!..." he struggles to complete the sentence.

Ishita asks "par aaj kya raman?"

Raman closes his eyes,takes a deep breath and looks back at her saying "aaj...aaj tumhari wajah se maine wo sab kuch paya hai jo mujhe laga meri kismat me kabhi nahi tha."

Ishita smiled through her tears. He said "tumhe pura haq hai mujhpe ishita!. Tumse zyada mujhpar kisi aur ka haq nahi hai. Mera khud ka bhi nahi!"

Ishita kept her hand over his, smiling happily as they both share a long eye lock.

They are interrupted by the ringing tone of raman's cell.
He answers the call as Ruhi on the other side asks Raman when they are coming back.

Raman smiles and replies her that they'll be there by tomorrow morning before she wakes up. She asks for Ishita.
Ishita speaks to Ruhi as they March towards their room.
Raman feels tired and dozes off to sleep on the bed while ishita tries to adjust on the small sofa as she tells bedtime story to Ruhi. Once she is sure that ruhi slept, she ends the call and dozes off to sleep.

Since the sofa was very small, she keeps tossing trying to sleep but she feels uncomfortable. She looks at Raman who seems to be in deep sleep. She awakens him who gets irritated as he asks "kya hai yaar? Tum chudailon ki tarah aadhi raat ko jaag kyun rahi ho? Plz mujhe bahut neend aa rahi hai. Tum bhi so jao aur mujhe bhi sone do!"

Ishita got angry and said "ek to maharaja ki tarah aap pure bed pe kabza karke so rahe ho... upar se aapko itni bhi chinta nahi ki main waha uss chote se sofe pe kaise soungi?"

Raman opened his eyes and looked at the sofa. He then taunted her "hmmm...tumhe kaha tha maine ki moti hoti ja rahi ho. Ab isme sofe ki kya galti?"

Ishita fumes in anger now and pulls out his blanket.

"Kya kar rahi ho? Daura padh gaya hai?"

"Aap sofe pe so ya zameen pe. Main to bed pe hi soungi!"
Saying so she threw his pillow and blanket on the sofa and came back to sleep on the bed on the other side. Raman was still sitting on his side of the bed looking at ishita angrily who already slept off.

Samajhti kya hai khud ko ye? Maana ki maine usse kaha tha ki pura haq hai usko mujhpe... iska matlab ye nahi ki mujhe wo order karegi aur main sofe pe jake so jaunga! Grrr

He got his blanket and pillow back to the bed and slept off turning his back at ishita.

Main yahin sounga bed pe. Chahe jo karle ye jhansi ki rani.

Morning ishita wokeup first seeing Raman just inches away from her in the bed. She sat up immediately in shock but then seeing him sleep innocently like a baby, her heart melted.

She ran her fingers through his hair and smiled.Raman was awake yet remained still with eyes closed not wanting her to move her hand away.

She goes to washroom to freshenup as Raman opens his eyes and smiles touching his hair.

An hour later, they leave the resort and drive back to their home to resume their daily routine.



So that's it dearies. Hope haven't disappointed you all.
Thanks for reading all the parts. Love to you all.

Originally posted by: whitelily

Superb update

Thanks a lot dear

Originally posted by: _Dipsi_

Wow cute update..

Pls cont soon

Thanks for the pm

Thanks a lot dear. Updated next part too. Hope you like it. 😳

Originally posted by: aaminah123

Yay! They went alone :D

The precap has already captivated me!

Aww thank you so much for liking it. Hope I didn't disappoint with the ending.

Originally posted by: Nikki_Titli

aww fab update...n precap is excitin...plz continue sooon

Thanks a lot Nikki 😛 hope you like the ending too. 😳

Originally posted by: lourel24

loved it."Ishita takes her dupatta and pulls it over his head to protect him from the heat."I liked this gesture of ishu n this dailogue of raman a lot".. har baar chodke jane ki dhamki kyun deti ho?"N precap was most interesting.Raman apne chote height hone pe kabhi itna afsos nahi hua hoga.eagerly waiting for it so,update soon,

Awww glad that you liked my writing. Thank you so much for comments. Hope the ending doesn't disappoint you. 😳