Ishra Two Shots --- '||'Piya na rahe mann basiya'||' Final part Page 3 - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
#31

...thanks a lot...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: chinudolly.yhm

reserve 😳

unres

super duper awesome story
loved it so very much
great work
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Thanks u so much for reading...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: sush_

shanky yaara.. reading it now..

update thoda long hai but it is just the way i like it

I know......Shoot me for this...I WAS REALLY EMBARRASSED while posting.

now coming to your story...
raman and his inner-self.. so funny

They hate each other...Raman wants to kill his innerself...He talks shit...
DEMO!! haaye haaye Raman toh bade hi naught nikala...

He is shameless...He has some khatarnaak iradas...
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Hearing his husky voice,Ishita closed her eyes tightly.Never in her dreams she thought Raman will take the leg pulling to this extent.She was not prepared for this at all.She was just having fun as she never saw him pleading in front of her this way.She felt him brushing his face on hers.His touch brought a slight smile on her face,her nervousness vanished but her eyes were still closed.

Raman saw her smiling.He was amazed.This is exactly the way she was smiling while sleeping.His hand automatically raised to caress her face.He repeated what he did in the morning.He grazed his finger on her face from her temple to her cupid bone then he caressed her face with his thumb.None of them had any idea for how long they were standing or doing what they were doing.


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I am toh dead blushing
pata nahi ishu ka kya haal hua hoga...

Thanks yaara...Ishita is ummm...
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She hugged him tightly with all her might.There was noway he could speak in such situation.For a moment he was standing and thinking what he should do,was he dreaming.He felt her tighting her grip on him as if she will never leave him.Finally he hugged her.He wanted to crush her within him but he decided to behave and control.After a while he felt her grip loosened.The way she was stopped breathing and standing stiffly,he realized she was embarrassed.

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mujhe zinda marna ka iraada hai kya.. i mean zinda hai toh hi marte hai i know..
par shanky yaara.. i am so blushing right now.. do you understand? my god!!

That I can see,u are blushing so beautifullly...
ok i need to coool down

...Plz...
shanky you improved a lot.. in writing romance yaara.. hats offf👍🏼

Thats a huge complement for me...Thanks sush...
haww ishu was nervous.. par kyun ishu..
tumne hi toh hug de di.. ab kyun itna nevousness😉😉
raman's double meaning one liner---

I myself was feeling shy while writing that one liner...HE is too much...
shanky love you.. for this yaara..
you are brilliant..
get ready i will be after you..
you must write more and more on them... please
again you are the best

I get ideas once in a while so its tough for me...but I will try...You very well know how to inspire...


love yaa


Thanks yaara...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: sush_

unreserved..

shanky please write more...😳😳


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Posted: 11 years ago
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awww... this was to good n hilarious
omg ishu ka meaning my gosh..
n Romans convo with his in herself was awesome an dekhna hain ye Raven Kumar apni jkr ko kaise man at a hain update soon dear
n ha than for d pm n Congo for new thread
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I don't read second part yet after ward I comment on it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I just read 1st part of it n I must say u penned Romans emotion very well
keep it up
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
Super cute story. The nok jhok is really awesome. 1 liners are back!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
Just the whole TS and it was really cute. I liked the fights that Raman had with his inner self, it was really funny. And all the dialogues were just like the characters. I'm happy in the end Ishita forgave Raman and they both realised their love for each other !!

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