OS: Yes I am selfish...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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So kind of bored with this majboori and who's right, who's wrong, ego, guilt, hurt, pain, blah blah...
As for setting things straight, I see more majboor ppl at work everyday and they didn't even had as good of support system like Raman. So CVs when you stretch this majboori "yawn" 🥱
I know when you ppl can't redeem male lead, may show him "saved by wifey" or ruin other character too
So here I am giving you way to justify both characters with simple scene, please take note !!

Let's assume case has ended, Ishita finds out it's adimanav so she takes it back. All nonsense court drama (which you ppl won't show properly), family talks and tears are done. Scene starts from Raman-Ishita room.

Raman sitting on sofa, bathing under moon light, allowing wind to touch his body reminding him he's not of stone yet. Eyes that have ran out of tears looked around quite room, nothing or no one venturing. How long he yearned for this peace, outside and more so inside. Just sitting with himself, no battle, no confusion, no guilt, no pain. Oh wait, how can he say no guilt, no pain. He still is very much guilty and continues to feel immense pain. It is not for his son, family or kids; just for Ishita. Sure the case has ended, but matter still remains between them. Where to go from here? He admitted no way things can go the way they were, those light hearted joyous moments, no they are not going to be there. He just can't expect ishita to let it all go. All of it because of his own fault, his majboori he choose to make mistakes. He has apologized, but so what. He can't expect Ishita to forgive him so easily, no lady with self respect won't do that ! But then what to do, he can't bare the silent any longer, he needed some reaction from her, how?

As Raman lost in his thoughts, embarking upon another internal battle, Ishita quietly stepped in. Mother returning after fulfilling her duty to sweet angle. One element that remained stable in chaos was her Ruhi, angle who is always there with pure affection towards her.

Seeing Ishita Raman got up, Ishita noticed it but ignored it. Raman found some courage to at least say "Ishita". As much Ishita wanted to ignore that she just couldn't. But didn't want to completely acknowledge it either. She answered, "Ruhi so gayi he, me sirf kapde lenne aayi hu aur fir apni beti ke pass chali jaoongi".

"Ishita, tum janti ho mein kya kehnaa chahta hu"

Ishita stood still at her spot, did he just assume I wud know what is going in his mind or what he wants to say, how dare he assumed that? Turning her red face towards Raman Ishita almost yelled, "mein janti hu? Wah, mujhe sab kuch janana hi hota he aapke mann me kya chalta he aur kya kehna chahte he. Bahut acche, mujhe to janana hi chahiye, lekin aisa contract mein to nahi he"

"Ishita please, fir se contract. Mein manta hu maine tumhe bahut takleef dee he, mere bette ne bhi bahut takleefe dee he aur tum yeh contract ki baat bhi isiliye keh rahi ho. Tumhara pura hakk he mujhe bhi takleef denne ka lekin aur mein 1000 baar bhi mafi mangu to kum he. Lekin meri baat samjo"

"Baat samjo, to aaj tak kya karti aa rahi thi me Raman? Me nahi keh rahi ke me hamesha sahi hu lekin maine har baar aapki baat samjne ki kosish to ki he. Maine har baar mana he ke aap pehle ek baap he fir mere pati. Lekin aap nahi samaj paye. bahut acche se dikhaya ke badal gaye he lekin nahi, wahi insaan he. Me ab thakk agyi hu yeh samjke"

"Ishita tum yeh sab mujhe dard denne ke liye bol rahi ho. tum abhi bhi samjti ho, isiliye to case wapas le liya aur...

"Case wapas liya kyunki chahe meri amma ke liye kitna dard kyun na ho, me kissi 11 saal ke bacche ko sazza nahi dilwa sakti!! Lekin aapko kaha bharosa tha mujpe"

"Bharosa tha aur me batana chahta tha tumhe lekin nahi bata paya kyunki.."

"Kyunki aap majboor the yahi na. bas har baat pe majboor bolte rahiye, sach mat boliye. Lekin me sach bata sakti hu. Sach he haan mujhe bahut zayada takleef pohachi he. Meri Amma ki jo halat huyi usse bahut zayada takleef pohachi he lekin usse bhi zayada takleef aapki wajah se huyi he. Ha Raman aapki wajah se. Me bhul gayi thi me sirf Ruhi ki maa hu. Aisa samjne lagi ke me ek patni bhi hu jo apne pati ko uski pehli biwi ke saath dekh dekh kar marti rahi. Har baar Raman maine aapne aap ko sambhala aur samjaya ke nahi thik he, koi baat nahi lekin har baar dard hua. kyunki me sochne lagi thi mere harr dard ke liye mera pati he saath me lekin ussi pati ne mujhe dard diya. uss pati ne jisse me...

Pin drop silence, Ishita couldn't believe she almost said what she was abt to say.

'Kya Ishita, please bollo. jitna gussa he nikalo mujpe, galiyan do, maro lekin mere saath baat to karo, aise fir se chup na raho"

"jane do Raman, kya fayda he, aapke pass kissi bhi baat ka jawab he, kya kahenge ke aap..

"me selfish ho gaya tha. Yes I accept I am selfish. But even there you only know half of it !!
Haan me mere bette ke liye to selfish hua hi tha lekin kissi aur ke liye bhi. Jab mujhe pata chala maine socha ke tumhe aake bata doo. Me janta tha aur koi samje na samje meri Ishita zaroor samjegi. Lekin fir mere dil me dard sa sama gaya. Tum adimanav ko maaf to kar dogi lekin isse tumhara dard to nahi jayega na. Woh dard jo mere batte ne diya hoga tumhe. Woh dard jo ek patti hone ke hisab se mujhe theek karna chahiye, woh dard tumhe meri wajah se hi to milta. Tum adimanav ko baccha samaj kar maaf kar deti lekin tumhare dard ka kya? Me darr gaya ke sayad tum iss dard to mere saath jodd do. Tum chaho ya na chao aakhir tumhara dard to hota meri wajah se hi na. Aur ek din issi dard ki wajah se tum mujse durr chali gayi to?
Nahi, chahe kuch bhi ho jaye me yeh nahi hone detta. Mere bette ke liye to na jane maine kya kuch kiya lekin uske saath me har aisi cheez ko mita dena chahta tha jo tumhe mujse durr kar de. manta hu maine jo kuch kiya galat tha, mana is wajah se maine tumhe aur takleef bhi di lekin me yeh to keh sakta tha na ke tum mere saath/ paas ho. Yes I am selfish, whatever I did was out of selfishness coz I...

Raman too realized he almost said something he has not thought of before... Raman too was as astonished as Ishita by what was abt to be said by both of them.

Raman again said "yes I am selfish Ishita...

So do say what y'll think 😛

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Posted: 11 years ago
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As I said before you are quite a story teller. I would love to see something similar in YHM. I kind of want them to pick it up where they left it (asking each other if they are in love).
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nikita99

As I said before you are quite a story teller. I would love to see something similar in YHM. I kind of want them to pick it up where they left it (asking each other if they are in love).

When CVs are not telling proper story, someone has to 😆
In roder for both to go back to where they were, there has to be "proper justification" otheriwse it all will look so superficial !
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Posted: 11 years ago
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loved it😛
wish this scene should come n in the same way as described here,few days ago also ishita was about to say about her feelings for him but then she stopped herself...but bala understood her silence😉
i agree he crossed the line in being selfish no matter how much justification he is giving as majboor n wat not but still damage is done🤓
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: jay_bpm

When CVs are not telling proper story, someone has to 😆
In roder for both to go back to where they were, there has to be "proper justification" otheriwse it all will look so superficial !

I know and agree. For "proper justification" we are in for months.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: parichayan

loved it😛

wish this scene should come n in the same way as described here,few days ago also ishita was about to say about her feelings for him but then she stopped herself...but bala understood her silence😉
i agree he crossed the line in being selfish no matter how much justification he is giving as majboor n wat not but still damage is done🤓

well let's give raman he is majboor and also selfish. but then even for sake of drama, this selfish can be turned in other way 😛
why only be majboor and selfish abt adimanav, flip it for Ishita 😉

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