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Posted: 11 years ago
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This OS Takes place in the Bhalla house right after Ishita and Mrs Bhalla have a heart to heart conversation That mothers and Daughters always have.
Both Mrs Bhalla and Ishita come back home where we see Shagun and Aditya already seated waiting to leave for wherever Raman has arranged for a holiday for them Raman is inside packing for himself and Ruhi with a heavy heart he knows his actions are not justified and for the love of his son He's hurting the one women who completes his life.
Mrs Bhalla enters the house hand in hand with her daughter in law , a girl that she has grown to love and admire and a girl who is now her daughter ,as dear to her as her own children are.
Mrs Bhalla ignoring both Shagun and Aditya present in the drawing room calls out for all of her family to come out citing an important announcement to be made We see everyone including Raman come out of there respective rooms ,By this time The Iyers have also arrived with Bala Vandu and Mihir
Raman has a guilty look on his face and has a constant gaze at the broken face of his wife,
Mrs Bhalla: Aaaj main kuch bolne waali hun aur koi bhi mere khilaaf nahin bolega samjhe aap log?
Aaaj main yeh kehti hu Ki Ishita ab se yeh ghar mein nahin rahegi aur na Raman ke saath rahegi.
Every body is shocked out of there wits while Shagun has a smirk on.
Mr Bhalla and Raman : Aaap yeh kya kehrahi hain Mumma/Toshiji
Mrs Bhallah : Koi beech mein nahin bolega.
Bhallaji aapne mujhe Bahut kuch diya hain ghar bacche sab lekin aapne ek cheez is ghar ko dhoond kar di hain jiskeliye jitna shukriya kiya jaaye utna kam hain aur woh hain meri Beti meri Ruhi ki maaa Ishita.
(Ishita looks on with moist eyes,While everybody else is listenting intenty)
Yeh jo Ishita hain na ishita isse accha koi ho hi nahin sakta isse acchi aur bahadur bacchi main ne kabhi nahin dekhi logon ka khayal unse pyaar aur apnapan is bachii se zyaada koi nahin karsakta, Bhalla ji jo yeh mera puttar Raman hain na mujhe lagta tha yeh is duniya ka sabse sona munda hain koi bi ladhki iske layak nahin hain lekin mainn galat thi mera beta sabse accha nahin hain mera beta ek kamzor aur laachar pita hain aur ek bahut bura pati hain jo chup chup se dusri auraton se milta hain aur us biwi jisne hamesha iska saath diya iski zindagi ko sawaara us biwi ko thukraakaris daayan ke saath kahin ab bahar jaarahan hain " Everybody is shocked and Raman has a downcast expression on his face"
Isliye main aaj meri beti ki maan banke yeh faisla karti hun ki Raman Ishita ko deserve nahin karta Main ab apni beti ki khushi chati hun Aur uski khushi ek aise aadmi se jo uspe bharosa nahin karta jo usse cheezen chupata hain usse door rehne mein hain isliye ishita ab se apne ghar rahegi aur ek aur baat Ishita KI beti Ruhi uske saath rahegi.
Everybodyis shocked out of there wits Raman looks broken while everybody else is now looking towards him with accusing eyes.
Bala :Ishita jaake apna samaan pack karo
Mrs Iyer : Samdhan ji thank you aaj apne sabko baata diya ki bahu bhi beti jaise hoti hain very great
Looks at Raman and says Ayyo Raman tum to mere bete jaise the na? Phir meri Beti ko hi itna dard diya? Kyun? Ab meri Ishu yahan ek pal bhi nahin rahegi Ishu jao aur samaan pack Karo
Ishita not knowing what to do goes Inside with Raman following her
Raman : Ishita tum nahin jaa sakti! Ruhi ka kya hoga! Iss ghar ka kya hoga? MERA kya hoga?
Ishita : Aap ne suna nahin? Ruhi mere saath rahegi! Iss ghar ke log mere apne hain aur inka khayal main hamesha rakhungi!
Jahatak aapka sawaal hain main aapki lagti kaun hun?
Hearing this come out of the women he now realized he has fallen in love with is all it takes for Raman to feel shattered
To be continued

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its good... Pls continue...
Hope something like this happens in the show...
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Very nice plz continue soon...
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omg fab fab start...plz continue soon n pm me too plz
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Fab start
Pls pm me on ur update
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Nice start plz conitnue it soonish :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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👏 Toshiji tussi cha gaye.Wah ji wah maza aa gaya.loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome os...verry well written!!
Update soon plz!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Raman : Ishita tum nahin jaa sakti! Ruhi ka kya hoga! Iss ghar ka kya hoga? MERA kya hoga?
Ishita : Aap ne suna nahin? Ruhi mere saath rahegi! Iss ghar ke log mere apne hain aur inka khayal main hamesha rakhungi!
Jahatak aapka sawaal hain main aapki lagti kaun hun?

GREAT GREAT GREAT 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing start
Loved it
Please continue soon
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