Raman Ramblings: Rain and Realisation

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deepa

@_Dipsi_

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Emotions so Beautifully captured...loved it

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Rudrapreesha

@Rudrapreesha765

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

nice
waiting for ishita's rain ramblings

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Malangan

@TeriMalang

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

beautifully written

rains and his realisation ..no wonder rains play an important part in their lives ...with every rain ..sumthing changes in their relation

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ishra4ever

@ishra4ever

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

So beautifully written! Loved it. Especially the line - rains bring best in ishu n worst in raman...awww it touched my heart.
PLz write part 2

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Aani

@EkPaheli

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

res 😳

Ah I cant decide which one is more beautiful in this rain series but I am partial to this one may be because as much heartbreaking as Ishita' version is... his is just as beautiful and the way you have ended this - with him thinking her soul happens to be purer than his ... damn that killed me Lucky.

I mean its so profound for a man like RKB to admit this...he was so disillusioned with women in general that he had all but convinced himself that they are nothing but rotten scoundrels who just happen to have a pretty packaging and here comes this woman out of nowhere - she is simple, ordinary and in his case literally the girl next door ... and she ends up changing his life, his views on the world and more importantly himself.

I find it such a beautiful contradiction here - that a woman he once loved made him the worst version of himself, brought out the most terrible aspect of him and here is this woman who he is yet to really fall in love with - go head over heels for her and she... she makes him want to be a better man, she makes him feel inferior without even trying to show off any superiority - she just is being herself and that... that's what gets to him... and I don't even know what I am saying here honestly LOL but I guess you understand my gist right? 😳

Spectacular work my friend I bow down to thee and thy talent 👏

Edited by EkPaheli - 11 years ago

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EviSab

@EviSab

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Wow .You are too good..It's treat to read your OSs. Thank you very much.

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amrithas

@amrithas

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

It was great. I'd love to read ishita's Memories of the rain too.

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FieryLioness

@FieryLioness

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

oh my Lucky... wow

this the word always comes in mind when i read ur ramblings...

i must say its ur forte now... no one can write IshRa's thoughts better then u... initially i used to think, ramblings n all r not my type, i get bored but now u made me addicted to it...i often wait for ur ramblings more then ur OS ...

loved this one thoroughly ...

how beautifully u explained his thoughts on this rain and past whenever they were together ...

his thoughts on how he always cause her pain but she is always in her character and cares fro him...

superb Lucky ...loved it

and u really need to ask this... plz babes go on..waiting for ur Ishita's thoughts on rain...

don't make us wait han😉

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

I'm just speechless after reading this. It was like I was walking in Raman's mind but better. Would love to read what you have to say about Ishita's memories of the rain in relation to Raman.

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deepjin

@deepjin

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

clearly depicted the turmoil that raman is goin through...i have greater sympathy towards ishita compared to raman in this fiasco...but after reading ur post i feel for raman even more👏...

Edited by deepjin - 11 years ago

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