SS: Vishwas pyar ki Buniyad hai

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Ishitha is torn because of Raman's lies. He recollects yesterday's message and the morning incident sitting in the dinning table of bhalla house. She is very hurt. She is thinking to herself must I question raman or not.

Romi walks into home. He seeks to speak to her.

Ro: Bhabhi mujje app se Baat karne hai

I: Bolo Romi.

Ro: Mane ajj jo dekha , mujje bhut bura laga. Who bahi uss Shagun ke saath resturent me mele the. Mujje un dono ko saath me dekhkar bhut bura laga.

I: Almost tears in her eyes. Tik hai romi mai Bhai se puchunge. Who Adhi ka kuch kaam hoga, issliye mile honge. Tum tension math loo.

Ro: Tik hai bhabhi.

Ishitha is deeply hurt by Raman's behavior. She decides to call Mihir and understand if Raman had come to office or was out the whole day.

M: hello Bhabi bolo.

I: Hi mihir, kaise ho. Bass bhut din hogaya issiliye call kiya. Why don't you come home today?

M: Bhabhi , bhai is not there whole day today. He had an importatnt meeting with a client. So I have to manage in the office. I will come tomorrow or day after

I: Ok Mihir. Take care.

Now ishitha understands that raman has not gone to office. She was feeling weird. Why am I feeling bad if he meets Shagun. Iam after all Ruhi's Mom. If he meets any girl and does anything in what way must I be concered. She thinks probably iam in love with raman. But does raman really loves Shagun. How can this be? In the mean time her eyes fall on Sid's photo in her mobile. When Ruhi was seeing this photo raman got angry. Ruhi said its Adhi bhiya's car. Shagun said she is thankful as he helped her. Raman is very upset from last evening. She puts all the dots togather and her jaagga jassus mind thinks, kehi aiysa toh nehi ki Adhi ne yeh accident kiya. That's why probably Raman is in dialemma as to do what and shaken.

As far as I know Raman it's the case. Woh wait an min. He was calling patak last night.

She calls up patak and forces him to tell the truth. He tells her that Shagun did it and Raman for his son's sake is doing this. Ishitha remembers how shagun looked at her in morning victoriously. She thinks to herself. I will not leave this shagun trouble ramana nd take advantage of Raman's Weekness( Adhi)

She calls up the police station and gets back the complient. The inspecter informs ramana nd in the meantime Raman also being informed by patak. Raman feels bad that he hid the truth from ishitha. He knew she was a matured lady and he heeded to Shagun's demad and hid the truth. Raman lashes at Shagun who is with him and says how great his wife is and insults her. Adhi who is listening to this tells Raman that he did the accident and not to scold his mother. Raman is shattered and leaves theplace without saying anything. He is surpised by the difference between the two women in his life and the way they are bringing his children up. He decides to quickly go and meet Ishitha.

When he reaches home ishitha is in ruhi's room, helping her out on her school work. He calls out for her.

R: Ishitha mereliye chai lana

I: Neelu Didi Raman chai mag rahe hai app dedo mai busy hun.

Raman is desperately waiting for Ishitha but is irritated seeing neelu getting his tea. He doesn't say anything. He is waiting for the dinner time t be over and get a lone time with ishitha. She comes to their room he calls her out.

R: Ishitha , who Iam sorry for hiding the truth from you.

Before Raman could proceed further Ishitha cuts him cross and replies

I: Who Mr Bhalla, You know your Mrs Shagun Bhalla was always right. She used to call me Ruhi's ayah. That's true. But it was my mistake that I crossed my limits and started assuming myself to be her mother, the DIL of this house over and above all ur wife. Iam sorry from my grave mistake and will ensure I stay in the place that I deserve. Shadhi ka buniyad vishwas hota hai, jo hum dono me nehi hai. Toh there is no meaning in suatining this relationship.

R: ishitha listen to me

I: You know what nanay's of the kid do not deserve to listen t the truth. From today iam only for Ruhi and other family members and I do not have any relation with you. I will sleep also with ruhi. This room is all yours. You have the free will and wish to do anything here. I will not lecture you or tell you anything. Iam sorry mr bhalla, iam getting late for my stipulated job of nanny to make Ruhi Sleep execuse me.

Saying so she leaves the room leaving raman dumbstruck.

Part 2:

Raman trying to speak to ishitha. Not getting any lone time with her.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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I want to see this side of ishita...please continue soon.


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awsum start
i like ishita's outburst
update soon
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Very nice start continue soon..
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Awn would love to see how raman will. Pacify his wifey
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Amazing update please make is longer
Loved the wrirting
Update super soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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yaay u r back with another story...just loved loved the 1st chap...waitin for part 2
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Its next morning, Raman was up till late in the night as he couldn't sleep because of the turmoil he had. Also the day before also he had not slept. This made him tired and he slept till late in the morning. When he got up he found that Ishu and Ruhi have already left home. He was disaapointed not to have met his wife and daughter.

He calls Ishu, she doesn't pick his call.He mutters to himself yeh janshi ki Rani ne toh hadtal shuru kardiya hai. Issko Jassa kiyse doon.He knew this time tamil speech, dosa, icecreame, affoz mango nothing will work. Ishu was upset beyond limits. Raman thinks for a while and then goes to amma and appa.

R: Namste appa and amma.

Amma & Appa: Come Raman come in. They aprently don't know that details. Ishitha had not told anything to them. Raman is astonished by their sweet behavior. He understands that ishitha did not tell them anything.

R: Appa and amma. Iam very sorry. I had hid the truth that Adhi did amma's accident.

Both are shocked. Raman narrates everything and his argument with Ishu aswell. He says Adhi is his weekness and he was sorry for his behavior.

Appa & Amma: Its ok Raman. You did so much for us. Adhi is also our grandson, so its fine, We will not what to punish him.

R: Amma Iam glad that you people forgave me. Please help me win over ishu. I really cannot take this version of Ishu.

They agree and ask sometime so that they can think through whats to be done.

Its evening, raman is back from office soon and looking for Ishitha. She is sourrounded by everyone. He curses his fate and goes to his room. He thinks for a while and shouts for Ishitha. But she doesn't come. He is surprised when his mom comes. Aparently Ishitha's parents have told everything to Bhalla's and Mr Bhalla decided to support Ishitha in boycotting Raman and all others also plan to support. He wants to spend time with Ishu and speak to her, but he was not getting any lone time. The family members were consistently talking to her and engageing her.

Mrs bhalla: Kya hai Raman puttar , bolo.

R: Maa mai toh ishitha ko bula raha than a.

M bh: Toh mereko bol na who kitchen may busy hai.

R: Kuch nehi maa, mujje use se kam tha. Mai bad me puch letha hu.

Its dinner time. They have made all raman's favorite dishes, but Ishitha is not serving him only. She is talking to everyone in a most cordial manner and literally ignoring him. Mrs Bhalla is asking him for what he wants and he doesn't give a proper reply. Everyone go to bed. Raman is waiting for Ishu in his room and she is not to be seen at all. He comes out to see all of them retired to their respective rooms. He is wondering where is Ishitha and returns to his room. He reailizes that Ishitha's cloths suitcase was missing and he remembers what she said last night.He now realizes that she was very serious this time. He is missing her in each and everything. Her nok jok, her lectures, her sweet gestures etc. He decides to go to Ruhi's room and sleep.

He enters Ruhi's room. Ishu is telling her a story. She stops seeing Raman.

Ru: Papa, app soye nehi. Ishi ma ke bina need nehi aa raha hai kya.

R: Ha beta. App done ke bina mujje need nehi aaraha hai. Mai yehah soo javu.

Ru: yeh yeh papa bhi hamre saath soyege.

Ishitha ia irked by this. However for Ruhi's sake she keeps quite.

R: Kya story sunn rahe ho Ruhi. They have a chant and afte the story they all lie down and Ruhi entangles Ishu and Raman's hand. Ishu is not very happy about it. She is not able to sleep due to his touch. Raman observes his touch affecting her and wants to play with her so that she will be forces to speak to him. Suddenly Raman yells Aah. Ishitha is perplexed but doesn't ask him anything.

Ru: papa kya hua.

R: Mere back me bohut dard ho raha hai.

Ru: papa , Ishima appko balm laga dengi.

I: Nehi ruhi, yeh lo Balm appke papa ko kud lagane ko bolo.

R: Ishitha mera haath nehi pohunchega. Please tum lagavo na.saying so he removes his shirt. Ishitha is getting affected seeing his shirtless. But she is trying to ignore it.

Ru: Ishima app papa ka help karo. App hi toh kehthe ho sabhi ka help karna chahiye.

Meantime Ruhi runs to meet Mrs Bhalla, as she hears her voice in the living room. Raman quickly grabs Ishitha's hand.

R: Ishu iam sorry. Please listen to me. Mujje maaf kardo. I was wromg, mujje tumse kuch hide nehi karna tha. Iam sorry.

I: Mr Bhalla, why are u saying sorry to your daughter's nany. Nanny doesn't need sorry from her boss.

R: Ishu please, tik hai, tumm mujje yeh balm to lagavo. Ma tumhe utne time me samjatha hu.

I: Don't fake of pain Mr Bhalla. Please ask ur Mrs Shagun Bhalla to apply blam on your back. Iam only your daughter's nanny, not ur wife.

R: Please janshi ki Rani, mujje talwar se mardo, liken mujjse door mat javo yar.

I: Who am I to do all that Mr Bhalla.

R: Mr Bahlla ki bachi, abhi bathatha hun. He pulls her on the bed.

He is lying down and Ishu is over him. There is a very close proximity and he is shirtless. Its affecting Ishu. They have an eyelock. But Ishitha quickly gets back to her senses and jerks him off.

I: Mr Bhalla, Iam your nanny. If you behave with me like this it will be treated as domestic violence, please behave yourself. Iam not complienting considering Ruhi. Saying so she leaves the room looking for Ruhi.

Raman is shocked by ishitha's behavior. He is unable to bear she is drifting away from him.

Part 3: Ishitha's birthday. Raman trying to woo her

Edited by NithyaLaks - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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omgg i am so lovin this desperate Raman n how Ishu is givin Raman tough time...this is wht i wanna see in show too..!!

awesome update...waitin for part 3
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesumm updatee!!! poorr raman.. im loving this new track!! serial mei God knows, what they are trying to do!!
well.. amazingg update as alwys.. plsss keepp continuingg.. plss PM me.. thnku

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