OS Realization, Revealtion and Confession Part 2 uipdate

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Guys its my first attempt...hope its liked
Been always a silent reader..
Here you go...have not proof read the same just wrote what was going in my mind for past few days.

Revelations, Realizations and Confession

OS updated as per the current Track( Part 1)

After the stormy night Raman and Ishita both realize that there is some other bonding that has come in their relationship. (I am skipping the morning part and taking directly to the court scene)

It's a regular bhalla morning except the fact that for all of them Raman simply doesn't exist. Raman came out of his room and saw everyone engrossed in their own time was about to leave when suddenly Ishita wined at Ruhi and she called "papa...breakfast nahin karoge."

Raman turned back and saw Ishita serving him the same and Ruhi holding his hand and taking him towards the dinning table. He quietly sat and finished off the breakfast not looking at anyone except for a minute or two he was glancing at Ishita. He quietly leave for the court as it was the hearing day. Ishita heart cries out as why Raman is behaving in such a way but there was no answer to his worries. She pushed all her thoughts and got ready as she too needed to reach the court she dropped Ruhi at Vandu Akka's house and thought Bala would accompany her but she was surprised to hear that Bala left with Raman. "Does jiju no anything why is Raman doing all this?" Thought Ishita.

AT THE COURT

Entire Bhalla and Iyer family were sitting with Ishita and Raman was all alone sitting at one of the back bench of the courtroom. Woh Neel ko kuch ishare kar raha that jo Ishita ko nahin samajh aaya phir woh apne lawyer se baat karne lagi.

Proceeding started, one by one the witnesses and evidence were shown and finally Shagun was called to clarify things.

Shagun bahut dari hui thi par phir who uthi aur witness box ki taraf gayi Ishita ki dekhte hue. Usne phir bolna shury kiya ki accident usne nahin kiya hai yeh sab jhoot hai Ishita usse phassa rahi hai woh mujhe mere bacche se dur karna chahti hai.

Ishita ki lawyer ne usse kaha ki We have a footage that will clearly show that fact that you were driving the car and hitted Mrs Madhvi Iyer. Shagun started panicking as soon as she heard that. But still she was adamant that nothing as such happened. She was literally shouting in court when the judge ordered to be calm and said if she has not done anything why is she scared and if she has done she will be punished for 6 months in jail. By hearing the word punishment and jail Shagun lost it completely and also as Ishita lawyer was constantly pressurizing on the fact that they have an eye witness as well as a CCTV footage to blame Shagun she could not take it any more and finally she blurted out

"Arre accident maine nahin Adi ne kiya hai" the moment she said that Ishita was hell shocked and she turned to look at Raman who was smiling wickedly and gave a victorious look to Neel. This made Ishita more confused. Before she could think further her lawyer came up again and told Shagun how can kid do the accident she is doing all this to protect herself and she will rot in jail for playing with someone's life. At any cost she will be punished, she is pathetic woman as she is framing her own son for the accident.

But Shagun just could take it any more and shouted in fierce voice that whatever she is saying is true.

Adi ne kiya hai accident mein toh itni drunk thi ki gadi reverse bhi nahin kar par rahi thi adi ne kaha ki who drive karega as yeh uski car hai usse maine kaha ki speed kam rakhna par woh suna nahin aur usne iss behenji ki maa ko thok diya. Uske baad maine jaise taise gadi ko ghar le aayi maine yeh baat isliye chupayi ki mujhe mere bte ko protect karna tha naaki isliye ki mein uske badle jail jau...please mein usse itna bhi pyar nahin karti ki I will give my life for him no ways accident adi ne kiya hai saza usse do CCTV footage check kar drive woh kar raha tha.

With that she was quiet Raman was very happy as he finally made Adi understood that Shagun is not a perfect mother for her. Hearing all this Ishita is was in deep pain she understood Raman's plight her deception and his lying. All the time it was for Adi not shagun, she fet very guilty and the very moment she stood up and spoke

Your Honour mein yeh case wapas lena chahati hun I don't want to punish the culprit. Ek massom bacche ko saza dila ke mujhe kuch nahin milega jo galti usne nadani mein ki par yeh zarur chahungi ki woh iss baat ki seriousness samjhe aur aainda aisa na kare yeh kisi ki zindagi aur maut ka sawaal ho sakta hai

I am sorry maine court ka waqt barbad kiya par mein apna case withdraw karti hun.

Adi who was witnessing all this was hell shocked by seeing the two women one whom he loved more than anything else in the world and the other one whom he hated like anything,

One was protecting her whom he had hated and also almost killed her mother while the other to save herself wanted him to get the punishment,

He could not take it any more so simply left sat in car and went back home.

Raman on the other hand was relived by seeing adi's expression and realization fact that has come up in front of him. He too stood up and walked out of the court. He was feeling very weak from in and could not understand what is going suddenly he felt dizzy and was about to fall when he felt two hands holding him, he immediately recognized the touch to be of his Jhanki ki Rani,

Ishita who was watching everything by now got worried as she saw Raman felling down and ram immediately to his rescue. She made him sit on the bench and checked his pulse. It was low she called Romi and asked him to get some neembu paani and a water bottle. Romi ran and first got the water bottle and went again to get neembu paani for her bhai as he too was feeling guilty to doubt on him. The entire bhalla and iyer family too was watching the duo sitting and holding each other felt bad from in as they too have doubted raman and did not support him.

Meanwhie Ishita was washing his face to make sure he gets his conscious while doing so she was caressing his face with love which was needed badly by Raman. He took hold of her hand while she was sprinkling water on his face and lovingly placed a kiss on her palm and looked towards her still holding the hand in the same way, Ishita shivered the very moment he kissed her palm and too looked into his eyes for a min the eyelock was there and finally Raman Kumar Bhalla spoke the words which she was dying to hear.

"I love you Ishita; I really do' I did everything for adi and just cant do anything to break your trust. I love you and only you.

Romi returned with some lemon water and broke the eyelock and confession that was going on smoothly, Raman finally let go of Ishita's hand which he was holding all this time, Ishita takes the lemon water and asks Raman to have it rather she makes her drink it. Raman was elated as finally his JKR was close to her and caring for him. He drank quietly and after that he got up to leave when Ishita called

Kaha jaa rahe ho, pehle ghar chalo nahin toh phir faint ho jaaoge I need to check your BP and Sugar. Raman turned and looked lovingly towards her and said you go mein aa jaunga thodi der mein.

As Raman about to leave Ishita holds his hand and says atleast Romin ko saath le jao aise halat mein drive karoge please kabhi toh sun liya laro please...Romi tum jao apne bhai ke saath aur saath hi rehna.

Raman was loving the way she was caring for her and did not wanted to hurt her further so he took Romi with him.

The Bhalla and Iyer family were very happy seeing the two together and prayed for their togetherness.

Precap: Adi hearing the truth about Shagun and Ashok conscpiracy, the custody scene and a small ISHRA moment.

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Part 2

Scene starts from Adi Shagun and Ashok

Adi was completely shattered at the upcoming events, he gets into some past memories as to how everytime whenever he encountered Ishita and Ruhi and always ended up insulting and hurting. How he had confessed to Raman on the night when they came back from the picnic about him doing the accident and not her mom, how Raman promised to protect him against everything.

He was in a complete state of shock on knowing that it was Ashok who went and informed Ishita about the accident been done by Shagun which his own father Raman had been hiding for such a long time also hw Ashok betrayed him on the part he loved him so much and always kept him above Raman.

Shagun walked towards Adi and said ki Beta maine yeh sab isliye kaha taaki Ishita case wapas le sake believe me warna tum to jaante ho who behji ki kitni akdu hai aur mujhe jail bhej deti dekha nahin tumne tumhara naam sunte hi Raman ko impress karne ke liye kaise usne case wapas le liya nw u don't wrry sab theek hoga.

Adi quietly stared her mom and said nothing. He just moved towards the car and sat in and they drove off. After reaching home he quietly went to his room without uttering a word, Shagun tried to talk to him but nothing happened. She too gave up as she had to leave for her cards party.

In the eve...(Bhalla House)

Ishita was preparing dinner, while toshiji, Mr Bhalla and her amma appa were talking to each other about the recent event that took place. They all were feeling very guilty for not trusting Raman and felt proud on Ishita as she took the case back because none of them did not wanted adi to be punished. Simmi was getting pissed hearing Ishita's praise but she did not said a word.

Back in the Kitchen Ishita was bit nervous and did not had the courage to say anything. Entire day at the clinic she was having goosebumbs in her stomach. Her moment was stuck there it self when Raman confessed his feelings she was just unable to digest the fact, it was like a dream come true for her as she too had been love with his Ravan Kumar from a long time but did not had the courage to say anything. Ishita was lost in her thoughts when she suddenly heard Ruhi's voice papa aap aa gaye...how was your day. Ishita snapped back herself into reality and wen forward with a glass of water and gave it to Raman.

It was now time for some sorry saying that came from both his and ishita's parents, they were folding there hands but he simply said aapki galti nahin hai maa papa amma apaa jo hua woh hona tha so bhul jaayie mein kal adi ke custody papers daal raha hun hope iss baar mujhe uski custody mil jaaye. Aaplog kisi baat ki tension na le sab theek hoga.

After dinner everyone retired to their room Raman was eagerly waiting for Ishita to come but he knew deep down she won't. finally both Ishita and ruhi entered the room as Ruhi wanted to sleep with her mom and day today. Three of them slept together after ages Raman was happy atleast she was with her he wanted to talk to her but did nt wanted Ruhi to witness their drama so he kept and quiet and tried to get some sleep.

Ishita on the other hand just could not sleep her mind and heart was filled with heavy thoughts finally she gave up and saw both Raman and Ruhi in deep sleep so she decided to go for a walk as she badly needed some fresh air.

She walked out of the house and saw mihir and mihika sitting at the stair case talking she called them yahan kya kar rahe ho itni raat ko

Mihika got startled at her voice and said Akka aap aapne toh dara diya who mujhe neend nahin aa rahi thi isliye main mihir ko bula liya ki hum kuch baatein kar sake.waise aap kya kar rahe ho yahan itni raat ko

Ishita said mujhe bhi neend nahin aa rahi thi so though to get some fresh air.

Mihir said bhabhi aayie na join us chaliye bahar bench par bethte hai

OK chalo said Ishita

Mihir and Mihika saw she was very tensed and lost somewhere in thoughts they both got worried and asked her the reason for the same.

Ishita did not reply for a minute and finally she broke down in tears that she was holding since morning.

Mujhe Raman ki bahut chinta ho rahi hai who kaise tut se gaye hai baar bhi unhone adi ko kho diya toh who bhikar jaayenge kaise sambhalenge who khud mujhe bahut darr lag raha hai unke liye. Maine Raman ko kabhi aise nahin dekha I have always seen him as a strong guy but jab bhi adi ki baat aati hai who weak ho jaate hai mein kya karu kuch samjh mein nahin aa raha.

Mihir consoled her and said bhabhi aap ho na bhai ke paas who nahin tutenge maine dekha hai unhe he really love you aur jab tak aap ho kuch nahin hoga bhai ko trust me.

Ishita simply nodded they sat there for few more minutes finally Ishita got up and said she will go back to Ruhi as she might get scared not finding her there

Mihir suddenly rose and asked her bhabhi kya aap bhai se pyar karte ho

Ishita got startled at this question for a minute she cudnt understand

Mihir again asked her kya aap bhai se sirf isliye naraz the ki unhone accident ka sach nahin bataya ya isliye ki who Shagun ke saath the. Bhabhi aap bhai ke liye jo feel karte ho who hum sabko dhikta hai phir bhi aap apni feeling kyun chupate ho.

Ishita went into a deep thought ki kyun naraz thi woh raman se isliye shaayad Mihir sach keh raha hai ki woh shagun ke saath the isliye

She did nt wanted to answer the ques but still Mihir insisted again and again to her and she confessed...haan mihir I love Raman, nahin acha lagta mujhe jab bhi woh SHagun ke paas jaate hai nahin baant paati mein unhe. I don't know mujhe haq hai ya nahin par Raman I really love him I care for him I cant imagine my life without him bas unse kehne ki himmat nahin mein jaanti hun he loves me too but still iss khamoshi mein ek sukun hai anyways raat bahut ho gayi tum dono jaake so jaao

Akka mein mihir ke saath icecream khane jaau please bahut mann ho raha hai...Said Mihika

Ishita nodded yes and they left. She too started walking towards her home when she saw some and was dumbstruck to find Raman standing near the stairs and with moist eyes.

For a minute she could not speak and had a doubt that he might have heard her talking to MM and confessing her feeling. She simply stood there and stared at Raman. They both had a long eyelock and both could clearly see the feeling of love in each other, the passion the desire to be together but both could not say a word to each other. Finally Raman broke the silence and said he got up for water and did not find her in room so came out for searching her when he saw the main gate opened he thought you might have gone for a walk and came out for searching her.

He said ruhi is calling for you and went in.

Ishita understood that he heard everything but did not say anything and just quietly walked after him. They came back in the room and quietly dozed off.

ADI House

Adi was pacing up and down in his room and could not digest the facts whatever he saw in the court room. He had his phone in his hand which was been gifted by Shagun and Ashok later in the evening to cover up for whatever happened at the court,

But whatever happened at home Adi was simply unable to understand these. He had recorded the entire talk of Ashok Shagun and Param in his new phone and could not get a way to understand any of the talk. He remembered what had happened about an hour ago and though how he recorded everything in his phone.

Recap: Shagun and Ashok dirty plot revelation and Custody Case

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